Desperate Night

I am an 11-year old bookworm. I have only read the first 250 chapters of this book. I am really not interested in the later chapters, so I just read the ending and epilogue. I have some thoughts on this book. I can say that the first 200 chapters are the best of the best. I am a farming enthusiast myself, and I really couldn't put it down when reading the first 200 chapters of survival and development. The process of gradually becoming stronger, strengthening foreign objects, fighting against black disasters, discovering the characteristics and weaknesses of various black disaster creatures, discovering patterns, and then finding ways to fight against them, and creating all kinds of new things is really comfortable. I could even read it for a day. But after the 200th chapter, the level of the article took a sharp turn. The system was chaotic, and holes were dug without filling them. One was that the strength and abilities were in chaos and I didn't know how to upgrade them. The other was that I didn't dig into the plot that could have been explored in depth, so I just let it go. For example, the Silver Tower in the early stage was written for a long time in the first dozens of chapters. It was the top research institution of mankind. In the end, it ended after the Silver Tower could not be contacted. Then the human defense line collapsed and the Silver Tower never appeared again. When I read that, I still wondered if there might be some secret. The Silver Pagoda could still be saved, but lost contact due to special reasons. Yu Hong would accidentally discover and save the Silver Pagoda, and the Silver Pagoda would reappear or rebuild to help humans continue to study the Black Tide. Then Yu Hong would invent a new system, study and understand the characteristics of various black disaster creatures, teach humans, and then spread it to humans to help humans overcome difficulties. Yu Hong invented ordinary people's exercises to teach humans, and he and humans became stronger together, and finally counterattacked the Kuroshio. As a result, the Yewen Civilization and the Yingshan Civilization came out later. It was said that the previous generation of civilization had not solved them. This started to be outrageous, and the multidimensional world began. Various fantasy techniques emerged one after another, and things from other worlds began to appear. Instead of black disasters, suddenly there was a cold disaster, water could not be drunk, and the temperature was ridiculously low. Then they began to inexplicably insist on going out to find Lin Yiyi, breaking the conspiracy of the Eternal Life Society, and then quickly solved it, and this world was over. I want to say that you can't develop in this world? Do you have to change the map? Obviously there are many places to be explored in Black Disaster, the various levels of Black Disaster, the characteristics of different Black Disasters, what decisions the intelligent Black Disaster will make, and you can write about it above the war level; what role the Mesha family played, what history it has, and what grievances it has; the runes of Yingshan Civilization, they How to save oneself? The runes can continue to expand other functions, such as defense and sealing functions; the human silver tower can reappear, continue human research, continue the research and development of the sunshine series, develop sunshine weapons, and human science and technology progress; the enhanced human can also continue to write, written by Yu Hong With the help of the improvement, the body becomes stronger and the body soars; the relics of the black disaster creatures can also be written in detail, what categories play what role, humans use these relics to improve weapons and fight against the black disaster; Yu Hong can also develop new technologies, produce new items, new systems, and can also create reaction skills and palm skills in skills. Ah, become an all-powerful warrior, or learn about the characteristics and countermeasures of the new black disaster, or absorb the advantages of other civilizations to improve the skills, so that ordinary people can practice, become research masters, form forces, the Black Wind Base becomes a holy place for human research, and finally become the savior and lead mankind to counterattack the black disaster; The plot of the villains can also be longer, talk about their origins, what their plans are, the movements of the Yongsheng Society in other cities after Xin Zhilei's plot is exposed, and even Commissioner Yang does not need to die. The confrontation between the two parties ends with Yu Hong coming to resolve it; Friends can also be developed and developed into Yin soldiers, which finally embody the greatness and courage of mankind. At the end, the Yin soldiers formed by the dead are summoned to counterattack the black disaster; the establishment of the joint army can also be detailed, such as the blood-drawing army, the postman system, and the transformed human system. You can write a few more famous military personnel. Team; and various supporting characters died too quickly, can there be some humanity? The character Li Runshan was originally well written, but he had to leave for Hope City inexplicably, and then died inexplicably. His death was worthless. Li Runshan, who was written before, was affectionate, righteous and capable. You said he went to Hope City for his daughter. I can still accept Wangcheng. I thought he could make a difference in New Hope City and what effect he would have on Hong in the later period. But inexplicably, a supporting character who had been written for so long by a black disaster died, and his death was worthless. It was like kicking a dog to death on the side of the road. The supporting character was written like a waste. It is an advantage to write a description of how powerful the killer is and then be beaten to death quickly, and that the revenge does not take overnight, at least it can make readers not worry, but some of your supporting characters who are in high positions, such as Commissioner Yang, Wei Hongye, etc., Said how high they were, and they had great positions, but they were killed inexplicably in the end, so why did you write about how high they were? To describe a lot of people who died in the last few seconds, there is a contrast in writing the villain this way, and it seems inexplicable to write the positive character this way. After wasting a long time writing him, he died in a few seconds, so why write him as this character? Is it really just a matter of words? The above is my feeling. I think this book could have become a masterpiece of farming. Even the Ji Dao can be integrated into it and push Yu Hong's level up. Unfortunately, Lao Gun always swallows up the dates. Many plots are passed over in one stroke, and good creativity is not needed. There is a lot of foreshadowing. The plot suddenly gave up after half a day. The previous plot of the black disaster was so well written and the horror atmosphere was full. In the middle of writing, the black disaster suddenly became less harmful. It is really a pity that the weird survival plot was so well written in the early stage. I mourn the degradation of a masterpiece.

To be honest, I have enjoyed reading Get Out novels for so many years, and this is probably the worst one. Although the ending of almost every book after Jidao Tianmo will be criticized (especially the beginning of the hidden dead end of the Ten Directions Martial Saint), almost no one praised this book as a whole. Later on, Yu Hong actually started singing. I have never seen the male protagonist sing in so many books, and the song he sang was still popular on the Internet, which was somewhat outrageous. The several external eye enhancements that Pseudo Saint has done later have almost the same functions, and they don't seem to have been conceived with any thought. The ending is also unsatisfactory. Especially the male protagonist, he lives in despair and fear throughout the book, which is something that other protagonists do not have at all. In the past, when I read Go Away, I thought the protagonist would never despair and would always be extremely confident. After this book came out of the Quanhe world, it no longer had a human "soul", it was like a puppet.

I saw this book on the "IQ Online" tab. I've read more than twenty chapters, and I can't stand it anymore. If someone says that reading this book requires patience, then I'll take it as a fart. There are three characters appearing in more than twenty chapters, Yiyi, the little boy, the protagonist and Dr. Xu. The relationship between the characters is very simple, but they are all heavily facialized. Yiyi will not go into details. She is the kind-hearted silly Baitian in many books. She believes whatever the protagonist says. She has been betrayed many times before and has some kind of obsession to find her relatives. It is not a classic, but the author said that she has an IQ problem, so forget it. Then there's the protagonist. This thing only sucks blood and paints cakes. I don't want to scold him here. There are already a lot of comments in the comment area. If you can find someone who has something to do with the protagonist's IQ, feel free to scold me. There is also Dr. Xu. People in the comments section say that she scolded the protagonist well. I also think she scolded the protagonist well, but she did nothing except being incompetent and furious. When she gets angry and then waits for the anger to subside, she can't stab the protagonist or drug him. I can't see how difficult it is. She has no mobility at all. It is simply unbelievable for such a person to survive in the apocalypse. It's hard to imagine that these three are all characters written by an old author in the early stages. So I would like to ask what is the relationship between these three characters and IQ Online? ? ? Are the starting tags randomly issued? ?

I feel like I can give up the book, it's a bit broken

In the past, the book had a good beginning but fell apart in the middle. Now, the beginning is incomprehensible, illogical and enjoyable. I no longer have the dignity of a great writer. I write randomly to make money. It's a pity for myself. I used to support you so much. Hey

Go away, are you really not using AI to write novels? His novel is not a matter of poor mathematics. Seeing that he encountered four teams of more than a thousand golden-armored dragons, he really couldn't hold back. He couldn't write the numbers before and after, right? There must be some logic in his mind, right? It doesn't look like it was written by a human being. I don't know if my Qidian Coin reports can be returned to me. After watching so many "Go Away" books, this one is the most abstract about mathematics.

(I couldn't stand it until Chapter 27. I haven't read the following chapters, so I may be biased later) The protagonist has obtained an ability that can enhance the upgrading of items. It does not consume any money and can be strengthened according to the direction of the heart, such as: writing a few words becomes practicing martial arts, turning wood into iron, etc. In this strange place, he relies on this ability to slowly build his own small base and build a warm home. The protagonist has an IQ problem, he is like a fool, and his operations are always different from those of normal people, which is very uncomfortable to watch. Including forgetting to take medicine when you have diarrhea, randomly strengthening the number if you don't know what it is, if it is life span, you will go crazy, etc. After the plot, I spent a long time building a house in a single player. There are a lot of great scholars who defend the author, saying that what he wrote is different, which makes me very uncomfortable. Isn't this what other authors write like this? This one is even worse. A dedicated chapter is dedicated to comment on this, as a reminder to future generations of Shen Nong. I also watched it from Jidao Tianmo, but I really want to comment on this Shui Shui score: 63/100

The whole process of survival in this book is really just like the title of the book. Most people say it is bad, but they actually expect the protagonist of this book to be as reckless as the previous protagonist. Despite the inherent impression, this book is passable. The protagonist is fighting against the source of disaster from beginning to end. In the face of the source of disaster, all living beings are meaningless. The characters and forces in the entire book are formed around Yuan Calamity, but Yuan Calamity has no consciousness. Regardless of whether it is the capitulation faction, the opposition, the fusion faction, etc., They are all destroyed equally. So in the later period, the villains who opposed the protagonist group perished due to the source disaster, instead of the protagonist killing them. This may be a bit difficult to accept for readers who are used to reading the previous books. After all, the previous protagonists were reckless. But people will change and grow. The theme of this book is survival in disasters. From this point of view, this book is successful. The plot is compact, and if you watch it in one go, there are basically no outrageous or suddenly mentally retarded operations. Overall, this book is really good and can be read

In the past, it was quite good to happily build a house and farm. I could get through some disasters with improvements every day, but now the difficulty has increased by leaps and bounds. It only takes more than ten days for random cheats to be used, and then it becomes even more dangerous. I hope that I can't see it at all. I hope it's true.

I don't know the source of the light disaster or the black disaster. I directly told me that it was a natural law. This natural law is also very difficult to understand. In the middle and later stages, I thought that he would control the power of the source disaster and become the disaster lord. But you can't beat it by telling me. Even if you can't beat it, you still haven't found a place of life. This is too hopeless. After you strengthened yourself to the maximum, you found that you still can't beat it. You can only survive by yourself without being killed by the source disaster. It's okay to create a living place, but can you survive the second time if you can survive it the first time? The Great Nirvana is better than going to it one at a time. Postscript: You haven't told me where the protagonist is on the earth yet. What's the origin of the disaster? It took so long to arrive. The outside is gone, and the innermost layer of eternal sleep is gone. Your earth is still a place of life, isn't it? Your later period is more watery than the other side of Deep Space. Why are you just writing it while writing? Alas, Old Gun, have you exhausted your talent? I hope you can write a better story for your next work.

I feel like the more I write, the more chaotic it becomes. It's not as interesting as what I wrote at the beginning. There are a lot of people who just write whatever comes to mind. Will it come back to perfection by then?

Withdrawn Withdrawal So many chapters have been written about those two girls, killing them at will, your attitude. Sorry, I don't like it. Withdrawn. It is similar to the previous book. In the previous book, the pig's feet finally got married and gave birth to a baby, but the result was ten alien monsters and moths and chrysalis. 🐴'S. But I am a fan of many books, and I feel very immersed in it, so I withdrew it, withdrew it.

After saving for a week, it turned out to be nothing but disgusting characters, so I gave it up and stopped watching it.

The first hundred chapters are pretty good and the pace is good. But in the latest fifty or sixty chapters, I feel that there is not much progress. They all say that the skills are being practiced, but there is no specific performance other than the description of the increase in internal energy and the strengthening of the body. The combat power from dozens of chapters ago is enough to beat people, and the main rely on formations, grenades and the environment to fight tricks. Then he kept talking in a loop about cultivating a few more inner qi. I tried to describe the changes that having more inner qi would have on the body, but now the description is gone. It's too bland,,,, The previous article about farming is good, and it's OK to expand the camp. But it has been said that one person is not enough, and we need to recruit people to take charge, but the team members continue to lose. Farming is also superficial, formations are upgraded over and over again, and there is no action after the nuclear generator is brought back in technology, and the rune technology is also progressing slowly.

The plot of the new map feels average and not worth spending money on.

First of all, Get Out is indeed Get Out. It is unique in terms of detailed description and fighting style. The opening chapter is as good as ever. The early development, exchange of materials, and description of human nature are very good. I think the first 200 chapters are exciting, but after 200 chapters, it takes a sharp turn. Secondly, it is a desperate situation, the end of the world, and weirdness. It is very well written and has a bit of an apocalyptic feel. It uses the plug-in of fairy tales and martial arts to develop the story in the apocalypse. The early focus is on reality, the apocalypse, weirdness, and low martial arts. After 200 chapters, the fairy tale, get out of the way. The style of Hemo Shifeng (created by me) covers the reality, is low-level, and puts the cart before the horse. If it is written according to the early rhythm, slowly develops and restores civilization, establishes legends, and is similar to "This Game is Too Real", it will still be worth watching. So to sum it up, the first 200 chapters are a masterpiece, but the rest are as broken as ever.

The original world collapsed, and a new world was created Now that the new world has become very powerful, instead of contacting the top management quickly, it instead keeps a low profile and pretends to be cool. Why are you pretending? Use your brain. People in the original world were almost dead, and I was still wasting time in the new world. I still asked myself: I am a kind person, feel my kindness. Me. . . . Mouth area

Is it possible to write an infinite flow, like Mysterious Journey? Miwu is really exciting to watch.

Ever since I saw the part about the protagonist and the two women, and then posted a review saying that the author's skills had dropped, he was blocked. I didn't spend money to read it anymore. Today I read it and it was unfinished 🤭

Although I haven't fully booked it (I skipped it due to the lackluster nature of it), I'm still a deacon, so I'd like to share my opinion. This roll-away classic "unfinished" continues the style of opening high and going low. Filling holes is not very good. The land of vitality was filled, but Tianzun Wuji appeared rather suddenly. As the strongest person in the great annihilation of the Tianzun era, there was no foreshadowing at all. The nature of the source disaster was not clearly explained. The worlds and characters that appeared before, as well as the seemingly powerful villains, were all destroyed by the source. Ji from the Star God Era is also a very abrupt background. The emotional scenes are even worse. This book is directly about the protagonist of a eunuch, who has no wife or children, and moves in a safe house throughout the whole process. Yiyi, Quan He and others brought out from the destroyed world are more like tool men, only serving as emotional anchors. In the end, he ended up with Quan He inexplicably. Finally, I'm looking forward to the new book. It's best for Gunmei to open a new book for me within the year, and Heiyin will strengthen Gunmei's keyboard for me! 😆😆

This book is becoming more and more ugly as I write it, so I give it a bad review.

Light Disaster: We are the greatest shining, the sun! It is the end of the first and last illusion of all things. Black Disaster: We are the deadliest sinking, eternal night! It is the end of all the stars being extinguished and desolate, and also the destruction of all illusions. Flood: We are the most violent overturn, the raging waves! It is a desperate situation in which the world collapses and annihilates, and the common people are annihilated. Wind disaster: We are the most devastating sweep, a hurricane! It is the origin of the disintegration of heaven and earth and the demise of all spirits. Drought: We are the hottest burning, a hell of fire! It is the earth that is scorched and burned, and it is also the calamity of death that annihilates life and life. Cold disaster: We are the harshest cold, the abyss! The world is frozen and stagnant, and it is also a land of silence that freezes everything. Spiritual Disaster: We are the most ferocious spirit eaters and demonic thoughts! It is the abyss of destruction and destruction of the soul and the destruction of the mind. Disaster of life: We are the most evil life force, a catastrophe! It is the cause of the degradation of all life and the cause of destruction and despair. Psychic Disaster: We are the most bizarre mistakes and mental barriers! It is the prelude to the collapse of all rationality and the growth of madness. Disaster of Annihilation: We are the most ruthless devouring, the doomsday! It is the dissolution of all order and the beginning of the expansion of nothingness.

I have read all the books by Wan Gun, and for the first time in the book, I felt a deep sense of despair.

Yu Hong keeps upgrading, often in order to cope with the increasing intensity of source disasters. It seems that the source disasters are rushing Yu Hong to upgrade. So has Yu Hong become stronger after the upgrade? Not at all, because there will always be stronger crises urging Yu Hong to upgrade. In previous books, whenever the protagonist upgraded, he would go to small worlds/other universes to show off. However, the protagonist of this book seems not to be Yu Hong, but Yuan Calamity, who chases Yu Hong around like a duck. You Can, the captain of Golden Wing Tower's Ship of Life? , And other captains who were in contact with him at the time. It could have been extended, but nothing happened. An old woman from the Black Catastrophe Mother Tree said she could squat outside the Heavenly Court for 40 years, but she ignored it. And Zhang Jing, I don't know where he went. After the end of the first black disaster world, the best-looking dungeon is still the world where the Spirit Alliance suppressed the blood disaster, and the time when they first arrived at Wanxue Palace and started to practice strange immortality. The former allows readers to visibly feel the protagonist becoming stronger, suppressing the world without any delay, and the battle is also exciting, and the muscular men of the Spirit Alliance have a sense of déjà vu like the invasion of the rabbit Buddha in the ultimate demon. In the latter, Yu Hong had just arrived and encountered various supernatural events, which gave him a strong sense of weirdness. The book review area was filled with various discussions and speculations. But the protagonist's ultimate strength depends on his own black seal. The protagonist's face changes faster than the reader turns the page. On the previous page, he just said that he would stay and wait for the strengthening of the black mark to end, but on the next page, he said that he would go out again. I just said that the black seal is not as good as practice. Only through practice can you become stronger. Later, the black seal strengthens various powerful physiques and calls it really fragrant. After reading the whole article, I felt like I didn't write the outline well.

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It ended too quickly, I haven't had enough of it yet

When will the new book be released 😭

Hey, I've finished listening to the real person audio book, come over and listen to the AI ​​audio book 🙂

I'll just read this one

Go away, it's so suitable for a short story. I originally voted for unlimited streaming, but unfortunately I wasn't selected