Extreme Demon

As a typical work by a well-known author from Qidian, this book certainly has its own unique features. As a book written in 2017, it already has the prominent counter-conventional interest that emerged during that period. The cunningness of the old author can also be discerned. The provocative writing about beauties, tragedies, and strange stories that appear from time to time in the book is very representative of early online writing. This kind of writing is now rare due to the control of cultural institutions over the content of the three common customs. It is undeniable that, like the heavy oil and salt in fast food, it does add a lot of flavor to the book. The interest of this book mainly stems from two points. First, the theme is well played. Even now, people will still be attracted by this original power system. At the same time, the villain-like and monster-like protagonist also brings full contrast fun to the book. The system and plug-in themes are also used to a considerable extent - the famous hook "Dark Blue Dot" is the ironclad proof. There is no doubt that this gag played a huge role in the promotion of this book. The second is the pleasure brought by the author's writing power. The most basic one is of course the content that seems a bit obscene. This pleasure is very instinctive and stressful. But to be honest, although it is impressive, these contents are still only small adjustments. The larger, more prominent, and overwhelming pleasure of this book still comes from the refreshing feeling of "violence overwhelms everything and revenge does not last overnight" in this book. This is indeed a book written by an experienced author. When those conventional and outdated pulls and games are simply torn apart in an absurd and crude way, the readers gain multiple pleasures. But I still gave up on this book because of its fatal flaw. In a word, rough. Yes, it is rough, and it is extremely rough. This is a signal I have received repeatedly. The most basic characteristics, naturally everyone can see the details, the discrepancies in numbers, time and names - but to be honest, this is actually irrelevant, because it is not a matter of principle. The author can patch it up anytime he wants, and it's easy for readers to filter it out in their minds. What is even more fatal is that the author's handling of the hidden line is too rough and outrageous. The prominent feature is that a large number of voltage lines are not recycled, and the partially recovered voltage lines are processed too late or too superficially. For example, you can see the clues in the characters such as Song Zhenguo, King Wuyou, Shang Yangfei, and Chen Yunxi: the author has put more pen and ink on these characters, and it is obvious that he has made some arrangements. But these arrangements either fell into disarray, missed the most appropriate opportunity, or became a futile make-up with just a few strokes. The writing method of this book gives me the feeling that it casts a wide net and opens the door wide, setting up foreshadowing in all possible places, and then closing where the main line is needed depending on the situation. If you think about it carefully, this seems to be in line with the possible practice of famous authors writing wherever they want and relying on their own abilities to make a living. This is actually quite typical. It's a web article, I can understand it. But not without cost. The underlying message is that these lines were not thought out in advance. Failure to consider them well means not arranging them at the right time and embedding them into the main line in the right way. That is, they are unnecessary. That's it. The descriptions related to these foreshadowings will look like nonsense in an instant. The result of not having a follow-up explanation for the minor supporting role of King Wushou is that recalling some of the previous words that exaggerated the cruelty of the demon and the tension of several attacks became extremely childish. And when readers start to think: Could the passage I am reading now also be an insignificant, unsubstantiated, and unsubstantiated description, it will be even worse. Wouldn't that mean that reading this book is a waste of time? So this is why foreshadowing should be used with caution. Foreshadowing is a personal way of turning decay into magic, and it deserves to be treated with care. If there are too many unrecycled foreshadowings, it will look like a piece of clothing with a bunch of unsewed threads, which will greatly affect the look and feel - it can be worn, but no one may buy it.

I'm just a passerby. I often see Lu Sheng Beast in other novels. Today I came to admire the novel. I've just read less than 50 chapters. This chapter talks about a group of demons dancing around. Some people complain about it, while others blow it up to the sky. I don't see what's good or bad about it. The description of the protagonist is quite realistic, and it has obvious advantages over other brainless novels. There are some family relationships written incorrectly, ninety-nine eighty-four, and some small bugs in some journals. I think there are no problems. I really can't accept this routine of sitting at home and waiting to die. The protagonist knows a lot of things and just doesn't care. Lu Qingqing's handling of the protagonist is really weird. I don't think it's good to be so unhappy in the early stages of a good novel. I heard that he became like Saitama-sensei later on, which is okay. From the current perspective, this book can be read, it is not bad, it is a traditional cool text, a little bit novice, but I personally think it is a little bit bad to be regarded as a sacred book, and it is not worthy of such a great reputation. Maybe it is because it was written by a great god, and it has become a cliché after a long time, and it is a unique Yakuza-ryu routine.

I have just read 50% of the book. The first and middle stages of this book are indeed very exciting. Both the setting and the refreshing points are very good. The supporting characters are ordinary people who follow extraordinary ways, and the enemies are also smart. But to the back. It became increasingly difficult for Deep Blue to improve its realm. In the end, it became the same as ordinary fantasy novels. It lost the feeling of the previous one. It was very dragging and there were so many realms that no one could beat it. I couldn't stand it anymore after traveling through five or six realms for dozens of chapters and still staying in the War Master.

It seemed okay at first, but after 400 or so, the various time travel and retelling of the story were a bit unacceptable. You can write infinitely if you travel back in time and practice again, but there is no sense of immersion, it's like reading a novel again. Some well-developed characters have little drama and no ending. The problem may be that the cheating protagonist can't find a supporting character who can get along with him for a long time. The protagonist is not a loner who can change the world at will. Later in the writing, the old supporting characters are crazy and out of touch, and the addition of new supporting characters feels inconsistent. I hope the new book will have a breakthrough.

It's based on Dark Blue with some extra points, but I feel like this book is very average.

I feel like there is no need for a time-travel opening because the protagonist has never used any of the knowledge and abilities of modern people, so this time-travel opening has become a must-have element in web novels. It actually has nothing to do with the plot.

Why are you forcing me to...? With my invincible martial arts and my supreme wisdom Deep Blue, let me see your limit! Give me some more! Lu Sheng Beast overwhelms everything, the most primitive feeling of pleasure, the most domineering male protagonist It's so cool! ! !

After reading it, I feel a little unfinished. Over the years, this is one of the few novels I have finished. In this invincible novel, the protagonist is decisive in killing, not a virgin, not a ***. Every time you feel a bit bored, there is always something exciting that will entice you to keep watching. This is a breath of fresh air among Wudi-style novels and is worth reading. (Note: For novels, read them first and then read the book reviews. If you read the book reviews first, you won't be able to find a novel that suits your taste. After all, not everyone likes oranges.)

How? It's gone? When I wrote about that poisonous person he really knew how to do it, I thought there was a plot, so I just walked through it! Also, shouldn't his Heavenly Demon Lord have anything to do with Stone Mother ? That's it? It's so sad that I suddenly finished the book

Aren't the exercises, spells, and plug-ins in this book too abnormal?

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Praise!

Everyone, I have found Shenlan's life experience, and I have already gone to get it. The opportunity has come for me to add some points. I will definitely not forget you book friends when I succeed! Hope it improves!

I've eaten weird things, people, monsters, gods, plates, basins, sea water, souls, mud, doors; I've eaten the East, the West, the elves, the orcs, whatever gods, demons, Buddhas, and humans, I've had a hot pot soup.

A novel with as many advantages as disadvantages. In particular, one sentence in the book made me laugh for a long time: Lu Sheng has always believed that the role of Deep Blue is not as great as imagined. He relies more on himself. Everything now is the result of his own efforts and accumulation, hard work and hard work...

The new book will be studied in Luyuan in December and will be confirmed later depending on availability. Therefore, don't be anxious about the new book. We will wait for notification of specific information when the time comes! ! The above original words of "Go away beast"

I'm running out of books, so I recommend a few novels in the dark muscle genre. I also read the dark strategy genre, maybe because I have a limited IQ, but I still prefer muscle flow. I believe in muscle, ho ho! Ji Dao Demon This one needs no introduction Lord of Demonic Evil Super Love Knight of the Abyss Glory Sacrifice, Muscle Flow Horizontal Martial Arts Ji Dao Flow Ten Directions Martial Saint I don't know if I will become a big muscle tyrant Lord of Glory My name is Kunpeng Old Chapters The Soul of Negri Starting from Guhuo Bird The Dragon Devouring the World Stand back and let me be the master. Mage Road. Sutra of the Dead. Although it is not a muscle flow, but it is also very good-looking. I hope book friends will leave comments and recommendations.

He was harmed by others in his previous life and accidentally traveled through time. Today's fortunes are ill-fated and nothing has been achieved. My sister is a proud child of the German Orthopedics Department. Bring your own plug-ins, you old rookie. That day, my father succeeded in practicing and traveled through time. Since then, a generation of legends has risen and stirred up the world. Let's see how Lu Ning goes against the will of nature, opens cheats, practices magical skills, gets along with her partners, and pretends to be cool to slap her in the face! "God, I, Lu Aotian, want you to know that my fate is up to my father and not God!" It's all in "The Legendary Adventure of Lu Aotian Ning".

I just received the message that due to some reasons, Go away Beast has to publish the book on the 15th, but the chapters in the past few days will be posted together. Please understand 😭😭😭

Dark blue, add some for me

I read Tianmo several times, and after thinking about why the book behind it didn't feel right, I felt it when I saw the Red Whale Gang. The protagonist comes to the world and uses the most unreasonable method to help desperate ordinary people find a way out. He can open mountains with one punch, cut off seas with one kick, and create peace with one force.

First of all, as a person with no income, when I read Gunmei's books, I usually subscribe if I have money. If I don't have money, I will read pirated copies. Don't criticize me. . . Really no money! As an old fan who has read all of Gunmei's books (the ones I read before were all pirated copies, and I only recently used them as a starting point), from the first time I came into contact with Gunmei's book (The True Solution to Kendo), I felt that it was different from other coquettish bitches, without those routines. . . . Slowly unraveling the huge worldview in Gunmei's book bit by bit (this is very attractive to me), the diverse cultivation systems, and the diverse civilizations, I feel that Gunmei can also become popular if she writes fantasy novels. There is also a protagonist who kills decisively (this is also very attractive). Unlike other novels, where the villain is the protagonist, the protagonist will not kill him. . . . The protagonists in Gunmei's novels are all decisive in killing and have good temperament (in other novels, they are either comely or ordinary people, so awesome that they look like your uncle), and they are ruthless in killing girls. . . Forehead. . The Yakuza has another feature, the villain touches him (I am not sure whether the protagonist is the villain or the villain is the villain), Lu Sheng: Why are you forcing me, Deep Blue (Dad), I want to lay the foundation. . . . The Jidao Heavenly Demon chased me from the beginning, slowly until now, two chapters a day. . . It's hard to forget to watch one day. . If Gunmei releases a new book, I will definitely follow it. This time I will order all of them because I have also started to make money, and being an author is not easy! ! I guess no one will read after saying so much - an old fan of a hot girl

Disclaimer in advance: This is a simple article. But it is a classic among novice writers. Dark blue! Give me more! Advantages: 1. Get lost. The unique writing style is really deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. This style is so outrageous... It really doesn't take the usual path... 2. The atmosphere creation in the early stage is really great, especially the weirdness in the early stage, which can really reflect the skill of getting out of the way. Disadvantages: This book is pure white text, with countless bad routines and plots. Only when you are just exposed to weirdness in the early stage, that is the highlight of the whole story. The rest is basically the traditional way of killing monsters, upgrading and changing pictures, and then it starts over and over again. Oh, and this is a bad novel~ (Special suggestion: read two to three hundred chapters and that's about it) Evaluation: Liangcao (Xiaobai's novel is very strong)

From an outsider's perspective, I am very afraid of Lu Sheng, a man who is moody and will never allow anyone to disobey him. I want to be this kind of person, but I don't want to get along with this kind of person

I've already watched the Jidao Heavenly Demon. What evil demons and anti-human beings are you telling me? Do you understand what it means to be a born saint? Even if the Great Love Immortal Lord comes, I still feel that my own structure is still too small.

Do you understand the value of "dark blue, add dots" at the starting point

Duanmuwan, such a beautiful girl, went away and wrote her as the slave of the protagonist. How could he do this? Isn't this trampling on our human dignity? Shouldn't novels, especially fantasy novels, be about protecting and promoting the beautiful things we love? How could he write like this?

It's so chaotic. The setting of the Demon World has been in chaos since it came out. The power system is in a mess. The wife said "I'll talk about it later" and has stopped moving, as if she was dead. There is no longer the feeling of finding a way out of dealing with weirdness at the beginning. It has become a dark blue plus point → I am super powerful and this force is so awesome that I will join → Dark blue is added → I am super super powerful and I want to join too.

Go away: Deep Blue, upgrade me to three updates a day! I saw the screen trembling for a while, and my spiritual power was consumed rapidly, like a bottomless pit. Go away and quickly stopped the operation. "It seems... The second update is my current limit..."