The Spiritual Master of the Elven World

I haven't read more than 200 chapters so far. The low-level elf novel written by the author before was quite good in my impression, so I remember this author. The first problem with this novel now is that the author cannot write a psychologist well. The label psychologist has been quite popular recently, so To be considered more handsome, he is said to be a psychologist, but my expectation of a good psychologist in a novel would be a mysterious riddler who is more philosophical and literary, saying some appropriate and unclear words and some psychological terminology, which may be abstract, but I am not really here to study psychology. Intellectual, right, as long as he is handsome enough, but the author is not capable of writing with the delicate writing style of a philosophical literary youth. In just twenty or thirty chapters, the flavor of a psychologist is completely gone, and what is left is the old flavor of a cool novel. In addition, the second most serious problem at present is that there is nothing new in the plot, not that it is just water. It's because of the serious homogenization of routines. The label of "The Master of Mind" in this book is considered useless. It has no other characteristics. It has no plot and no entertainment. It has a serious and boring feeling. There is no innovation in tactics. It is barely qualified in terms of emotions. Although the pace is okay, it is not as good as the previous book. I will give it three and a half stars out of five.

Based on stories such as "The Classic of Mountains and Seas", "The Book of Divine Miracles", "Natural History", and "Ten Continents", we create the "Elven Literature" of Chinese mythology. Arzeus - Pangu, The Three Dragons of Time, Space and Destruction - Taiqing, Yuqing, Shangqing, Kyogre, Groudon, Rayquaza - Gonggong, Zhurong, Zulong, Feng King - Yuanfeng, Lugia - Kunpeng, Chaomeng-Fuxi, Dream-Nuwa, ... Other "elves". Mythical beasts (first-level gods), fairy beasts (phantom beasts), holy beasts (third-level gods). Emperor beasts (quasi-gods), mysterious beasts (Yu Sanjia), spirit beasts (ordinary elves) Middle-earth nine states: Yuzhou, Qingzhou, Xuzhou, Yangzhou, Jingzhou, Liangzhou, Yongzhou, Jizhou, Yanzhou. Ten continents and three islands: Yingzhou, Xuanzhou, Changzhou, Liuzhou, Yuanzhou, Shengzhou, Zuzhou, Yanzhou, Fenglinzhou, Jukuzhou; Penglai, Fangzhang, Kunlun. …… Other areas.

Brothers, is there anyone who is physically stronger than Pokémon, who can defeat Pokémon with great strength and finally conquer them? Children want to see this kind of thing 😃

Is there a protagonist who is very strong and can defeat Pokémon and collect them? I want to see this kind of thing.

Dawu is the true love, and the Pokémon Doctor is the true body

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Come on💪

Yes, yes

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I think this novel could be about some academy battles, such as a regional academy competition, or about the protagonist going to places like Viridian Forest to train in order to improve his ability as a trainer. It might be better. It could also be about traveling to other areas, feeling the customs, and seeing new Pokémon. Don't just limit it to daily life, write more about battles and adventures.

Personal opinion: After reading part of it, the main contradiction is that the more I read, the less I can remember it, because I have read Teacher Lu's book three times. The setting of this book is too repetitive. The same poor male protagonist earns the money of the original boss in order to raise Pokémon, the same dirty game routine from the beginning, the same Gengar independently learns and teaches other Pokémon, and the same is appreciated by Sakaki and teaches Team Rocket's transformation concept. The key point is that Sirona's ambiguity is inexplicable. It's the same as Gengar's shoulder-to-shoulder kiss and Ice Vulpix acting cute. However, Teacher Lu is responsible for showing Sirona the cuteness of Fairy Eevee. Ice Vulpix also eats it inexplicably. Teacher Lu has a cautious character. He never explains your tactical level in battle, but always suppresses tactics or reads first. Teacher Lu at least has a high-ranking online game as a foreshadowing, and there is no foreshadowing for cooking. Suddenly, Being able to capture Sirona's appetite, the spiritual master is unprofessional and far-fetched. Including picking up Sirona for the first time, the driver's misunderstanding was exactly the same as Mr. Lu's. The little blacksmith and the stupid young man just didn't care about anything and just did whatever they wanted. This can be explained by being born. The key point was that I had been training with hammers and then suddenly a section of dumbbell training. Maybe I was influenced by Teacher Lu's book and couldn't read this one, but the writing is really not as good as it is. The copying is really stiff and illogical, and the male protagonist seems more childish. Apart from liking Pokémon, his other characteristics are not outstanding. At first, I thought these Pokémon were quite interesting, especially those with Gengar. Yes, I can already see that I have copied a lot of details of Teacher Lu's settings. I thought I would check if there were other interesting settings and different developments. If the results were the same, I would give badges to them and practice secretly in the middle of the night. Apart from the hypnosis of the old Jing family, I really don't have much of my own that can be remembered. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

When I saw 255, I couldn't stand it anymore. Friends who like daily life can try this book, I highly recommend it. But forget it if you don't have such a love for daily life. This book is too daily. There are no ups and downs in daily life. I have good feelings, good feelings, good feelings, and then win, win, win, win. The first hundred or so books are returned, and the rest feel like they are repeating the previous structure, a running account over and over again. This kind of winning is not about hard work. The protagonist just lies there, waiting for all kinds of adventures and his own Pokémon to take him flying. At first, I still had some expectations, thinking that there would be some suspense. I think there is some height difference after all, but no, the protagonist's 90-degree angle keeps rising, and everything except crushing is crushing. Maybe some people will say: "Isn't there also a hard fight?" Question, is a hard fight without suspense still a hard fight? These Pokémon at my disposal are also beyond genius. Geniuses are so talented that they only need basic exercises to be able to kill people at the same level. It's nothing. Everyone works together to grow, unforgettable hard work, sweat, and some of it. Every time you squat down, you'll be kaka, and then kaka will win, and you'll win. If you want to ask what the advantages are, it is warm. It is not the kind of warmth where everyone experiences ups and downs and enjoys the warmth together, but a bunch of dicks get together, where they rub each other against each other, and then sigh that the world is so beautiful! There is no real feeling, beauty for the sake of beauty, just vain. I am also a long-time reader and have read two books. I can only say that I understand and sincerely wish the author to continue on the path he has chosen for a long time.

It really feels like a pity, so let's really get the two of them together this time 😆

Teacher Ge was also a decent person before, how could he be so confused😰

Sirona

In fact, I can understand that the author wants to write a novel with the same daily and warm style as Mr. Lu's Pokémon fan novel, because I also like this kind of daily life where humans and Pokémon get along. But the writing in this book is so similar that I think it was Teacher Lu who opened a trumpet and wrote it. Not to mention the plot arrangement, key organizations and nodes, there are a lot of special words and sentences from Teacher Lu in the article, which give people the feeling of watching Teacher Lu again, and the character traits of the protagonist have been forced to move closer to that direction. If the author just wants to write a fanfic about Teacher Lu that is different but roughly the same, I have nothing to say.

I was a little disappointed after reading more than sixty chapters. The main reason is that the low-level trainers were so amazing to me at first. This book suddenly started to follow the same routines as other similar works, but it didn't feel like it. The whole process was just about how to use routines to show off. There was no freshness. The process of training elves was basically missing. How Gengar and Vulpix are geniuses and powerful, how to kneel and lick the Dodo after realizing it, there are a lot of these kind of routine plots. There is still a lot of subjective content that I want to say, but I won't say it for fear that someone will criticize me and influence the author's creation. I feel that the author can write better. I don't know why I fell into this kind of routine article, which greatly disappoints the readers who have read the bottom trainer. That giant sting wasp has amazed me for a whole year, and it also made seven or eight bookworms fall into the book.

Pokémon is your only destination😁😁

Sirona

Don't say I was forced to wash it. I just complained and couldn't stand Lu Chui. A brainless Dihuawen really has nothing to brag about. As for why I posted it here, I didn't post it to them. The nature is different, just seeing these guys unhappy makes them complain. Wouldn't it be a good idea to start a group if you run to the base camp opposite? The nature is different. You can scold the author if you want. Teacher Lu is already popular, and in the fandom, it is impossible for the author not to know about him. Not to avoid suspicion, he acts as a Gengar himself. And everyone knows the common things. I wrote and wrote, but there was nothing to write about. The author himself doesn't have the courage to create anything new. For those who have read the previous book, it is obvious that the author is resting on his laurels. These are the characters that often appear. Even the battle and system are still relying on the previous one. To begin with, there is no difference in what tmd writes. What's more, the previous book obviously had an emotional scene with Sirona, but it was kept going on and on, trying to whet the appetite of readers who wanted to write it or not. If they didn't finish it, they would be scolded.

Emmmmm It is indeed the same as what some book friends said It looks very much like Teacher Lu The kind that prefers daily life But emmmmm The "Psychological Master" in the title of the book is only in the first hundred chapters? A closer description appears In the future, the psychological masters will probably only have "hypnosis" and the manipulation of "dreams" based on known plots Other psychology no longer exists I saw the author writing a summary at the end of the text saying that because he wrote too many psychological terms, it was too professional, so he revised it and the update was slow At the time, I thought it was pretty good, at least not so brain-burning But the author didn't seem to have a good control It felt like he was not revising one or two chapters but the overall outline The second half of the book was basically free of "psychology" The more interesting "online psychological consultation room" was described earlier Don't talk about making one offline in the following article There is no one online Secondly, the author seems to have poor control of the rhythm The timeline of the Pokémon world itself seems to be completely confused In the "online psychological consultation room", I was too eager emmmm Introducing supporting characters Mewtwo, Sirona, Natsu, Giratina, Kojiro, Sakaki, N... If it was just these few originally The author's balance was pretty good He did write a relatively matching rhythm arrangement But in the later period, the author couldn't figure it out N is gone Fradali, who is still in the process of transformation, has no influence The final weapon will be activated in the next moment The short-lived dream monster has only one Pokémon in need of help It is not so much a foreshadowing It is better to say that the author is writing randomly The author does not know why in the later period In the daily text, the protagonist is allowed to compete in the league competition If he only fights Once It was considered an adjustment in life The result was the second time. Everyday and unusual Psychological and non-psychological Hot-blooded but not hot-blooded From an everyday article that could be recommended as food and fodder to a nondescript, food-for-food It's a pity that it's tasteless and useless And the author's arrangement of the timeline is cruel In the first few chapters, he said that he didn't know whether it was Xiao Chi or Xiao Zhi In the next few chapters, Qinglu and Xiao Zhi appeared together Then Xiao Chi was probably there too In the first few chapters, it was said that Xiaozhi was probably not born In the next few chapters, Xiaozhi is already seven or eight years old and is about to go on a trip Your big brother is still in school Dakdo has completely met the protagonist in the alliance

Why are urban Pokémon like this? They always get involved with some big shots, and then look humble, and often use some advanced breeding methods, and then the breeding costs are ridiculously high. When writing about daily life, write more about the daily life with Pokémon. It's really uncomfortable to watch like a pug next to big shots all day long.

Does this book have many descriptions of PVP tactics? I found that many authors in Qidian do not write such content. Instead, they like to write the skills of elves as if they were cultivators, weakening the characteristics and skill effects of the elves, and turning them into gun battles. Obviously, the first person to write this was Mr. Lu from Qidian. Unfortunately, Mr. Lu's book had too many Bendi-based plots. I thought it was interesting at first, but later I found it very retarded, and the emotional scenes were also awkward.

Didn't you also delete the comments? How can I say that you plagiarized? ? ? You are the stitched version of Teacher Lu and Schiller ("The Days of Being a Spiritual Mentor in Marvel").

Little Blacksmith

Why don't people who write about Elf fandom like to write about Kirby?

Lu's book is not good either. There are too many poison points in the early and middle stages. It only gets better after the battle of gods begins. But this book is even more outrageous. The poison points are copied. It is even more outrageous than Lu's. Then I want to ask you, don't you know that people are popular?

I said something before that was very similar to another book, so I was banned for 50 years. Why is it that everyone in the comment area is saying this now? It's not sealed, so I brought a small account here to take a look

It can be said objectively that the outline of this book is basically the same as that of Mr. Lu You can say that it is a coincidence. After all, there is no way to refute it. You have a book of about 4 million words, but you don't even have a reflection after finishing it. I don't know if it is because of a guilty conscience, but you banned it very quickly. A book of 4 million words, even if you copy it word for word for 200,000 words, there is no way to determine whether it is plagiarism, let alone the style and character description. Controversial Point 1. Regarding the creation of Geng Gui, the way of getting along with Geng Gui, including tongue licking, paralysis, etc. During the Ghost period, coupled with the emphasis on hypnosis, and the hypnosis of the old Jing family, I subjectively think that the author wanted to write something of his own, but unfortunately, he failed. In addition, regarding the ghost stone period, we can once again attribute the licking of the inner section of the poisonous orb to coincidence. But is there something too coincidental in the way you handle it? In terms of promoting the storyline, they all pursue an ordinary life → Forced to train Pokémon for some reasons (I have to say that the author's writing is too rigid. If you say there is no trace of imitation in this aspect, I don't know if you will laugh) → Emphasis on how expensive training resources are → People around you are disenchanted (I reacted to it the first time I read it. In fact, training Gengar It's not just Grandma Juzi who can be picked up. If you really want to avoid suspicion, it's better to change someone.) → Invincible flow The author wanted to write a different story and added a setting of Gengar sleeping for thousands of years, but he lost his memory inexplicably (I really want to ask what is the use of adding such an additional setting) Controversy point 2. Regarding the characterization of the protagonist, I can't think of anything like Lu Yezhen. It is true that the author of this book has put a lot of effort into the protagonist. The setting of the psychology teacher is very novel, but there is also confusion in thinking. You are traveling through the world of Pokémon, but at the same time you master the abilities of the original owner, and it is not like the system tree fruit stand next door. Many things seem very stiff, but the early dialogue with Chaomeng is a highlight for my interpretation of 3. In addition, the setting of using energy cubes/food to buy Pokémon is too common in PM articles, so this is not considered plagiarism. The part about py mythical beasts and how to get along with Giratina can be regarded as original by me, because this is really not the content of Mr. Lu's internal book. It was copied from another article, and it is basically not bad at all. Controversial point 3. Regarding the creation of Pokémon, I am too lazy to complain about Gengar. If you read the two books about Gengar together, I feel that they are both confusing enough to distinguish them. Ice Vulpix = Fairy Eevee's appearance + Fairy Eevee's arrogant character + Fairy Eevee's stronger character + Fairy Eevee's way of getting along with the trainer + Part of the caution of Blastoise + Part of the setting of abandoned Pokémon + The problem of poachers that often appears in PM stories. I think the Great Blacksmith is an original creation that the author wanted to write. If it is more serious, it has the feeling of Xiaogang Xiaofudan, and the feeling of Wind Speed Dog Charcoal Waiter = Blastoise's resource consumption (water stone is replaced by charcoal) + Pokémon Master's character creation of the elf in the book, there are really no gaps Controversy point 4. Playing the baby cup, this is really nothing. PM text + Dihua will definitely happen, but why did the author write Dihua? It is a coincidence. And the protagonist Pokémon goes to special training in the middle of the night to find wild Pokémon. This is also a coincidence. It is also a coincidence that the author specially wrote about the decoration team. I really can't stand it. He wanted to write about the decoration team but was afraid of being too obvious Controversy point 5. The heroine Sirona, there is no need to say this. The heroine in the PM article is very popular, but the emotional line is really poorly handled and intense. The reactions of Biting Land Shark and Lucario to the protagonist also have a sense of déjà vu Summary: I always feel an inexplicable sense of familiarity after reading this novel. I just saw the inside of Vulpix and I actually guessed her character. I am also pretty good haha. Welcome to see me for predictions haha. I have many doubts as I have a lot of déjà vu. The best way to resolve doubts is for the author to at least write a closing speech. This is respect for the readers and respect for yourself. I wonder if you still remember the first book you wrote. Many people write in the comment area to survive. This is not the reason for you to mess around. Stitch Monster's business writing method may have guaranteed results, but you really don't care about popularity. I guess you may have opened a small account now, but if the background does not change, no matter how long it takes, there will be no big results The above is purely a personal opinion. I am not involved in any debate about plagiarism or not. It is just a statement of subjective ideas. If you think there is something wrong with what I said, you are right. Don't blame me for scolding you if you dare to say it here. It doesn't matter whether the trumpet is blocked or not, but don't feel bad if I scold you

Can you go back and write about low-level trainers? I really beg you. This is a complete mess 😰