Something's Not Right with This Blue Dragon

There is nothing sinister about it, and it can be seen that the author writes seriously. I have read more than 40 chapters, and it seems that Long's writing is quite satisfactory. I can only sigh: It is too difficult to write a good dragon essay. 1. You can only write according to the dnd-like framework, otherwise too many people will complain that this is not a dragon. The behavior patterns of creatures in the DND-like world are basically preset. You can know what a person will do when you see his race and occupation, so it is actually difficult to excel in the portrayal of various characters. 2. The world of the novel must be interesting and rich in various elements. But dnd itself is a numerical-based world framework. When writing, it is necessary to fill in various elements such as the language and culture of the described world, customs, social customs, class relations, production models, economic operations, etc. It is difficult for the elements you imagine to withstand logical reasoning and be recognized by most readers. Many novels simply lack these elements, so many dragon novels look dry. It is true that the description of social background and the image of various supporting characters are solidified. The excitement of the novel can only be found in the novelty of the plot and plug-ins. However, as mentioned before, the fixed framework and lack of elements make it difficult for the plot to stand out. In a word, dragon writing is difficult to write, so cheers for the author!

It has nothing to do with this book. I read a lot of DND dragon articles and then read the comments. To be honest, I didn't fully understand that writing DND must be written according to racial characteristics. People have different personalities because of their environment and experiences. All other species cannot be the same. Isn't inheritance the same as education? I've read many books about dwarves and there have been various characters. Goblins can also be brave. Every race has a different character. Even the indigenous dragons have different habits and characters. And the protagonist dragon can't do it. The five-color dragon has to have that habit. This is very confusing. You want to say that dragons other than the protagonist have different habits and you think it conflicts with the setting. I think it makes sense, but the conflict between the protagonist and the setting habits actually doesn't make sense. It's the other way around... Moreover, what I still don't understand is why the time traveler is assimilated by the dragon's habits, not that the time traveler's soul and personality are stronger. No matter how many years and strong his inheritance and bloodline are, to the time traveler, isn't it just a record on paper? A piece of paper can be kneaded as much as you want, it is a high-definition paper. It was natural to have that habit after traveling through the past. I didn't feel anything was wrong. I just talked about the riot in my bloodline and did it without thinking at all. I just took the name of a time traveler and then did what the natives did. It was very confusing and incomprehensible, so I stopped reading a lot of dragon articles after reading them for a while. While using the farming experience before time travel, while doing what the natives do, it is very disconnected. When developing power, the habitual character suddenly disappears, and then disappears again in normal times.

After looking at it, it's okay. But remember to be careful of the Dark Elf. Be careful of the Lucky Guy. Collect the Red Fat Dragon of the Underdark.

After reading the first three chapters, the plot was okay. The writing was average, not particularly good, but not too bad either. It was enjoyable to watch.

Let's talk about this book. There are some shortcomings, such as it is too bland, not refreshing enough, and has typos and missing sentences. But the advantages are also obvious. The description of the world view is more "generous". Many other dragon novels always give me the feeling of village battles and pond fights. With tens of thousands of people at every turn, a major city is second to none, and the country has thousands of soldiers. It seems really unreasonable. In ancient my country, there were many big cities with a population of one million. At that time, there was no technology and magic. It is clear that the original DND worldview includes the entire universe, with interstellar empires and starships fighting each other, but I just don't understand why other authors always like to write about cavalry charging on horseback, cutting each other with cold weapons, and legion-style magic battles that are simply long-range artillery. They also always like to develop technology in other worlds, and "AK" has been seen to kill a large number of people. To be honest, a force field magic already involves space. No matter how powerful the nuclear bomb is, it cannot destroy space. This is a matter of nature. If you want to see the development of science and technology, you might as well read science fiction, and some magic can obviously change the laws of physics and crush "modern" technology (I would like to complain about other dragon novels and other world DND novels here). At least the latest chapter's description of Sigil is quite good, and it deepens the world view. As for the coolness issue, in fact, some cool things can be arranged in the psychic plane. The development direction of the psychic plane is similar to ours. When we are in the psychic plane, we can arrange scenes of blue light appearing in front of some people, such as some people with brain twitching taking action against blue light. I believe that many people, including me, read fantasy novels and imagine that they have personal power, turning their hands into clouds and turning their hands into rain. If you write about how easily Blu-ray can crush modern technology, I believe it will satisfy many people. I hope the author will get better and better, and at least this book will be ranked in the top ten among the dragon novels I (a fourteen-year old bookworm) have read.

What can I say, the writing is okay, but it feels a bit suffocating and not very exciting. There are always a lot of things waiting for the protagonist, and everything doesn't feel exciting.

Who is the blue dragon who likes music? Which book?

It's ok, but it's not that exciting

I am so tired from reading a novel that I am correcting an essay like a Chinese teacher. The logic does not make sense, there are many typos and few words, and the language is contradictory. I cannot understand the subject, predicate and object. It is really tiring. I have to read it word by word and understand every sentence, otherwise I sometimes cannot understand what is written.

It looks good, the setting is interesting, and the plot is exciting. I am interested in watching it again. The cool points are evenly distributed, and it's not the kind of mindless fun that sucks. Come on

I think it's very well written, but the comment section is so deserted.

Is there any kind of dragon literature that doesn't start with a young dragon? It can start from adulthood or very old in one step.

It's quite average, with no bright spots. It looks high-end, but in fact it's mediocre, giving people the impression that it's tasteless and a pity to abandon.

Nice looking, 2 monthly passes are not much, so I offer them.

Author, do you have any plans for the male protagonist to develop in World of Warcraft?

In the introduction, "Blue Light Becomes a Dragon Queen", I accidentally saw it as "Blue Light Becomes a Dragon Queen", and then the following content is that other relatives are... And he... All of a sudden, this article is? ? ?

The typos should be corrected and updated soon.

So far it seems to be okay, author, cheers 🤓

Is there anyone in the farming culture who can develop and cultivate power? Can you recommend it to me? You don't have to become a dragon. You can recommend it.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...

It really looks like it was written by an AI, but it's a very low level AI. It always makes typos and omissions, and the sentences don't make sense.

I saw the author said before that he was writing a new book, but I haven't seen it in the past two months. Is it on another platform? I'm afraid of missing out. This book is very good, but it's too short. It was a good book about Tun Liang Tun and suddenly I found it was over.

The more golden fingers there are in the flowers, the less desire I have to read any more.