Family Cultivation: Li's Evergreen

The author's writing is still good, but he may lack experience and it always feels unrealistic. For example, as the core member of a family with hundreds of thousands of members, the male protagonist always lives a shabby life, and his affairs are always less well-organized than those of casual cultivators. No matter how declining the protagonist's family is, it is much better than the Jia family in Dream of Red Mansions. Why is the treatment worse than that of a casual cultivator? Where are the servants, where are the maids? This world of cultivating immortals is not as good as the White Camel Villa, Mingjian Villa, Shenjian Villa and other Jianghu forces in the world of martial arts, or even worse than the situation of ordinary wealthy people.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

The dialogue feels a bit more plain, and the description is more ancient, which is good, but this dialogue is a bit too stereotyped. Ancient people's daily speech was not so refined 😁

Come on, you write well, better than me! Love to watch😍

Watching this reminds me of the twelve ancestral witches of the witch clan in the ancient novel.

I like some points, such as the gold finger is not outstanding, the two spiritual roots, the cute little spider, and the family unity and friendship, etc., But the plot is too slow, white and watery, the combat power system is not clear enough, and the character creation is not reasonable enough. I don't know if he is a novice author, but the ideas are okay, but the writing is not very good, and the system is not very clear. A family meeting. I hope the author writes better and better.

How many times has the Li family worn the Immortal Cultivation Vest?

It's okay, at least there's nothing poisonous about it, and the writing is good, but it's just a bit watery.

The main character is weak, there is no golden finger, the family is beaten, the feeling is 0, the literary talent is okay, the family loves each other, and works hard.