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At first, I thought it was strange that the author's writing style had such poor results, but it turned out that it was actually an epic and bizarre fusion. The author's old routine was covered in a love story, and it also came with a simulator, and the result was to take the dross and discard the essence Let me analyze the book a little. I have some humble opinions and may not be correct. Please forgive me if there are any mistakes. —————————————————————————— 1. The cool points of the simulator 1. Predicting the future and changing the destined tragic ending is a very important cool point. For example, in my weird life, I faced many destined death and sacrifice endings. I changed the solution through the first simulation and sought the best solution among thousands of possibilities. The author's problem is that the crisis is not very urgent, it is not something that will happen soon. Without that sense of urgency, there is no pressure, and the simulator is very important, a desperate survival environment is missing And the plot is almost repetitive. The only difference between reality and the simulator in the first copy is that the villain glanced at it and felt scared. Normally, a simulation is a simulation, but there must be emergencies in reality to make the plot different. Or simulate it several times to guess the answer, and act according to the guessed answer in reality. In short, simulation and reality cannot be basically the same, it is too boring to watch 2. The simulator comes with rewards. When different endings are played, such as good endings, bad endings and real endings, the protagonist will receive certain rewards such as talents or items. This is also a very excellent design. We all like to achieve achievements and get more endings when playing games! Watching more plots, in the same way, we are equally happy to see more branch plots when reading books The author did not write at all in this aspect. I did not see the if line in the first simulated copy. I am not saying that I must write it, but at least it seems boring for now —————————————————————— 2. The cool points of love stories 1. Romance novels in general are very sweet, so sweet that it warms the body. It makes people call it science fiction I can't feel the sweetness in this book by the author. It's too bland, and I can't feel that the outsider is selling dog meat at the head of a sheep. The interaction with the outsider's mother must be more outrageous to bring out the outsider's attributes. For example, in the Cthulhu love game, you sacrifice your body to the evil god, and you also have to draw magic circles and arrange rituals. The key point in writing novels about a Wainiang is to distinguish her from ordinary people. She should not just describe her appearance, but her movements and habits must be different from ordinary people. For example, the Snake Lady has a low body temperature, likes to cling to others, and has a forked tongue. The Western Dragon Lady has golden vertical pupils, strong dragon claws, and loves treasures. Slime Girl is slimy, can change forms freely, and likes to eat sweets. The author has no extra-human attributes at all, and he can even change back later. Just writing scales is not enough. After all, it is not an anime. It is full of extra-human attributes. The novel needs to be described from multiple angles to reflect it. 2. Love stories generally have unique heroines, which are quite magical (mainly to add drama), such as a delicate and frail young lady, a perfect star with self-destructive tendencies, an eccentric childhood sweetheart, a sassy and heroic lady, and a yandere literary girl. The author's heroine design is too bland. The first dragon lady gave me a very ordinary impression, and there is no particularly interesting plot. Feeding, teaching language, making love, and fighting ability are also overshadowed by the protagonist. And the development is too fast. Whose love story has more than ten chapters and is full of favorability? In previous works, the recruitment of girls was a matter of course, and they accepted it naturally, and they were very mellow. For example, Senior Sister Jin has a childhood sweetheart. The first copy of this book was too hasty, and I had to get all the favorability points within 3 days. Moreover, the number of words was too few, and the characters had no three-dimensional sense at all. I feel that the heroine in this book is a tool to improve combat effectiveness. Basically, after providing combat effectiveness once, it is of no use. There is no love story between the hero and heroine throughout the whole text, and they also feed the readers dog food like crazy. —————————————————————— 3. The author's writing style The author of this book still follows the usual writing style, consisting of immortality + time-traveling. The characteristics are 1. Ordinary daily life. It can relax the spirit very well, and the writing is very smooth, which will not make people feel bored 2. The battle is just right. Appropriate fighting, not too much, not too little, nor direct crushing of Invincible 3. Fast upgrade speed and various abilities. This is a characteristic of time-travel novels, allowing readers to clearly feel the growth of the protagonist 4. Game world. This is the characteristic of longevity novels. The protagonist will neither fight too hard nor show off too much, and faces things with an indifferent attitude ———————————————————————— Four. The fundamental reasons for the unsightliness 1. The conflict between ordinary daily life and vigorous love. (Love requires surprises) 2. The longevity writing style conflicts with the simulator writing style. The cool point of the simulator is to fight your way out of dangers and rewrite the ending to create the future. This seriously conflicts with the longevity writing style, because the longevity writing style will not put yourself in such a dangerous situation, but the simulator forces you to do that. Dangerous situation (Eternal life represents safety, simulator represents crisis, the balance between the two is difficult to write) 3. The selection of materials failed. It does not mean that a hodgepodge is good. Although Buddha jumped over the wall is also a hodgepodge, but can it be delicious if I just pile some things together? For some materials, 1+1>2, for some materials, 1+1 may be less than 1. My players who remind me of Qingshan getting drunk are all actors. His book is a mystery drama + the fourth natural disaster + behind-the-scenes + changing history Each element of Qingjie is very good separately, ①He The copy is really well written, with historical background, interlocking reasoning, and careful logical chain. ② His fourth natural disaster is also very well written. The player's character is very good, at least I can remember it ③ His alternate history is also well written. Even though he is an old author, he is still very capable and very immersive. I can feel the magnificence of history. But it just blends together into a mess of defense, and the results are very poor In short, this is not to deny the author's writing power. I have ordered three or four of his books, and I still like this style of writing. I can only say that this time I failed in selecting the material. ———————————————————————— Fourth, some humble opinion: The core of the author is still the style of immortality + time travel. It is better to add some more suitable elements on this basis. The following are some of my ideas, for reference only 1. Lord of the Wilderness The world brings the revival of the human race/Jiejiao + game plug-ins 2. Cthulhu style main world + game plug-ins. For the main world, you can refer to My Cell Prison (Cthulhu may not be suitable for the author, but this kind of subject is really interesting) 3. Fans of all worlds + game plug-ins, create a dream company, help people realize their dreams, you can refer to the Dream Master of All Realms (changed to Changshengliu)

If I hadn't seen the author's name, I wouldn't have clicked in.

Gu Yi is really a congenital saint who was born to write about game cheats. He followed it from the mission system. But to be honest, the only thing that attracts me about this book is the game cheats. When the game is revealed in reality, it doesn't attract me to the game cheats. Maybe it's the game cheats that make me understand the game. Most of the plot is reflected in the reality. I had to watch the plot again in a short time. Even if I added some details, I still felt it was boring. The protagonist and the heroine couldn't change my senses (all old book friends know what the heroine means). Let's talk about the daily writing during the transition period between games. My perception is that it is bland, a kind of blandness that is now invincible for the middle and lower levels. It is so bland that I only skim it once every day and stay for 30 seconds without reading it in detail, just to support the author's kind of blandness. First of all, the above is just my personal perception and does not represent the majority of book lovers. It may also be my problem because I have read too many fast food articles. In general, the writing style is online, and the author just needs to write at his own pace. The author has been writing this way for so many years, and he also has a rhythm that he is familiar with. Some suggestions, the current selling point of this book is to guide the non-human girlfriend. Since it is a non-human, the scope is very large. The will of civilization is non-human, the stars are non-human, the world is non-human. We even talk about the protagonist's home planet. Just have a Gaia consciousness. Don't just guide, but also develop it. The kind that comes from scratch, such as stars, without life consciousness, then cultivate to birth consciousness, as the author has a copy of [Fading] in the previous book. , Raised from the world of Hengsha to the boundless true world, falling in love with the consciousness of heaven. Unfortunately, the protagonist cannot choose his love partner at present, or he can after holding the Tao Fruit. The name of the Tao Fruit should be related to concepts such as [melody] [heartbeat] [resonance] [note] [love]. The concept is that I am wondering if I can attack myself, get notes from myself, or even talk to myself endlessly in the past and future. Countless notes are superimposed to step into the infinite door.

The simulation type is similar to a small world game, where the protagonist is rational and intelligent. At present, the first basic emotion is also in place, Liangcao+ - Chapters 1-26

Why are the protagonists all named Lin Qian? (🐶)

You have written so many books, but I still feel that the one with a bit of a mission system is the best. The few novels I have read for the second time are more to my liking. Except for "The Game", I feel that the more you write the later books, the more wrong you are and the worse they are. For example, the previous novel "Your Excellency", the realm system is messy and low, and the world background is also boring. Another example is "Let Me Start a Game", the beginning is very intellectually depressing. After talking so much, I am a bit disappointed. . . . I really hope that after this book is finished, you can sort out your thoughts and start another book.

Okay, there's nothing poisonous about it. He is a level 5 author who is decisive in killing and has three views. I hope he can be better in the future and not be like a cuckold, go away and create some plots to screen readers.

I finished reading it in one go, and when I looked at the title again, I couldn't think of any connection between the title and the content 😅

If I was put off by the title of the book, it would be better to call it String of Destiny. If I hadn't read the author's book before, I wouldn't have clicked on this weird title.

The score isn't quite right, isn't it? The score shouldn't be so bad based on the author's level. I haven't read the book yet, but I believe in the author's level. I'll turn on the automatic subscription and wait until it's almost finished before reading it. Otherwise, it's too little and I won't be able to enjoy it.

If you write a copy several times, the readability will be gone. After it is put on the shelf, I still follow the simulation and read it. It feels like a waste of money.

It's too watery. I wrote the simulated plot once and the reality once. It took a lot of space to write it twice. The plot progress is slow😅

The gag book looks quite interesting.

It's quite good, but it's a new book. I heard the author is a big shot. Let's go check out the author's previous books.

It feels like this plot has been repeated many times, and it has no taste at all.

The content is pretty good, but the title and introduction feel inappropriate. I came across the recommendation several times, but never clicked on it every time. I opened it today after reading through the comments The title of the book can clearly state that it is a game deduction or something, the light novel flavor is too weird The introduction is not very attractive, or it is not right with the main text. After all, this main body predicts the future upgrade flow, not the core of literary youth and love and love You said it was a small world with endless fun 2.0, I have read it earlier

The second dungeon dragged on for too long. It was him coming back and forth, and it was him again and again, and my interest dropped greatly.

I feel that the title of the book has little to do with the content, and the focus is on inhuman xp

Zimbabwe doesn't have a protagonist whose strength is rising fast either.

It feels like it's about to end, and the protagonist's strength is almost over.

There is no problem with the creative plug-in writing, but there is a problem with the plot. Nowadays, it is not popular for straight men to fall in love. Everyone likes cool stories with male protagonists. If the protagonist and supporting characters have higher IQs, the plot is reasonable and the results are not bad. However, your love plug-in is annoying to watch, and the female protagonists are not attractive. It is really thankless. It is troublesome to have to deal with the relationships of various female protagonists, and then try hard The quantitative system is a bit confusing. The protagonist upgrades are not very exciting. I was actually attracted by the first book "Let Me Play the Game". However, the subsequent books did not feel that exciting. For example, the love cheats were really annoying. I skipped to the end and the protagonist received the goods. I didn't watch the middle plot at all. I was too lazy to read. After getting married, you will find that women are more annoying than games are fun.

After reading the books written by the author two years ago, I feel that they are all based on realistic plots.

It is indeed a pity that novels of this level have only this kind of achievement. In my humble opinion, try not to write stories that imply the world view of modern society, as it can easily cause controversy, although everyone has their own preferences. But there is no need to screen out some readers in this setting where there is room for adjustment.

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Is there any word on when the new book will be released? I'm not interested in reading this book. I finally waited until it was finished.

The book is still quite good, but there are too few reviews and it is not popular. It is a good book because it is a refreshing article without being too poisonous.

Isn't it possible that the dragon head will also be a woman later?

In fact, would it be more interesting if love was broadcast live? After all, he was a love anchor from the beginning

The battles between the protagonist and the enemy in that world of cultivating immortals are quite good as you can imagine.

This book of yours clearly shows that your level has returned. The last book was set to screen out some people, but this one does not have this problem. Come on, your level of writing has returned, and the popularity will slowly come back.