Hogwarts: The Obscurial of Azkaban

This synopsis is actually quite off-putting. It's like a minor villain who cries out, "I want to live," is extremely self-centered, and feels justified in taking other people's lives and committing numerous evils.

As long as it's not Hermione, it's fine.

There's actually a plot hole. Harry Potter was over a year old when he deflected the Deathly Hallows Curse. If the main character was born in Azkaban, he'd be at most 10 years old, so he couldn't be in the same year as Harry Potter.

Does the author only know how to write without Hermione?

The more I read, the more I feel the protagonist is like Hermione's simp, always jumping in to help and rushing to appease her when she's angry—it's suffocating! How could such a family feud be so easily forgiven, let alone made into friendship? Neville's actions are just unbelievable! Finally, I hope they don't introduce a romance too soon.

Based on the synopsis, I thought he was a potential Dark Lord, but I was wrong. Seriously, by fanfiction standards, the protagonist could totally go to Gryffindor.

The plot was well-written, but I felt that the protagonist invested too much emotion in Hermione (not in a subjective sense). He was betrayed by Hermione several times, yet he still helped her, and the worst part was that Hermione didn't appreciate it. It was quite annoying to watch this part of the story. Moreover, Hermione wouldn't side with the main characters, which I think is a bit malicious.

He's so fond of Hermione, yet he's been betrayed so many times...

To be fair, Daphne treated Thomas much better than Hermione; moreover, she was a better match for the male lead in terms of family background, stance, and values, and she understood him better.

There's far too much direct description of the characters' inner thoughts. And the use of "narration" is even worse than directly writing out their so-called "inner thoughts."