Does Practicing Qigong Increase Your Understanding? Start with Basic Martial Arts

In summary, it was written very stupidly. First, the author's background is very funny. A direct descendant of a wealthy family was secretly working for several years by a fiancée who was not married and relied on the protagonist's family. This direct descendant of a wealthy family didn't know anything about it. Is this family dead? Second, pretending to be a pig, and then watching the family gods and demons give away a bunch of resources is not as good as the protagonist. Even the resources used by the protagonist are less than one-tenth of those of these people in a month. (It is recommended that this plot be modified) Thirdly, Goldfinger's description is not good. If you want to write a story that feels exciting, the protagonist must have something to do and improve at all times. Comprehension plug-ins must always be improved. Rather than being a deus ex machina. It is necessary to continue to practice martial arts in middle school. Even just describing it.

When I first saw the family of gods and demons, I thought they were awesome, but after two chapters they became even more powerful. Their appearance was totally unworthy of these two words 🤐

How to say it? It feels like the author lived 10 years ago, and this is a book written 10 years ago

I've tried it, and it's a lot of poison. I suggest you run away.

Why doesn't the protagonist feel comfortable having cheats?

Cool! You don't have to upgrade too quickly. It's best to enrich the details. Writing fantasy and upgrading quickly may not necessarily be fun. You have to pay attention to foreshadowing the enemy. Killing trash is no fun.

What is the author doing? It's just like writing an outline. You don't see any of the protagonist's growth process, so the excitement is gone. There is only the plot. Ignoring the protagonist's growth process is impossible to enjoy. This kind of cheat is to watch the protagonist grow little by little by relying on the cheat. As a result, the protagonist's growth and upgrade process only contains the sentence "A few years have passed, and my realm has reached this point." It is better to write that the protagonist's understanding has improved by ten points, and then practice a skill to reflect a little growth. This cycle continues to be more enjoyable than the plot written by the author.

Stop writing about the author, and read more books of the same type. See which author is like you, and how depressing the protagonist is from a good starting point, especially Fang Wei, who speaks as if the protagonist is her licking dog.

Author, you can't let the main character have a god-and-demon father as his backer.

Looking forward to seeing the red fruit 🙂

Isn't physical training already acquired? Why do we have to break through acquired skills in the new chapter?

There are hints of Manghuang Ji, but the plot rhythm... I can only say that it is not easy to write a cool novel.

No more updates. Is it broken? It looks like the writing is pretty good.

②Fortunately, although his talent is average, his family background is good... The order of related words is inappropriate. "Fortunately" should be deleted and put before him.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

I skipped some chapters without affecting the continuity of the plot at all. 🙂

It's not that simple to write cool articles

Two whole chapters, all nonsense, that's it?