Dutian Lingguan Road Starting from Daobing

Okay, okay, okay

After being convinced, the fiancée broke off the engagement. The protagonist did not feel embarrassed and even gave her a set of gifts and prepared a bunch of gifts for her. Awesome

Just say that the children of the family in your house have been servants for generations and are very loyal. Can't you focus on nurturing them? If that doesn't work, just use resources to pile up. A large number of 2nd turns can still be piled up. It is illogical to cultivate someone who is the number one beauty.

I can see, but I have diaphragm. The advantage is that the subject matter is better and the story coherence is okay. I saw the abandonment in Chapter 54. I see some people complaining about breaking off the engagement, but I don't think it's a bad point. After all, the manpower is not enough to support it, and the characters of the uncle's family that are created later are also okay. But the problem is that you want to throw Fangshi out, and later because the enemy attacks the Fangshi that you have sent out, you run to help again. That is no different from not sending it out, and you can also return funds; of course, I can also give you a round. It is because you want to avoid the Ying family from using you as a swordsman. However, you should also know that others attacked Fangshi because of you, but you were still so arrogant when you went out for a parade, and the fight lasted for a long time. You waited until one or two of your men were dead before using the Manado Pot. You didn't have enough manpower, but you were so showy at the same time. When Zhou Mu comes back later, he won't take advantage of others and accuse them. It's best if he can cry and complain. You say the beauty of a gentleman will be killed in five lifetimes. But don't worry about whether to kill or not. It's best if it's effective, and it doesn't matter if it's ineffective. It's not impressive. Not to mention that based on your background, you think the Xun family may not occupy the stage for you, but Zhou Mu will definitely not dare to kill you. Another one wants level 3 people from your family. You don't have level 3 people. If you don't say it, they may not ask for your rampant soldiers afterwards. If you say it, they will definitely want it! Okay, I'm rounding it up for you. You want to develop a wave there, as an excuse to change the development map. But the mage who is about to reach level 3 and is the eldest son of the Xun family at level 3 later greeted Zhou Mu. Zhou Mu may not necessarily treat you like a biological father, but he will definitely I won't refuse you. Zhou Mu only needs to mention something, and it works. In modern times, let alone feudal society, there should be no unpleasant things, but the result is the old-fashioned plot of pretending to slap people in the face, and still using Zhou Mu and the eldest son of the Xun family to suppress others. The other thing is that someone gave you the Waidan method, but you still picked it up, and the character didn't like it. In short, it is a pity to throw away the food if it is tasteless and tasteless.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So how long has it been and you are still fishing without updating? Are you worthy of everyone?

Do you think there is a future for working hard?

The protagonist is too crazy. The emperor takes the protagonist to go to the ancient history. The protagonist not only frees his subordinates, but also participates in the journey to the west. He has caused huge karma. How can he pay it back in the future? Besides, you are already so crazy that you are a half-immortal killing a true immortal, and then you use a true immortal to defeat the upper immortal. How powerful you introduced the upper immortal to you in the beginning, and how much you will pull your crotch later!        ，，，，，，，！ Crossing two levels to point out the Immortal Ancestor's mistakes is really exciting. The strict laws in front of you are all nonsense. Several Taoist palace officials have offended you, and you are killing three tribes! Besides, the character of the Left-behind Immortal Ancestor is a small-minded person. He would snatch every opportunity for his own daughter to become an immortal. Do you really think he wouldn't dare to cut the protagonist alive? His own family has been in charge of the Taoist court for thousands of years, doesn't he understand how powerful it is? Also, Dugu Sword Immortal did not obey military orders and ran to the main battlefield to grab credit, which almost led to the annihilation of the entire army below the True Immortal. He was not punished, refused to do anything, and received a huge amount of merit. It is outrageous. After all, the impartial law enforcement of the two Immortal Ancestors is still the same as that of aristocratic families, and even the disrespect for the emperor on the battlefield seems to have never happened. It is too serious! What I hate the most is the journey to Ancient History. The bosses in Journey to the West are at least Daluo Jinxian who is plotting this situation. The protagonist is still playing tricks and showing off his superiority. To be honest, I feel that the protagonist's combat power is not even as good as that of Ruyi Zhenxian. When the protagonist entered the Emperor Universe, he said that Taoism is different and his strength cannot be used. There is no such restriction when entering Ancient History. It's really funny! It's still the kind of keyboard warrior mentality. If you are below yourself, the laws are strict; above yourself, everyone is equal!

Poison Point 1: No excitement, the content jumps forward, the perspective is confused, the content is not whitened, and the description cannot be transformed into a scene in the mind. Poison point 2: The transition is abrupt and the content is indifferent, which is very dramatic. There is no link to the plot, just write whatever comes to mind. Poison Point 3: The combat power is confused, the characteristics are not obvious, and the fighting scenes are simply written in a jumping style. Poisonous Point 4: When describing the protagonist's aura, there is an inexplicable and strange intellect. It feels very awkward and disconnected from the previous description. Poison Point 5: The grand scene described has no feeling at all, the details are insufficient, incomplete, and mechanically applied. It feels like you know that I won't write everything, which is really outrageous.

I wrote a lot of foreshadowing before, but suddenly I found a half-demon subordinate to be my wife, and then I got another half-demon? ? ? It's really poisonous. , I really can't stand it anymore. Farewell.

Damn it, I really can't stand it anymore Chapter 29 Damn it, you're just an idiot. Damn it. If you can't beat me, just run away. If you can beat me, then beat me. Damn it. If you can't beat me, you've killed so many people by pretending. Damn it. You're still blaming people for asking for help.

It was okay before Chapter 20, but after Chapter 20 it was too discouraging, forced to reduce intelligence, and the more you write, the more poisonous it becomes. Other authors become more deified as they go to the back, but you become more poisonous as you go to the back 😰

This Qiongming Wang family has so many things to do. The protagonist's family died without any help. The protagonist came to pick peaches as soon as he got a little developed. The protagonist asked Qiongming Zhenxian to take the credit without saying a word. However, when there was a problem, the protagonist was left to deal with it. It was really disgusting. It was like no one else in Kyushu and the protagonist was asked to do all the bad things. The protagonist immediately Instead, the Ji family will take the credit, and Ji family will not deal with these bad things. Let me say that the protagonist should develop his own power more and take less control of the bad things within Kyushu. Whoever enjoys the resources of Kyushu should fulfill his responsibilities. Stop writing those embarrassing and disgusting plots. If you keep writing like this, don't become like the Ninth Destiny.

I don't know what the author wanted to write about, but it's not fun, it's not deep enough, and it's half-white but not white.

The main body is based on the Taoist court as the shell. It is actually centered on each family and uses the family to protect and practice. But the funny thing is that the protagonist refers to the family as a hairy person. The blood descendants of the entire family are the protagonist and his sister. As mentioned earlier, it is strange that his father and grandfather wiped out the entire army led by more than a dozen members of the family. The family has been passed down for so many years and only these few people. These few people, if the leader wants to go on an adventure, he has to bring his whole family with him. Didn't you think of the risk of annihilation? As the head of the family, he goes out on an adventure and leaves no one behind. Although it is said that he mainly focuses on Taoism, I feel that the protagonist should be a little stallion first, find a few interesting people, and add a few people to the family. Don't let the protagonist die, and the Wu family will be gone.

After reading Chapter 22, I have no desire to continue reading. Just listen to your personal opinions. 1. The protagonist is frivolous, arrogant and self-righteous. 2. At present, the mainstream and Taoist soldiers are very mixed. One is supplies, the other is status, and the combat power has increased due to the establishment of an organic system. 3. Family resources, trump cards, own combat power, etc. Have no priority. 4 Plot, the core development feels too slow. It can be explained completely from the front, but it has to be explained later.

Test the Poison After reading dozens of chapters, I found out that it turned out to be a second-generation immortal who said, "How can you accumulate more than my family has accumulated over several generations in ten years of poverty?" Disrespect! Rare! 🙂 But your family has such a terrifying background, which makes your family's predecessors even more unbearable. How weak or stupid do you have to be to break up your family and die violently? 🙂 Another brother said it for me. I also don't think there is anything wrong with breaking off the engagement at the beginning. Although the handling is average, it is not a poisonous point.

There are ideas but the writing is not good. Judging from the protagonist's situation, it is obviously his own private army. The protagonist contributes money and effort, and decades later others can join others. It is simply stupid and not modern. In ancient times, if you served as a soldier for him, you would either retire on his family's territory when he reached the age, or you would sign a confidentiality agreement and then arrange it for your own industry. There is no reason why you should not do it after decades of work before reaching your twilight years.

The protagonist is very picky about all the women he accepts. He may not betray her, but it can easily cause trouble for the protagonist and reveal all kinds of things that no one should know. And treated differently, other people are not disappointed? For example, Banshee, the protagonist's treatment as his sister is very bad.

It looked good at the beginning, but in the end, it was a sudden twist in order to change the map for the protagonist to participate in the external expedition. What the hell was written? Chapter 21 The author has clearly written down the background of the three camps of the Wu clan. The second battalion was rewarded by the Wu clan for participating in the external expedition more than ten years ago and the direct lineage of the annihilation of the Taoist court. Then in Chapter 38, Zhou Mu, who participated in the external expedition and returned to Xiu Mu, just refused to provide justice to the assassinated protagonist. He also wanted the protagonist, a direct descendant of the Wu family, to be punished the same as other aristocratic families?

Provide free support to the Taoist soldiers, and let the Taoist soldiers share the spoils among themselves 😰

The writing style is too young, and the narrative details are unclear, which bothers me.

Ever since that wedding succubus, I've felt that it's nonsense

Finally finished the book, let the author start a new one, make a better outline, the writing is very good, just don't be lazy, polish the plot, and write at a slower pace

I don't know if it's right or not, but the direction in the article is like this

Happy New Year, good health and all the best

To be honest, you can still see it from the front, but the closer you get to the back, the more water you get.

It's over if you keep it together😐

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Is it over in a daze? No one explained it clearly, so they blocked the author 😓