Don't Talk to Me About Chatting

The book is well written, but when 323 returns to the past time and space, it begins to fall apart. Everything collapses. First, the protagonist returns to before he was born, and then his power begins to dissipate and his level begins to decline. Then the protagonist's father is not interested in the protagonist's mother at all. The protagonist's mother became pregnant because of a meteor. The protagonist's father began to be suspicious. The protagonist explained it clearly to the protagonist's father in a few words. The protagonist's father accepted this setting and became very close to the protagonist who he had never met. The protagonist was hit by an old-fashioned pistol and fainted, and the protagonist's father beat him. I'll kill you, a time-traveling evolver, and finally the protagonist starts arranging a plan, letting the protagonist's mother fake death after giving birth to the protagonist, and letting the protagonist's grandmother fake death when he is one year old, and finally settle abroad together, and then the protagonist's father takes another foreigner, and finally the protagonist returns The original timeline is Chapter 330, and then everyone gathers together, starts to reunite as a family, and starts to explain all the calculations How is it possible that this book is not broken or unfinished? You can only read the book before Chapter 323, don't read the rest, it's too bad.

To be honest, the author's description of the battle scenes is really hard to describe. From the moment I saw the monkey appear, I knew it must be the end of the Tathagata God's Palm, and I have been looking forward to it. As a result, after three battles, I felt an old feeling in my heart. . . .

The official test ability should be said to be for martial arts training. Wouldn't the official pay more attention to it? My grandfather would also be taken more seriously, and wouldn't he get more resources?

I don't recommend reading it. The first fifty chapters are a little bit poisonous in terms of adding plot. The protagonist keeps trying to build up his character without adding any understanding (the reason is that a reader just said a few words, but he insisted on doing the opposite? I really can't understand); the middle two hundred chapters are mediocre, with occasional refreshing moments, which is not bad; until the new sister is introduced, it feels really disgusting. As a person who abandoned his wife and children, I don't think the protagonist should have feelings for her. At this time, the author asks us not to take it too seriously? Isn't reading novels about immersion? Now let's not take it seriously! Pooh! I posted a comment on my account but it was deleted and banned. I was also drunk. I ate until I was so good that I couldn't say anything anymore? I didn't criticize anyone. I just said that this routine was cold and tsundere and stupid, so I was banned. Is this author even a little bit bad?

After reading dozens of chapters of this book, I thought there were many poisonous points at first, such as joining the state department at the beginning, and the conversations of various characters, which were not official at all. But if you don't care about this, you will find that the novel is very harmonious, and it is a new author with potential!

It's as bland as water. After reading more than a hundred chapters, it's generally tasteless. It's a pity to abandon it. You can read it when there is a shortage of books. It always makes people feel a little uncomfortable when reading it. The author's writing skills still need to be strengthened. It's okay! Come on

It feels a bit anticlimactic, and the early writing was pretty good. Except for the setting of the bones, which feels a bit low, there are no flaws. But the girl with the inexplicable pendant in the game made me feel uncomfortable, and the reality is also relatively dry, with no highlights.

The writing is obviously okay, but why is the plot deliberately written with an aura of lowering IQ, insisting that all the characters be written as novices (Crayon Shin-chan's novices are smarter than them), this plot is constantly making people feel dizzy, and they can't understand the feeling of going deep into the situation at all, and it feels like their IQ is being rubbed on the ground! You, a junior uncle, have been with your grandfather for decades. You have worked hard to achieve extraordinary things without telling him. You are deliberately trying to fool him. There is a 1 in 10,000 chance that there is news everywhere on the Internet. It is written that other people in their decades are like fools and don't understand anything. Just look at you two and pretend to be awesome! ! ! Your grandpa didn't say anything when he asked you to come back, so why did he ask you to come back? ? ? A man with no talent for practicing martial arts is called back and another extraordinary world inherits the martial arts gym? It's not just a game! It makes me want to vomit. How much benefit did you get from your changes? Is it still a so-called ordinary game? If you improve the root bone, you will improve the root bone. Every time you improve, the path will become dark? Who forced you? While I was talking about how important the bones were, I had no choice but to push it to the end. It made me want to vomit blood! !

Brother! ! ! Have you ever noticed that the quality of books with female characters drops sharply as soon as you write them? 😰 Why not write a "eunuch" protagonist? The plots of these female characters are really awkward.

The new plot is too poisonous, just like Chixiang. This is a good thing, but it's not to my liking.

Game portrait, Roaring Dog

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The biggest problem with this book is the dual-line operation. Modern times and time travel are mixed together, and the modern plot is boring.

It's a pity that the subject matter is so good. I really can't bear to force the protagonist to be wise. In the front, it is clear that you can buy Qi training method to increase your understanding, but what kind of bones can you add to the head iron? In the end, you can finally add a sect or some kind of bone refining sect? Evil sect? I really want to persuade you to quit. The most poisonous thing is to trick the protagonist. No wonder his grades are bad. Bye~ Bye~

It was good at the beginning, but how could it feel like a Chinese fairy tale later on?

Okay, let's die. Finish spreading flowers

I forced my wits down, and everything I saw was an illusion, and I extracted things from the game. When I saw the cheats, I actually thought they were fake! I deserve my bad grades

The more I write about it, the more it has nothing to do with Liaozhai, and my sister is even more outrageous.

You're such a special girl, why don't you post a few chapters to explain?

The vote has been cast. The writing is very good. How come there are so many trolls? It made me fail to click in several times.

It's not that good. With this cheating device, wouldn't it be easy to just find a place and become an immortal and an ancestor? I'm not disgusted with joining the system. That's because you have no choice, but you have a cheating device. It is easy to be exposed after joining the system, this is one of them. Secondly, there is no extra time to guide the copy, which is a waste of time. You must know that you are just an ordinary person without a golden finger. You must be clear about your position and the source of all your strength. If you don't conquer the golden finger, how can you upgrade? It's disgusting to read. The main body of this book is the recovery of spiritual energy. If you have a golden finger, you don't make good use of it. I won't talk about it anymore and abandon it.

The plot of Chapter 177 is a bit tough, the protagonist regards himself as the savior! After overdrafting, I took drugs and got half better, and then I got back to work immediately...

There is one point that I really want to complain about. In the early stage, you are stacking bones like crazy, but later on, you need to use your understanding. Your bones are useless.

I have read Lin 234, now let's take a look at Lin 1 I have to say that the author's writing skills have skyrocketed in the next few books And these seem to be connected together to become Lin Universe

Later, I borrowed things from Buddhism and regretted subscribing to them all. What nonsense did I write later?

I have given all 9 monthly passes. I hope there will be more updates. I will continue to support you. Please give me the best ones.

It's pretty good, but the pace is too fast later and has nothing to do with Liaozhai.

The author is great, please add some details

Don't read it if you don't have a correct outlook on life. Story summary: In the early stage of spiritual recovery, the protagonist obtains a golden finger to cultivate immortality, reciprocates with the country, defeats monsters and ghosts, and gradually reveals the two worlds and his own life experience; the whole process has nothing to do with Liaozhai (this is clearly written in the title of the book) Emotional line: almost nothing. Number of heroines: several.

The first part is okay, but the more I write, the more I can't grasp it.