Hogwarts: The Obscurial of Azkaban

This introduction is actually quite discouraging, like a little villain who shouts "I want to live", is extremely self-centered, can deprive others of their lives with peace of mind, and has committed many crimes.

As long as it's not Hermione, that's fine

In fact, there is a bug. Harry Potter was over a year old when he rebounded the killing curse. If the protagonist was born in Azkaban, he would be 10 years old at most and cannot be in the same class as the savior.

Doesn't it mean that I can't write without Hermione?

The more I read, the more I feel that the protagonist is like Hermione's licking dog, who wants to get ahead of everything, and rushes to comfort her when she is angry. It is simply suffocating. How can such a family feud be easily forgiven and become good friends? Neville's operation is also amazing. Finally, I hope not to develop a love line so quickly. I feel uncomfortable when I think that the heroine may be Hermione. This The male protagonist of this book is not compatible with Hermione at all. The male protagonist is precarious and has lived in a dark environment since he was a child. His pursuit of life and Voldemort's pursuit of immortality are the same goal. Basically, if nothing unexpected happens, he is the third generation of the Dark Lord. Hermione's sense of justice and compassion are nowhere to be released. If she is with the male protagonist, it will be completely OOC. Let's take a look.

I read the introduction and thought he was a reserve Dark Lord. I thought too much. Really, according to the moral standards of the fandom, the protagonist can definitely go to Gryffindor.

The plot was well written, but I felt that the protagonist invested too much emotion in Hermione (not subjectively). Hermione stabbed her in the back several times and even helped her. The key is that Hermione didn't appreciate it. It was very annoying when watching this plot. What's more, Hermione will not stand on the protagonist's side, which seems a bit poisonous to me. At first, the protagonist got close to Hermione and others just to clear herself under Dumbledore's nose. Now she is becoming more and more like the heroine of Hermione... I can only say that if you, the author, don't know how to write emotional scenes, it's best not to forcefully write them. Besides, for the character of the protagonist, I feel that adding cp is a bit OOC. In short, come on, author, it's rare to see such a darker protagonist, I hope he won't be a eunuch

I like Hermione so much that I have been stabbed in the back many times...

There is one thing to say, Daphne is much better to Thomas than Hermione; and regardless of family background, stance and three views, she is more suitable for the male protagonist and understands him better.

There are too many positive descriptions of the characters' psychological activities. And the use of "narration" is even worse than directly writing the so-called "heartfelt words"