
The Sword Emerges from Ancient Yue
金光之剑出古岳
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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490Chapters
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This game has many problems, but I dare to kill Akabane
I'm fed up with other Jinguang fandoms letting Nishijian Ryu go, and you've started writing fanfics. You won't even kill such a serious Japanese pirate, so what else are you writing fanfics for?
If I feel that for the author, your second setting of Miyamoto Souji makes me feel a little uncomfortable. His personality is equivalent to a righteous senior like Wu Ming, which makes you seem to be petty.
Suggestions for future development
In fact, Jin Guang's plot is very strong, unlike Pili's character creation that focuses on Gu Long style. In the early stage of Jin Guang, Sanxian-based screenwriters focused on plot lines and clearly divided the levels of force. Therefore, similar to Jin Yong, it is difficult for each character to die unless the plot You have to die in love to be written to death, which leads to the fact that in terms of plot, Golden Light fandoms can easily fall into the same genre. For example, after fighting against the Western Sword Style, facing the demonic world, through plot intelligence, they gain an advantage and obtain the Ghost Seal to rule the Shura Empire. Many fans have taken this path. The author can come up with a new idea, unify the Central Plains and establish a real armed force organization of the Central Plains, fight against the demon world and the Miao territory, pursue the ultimate power, fight against the Yuanxie Emperor, or even seek the position of the Mohist giant and Zhi Ge Liu.
Take my move, the Lotus Holy Road will open to the sky
Tasteless
There is serious personal involvement. The main character is fond of intrigues and selfishness, and is also very disconnected. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel like he is just a camera.
There are so many private goods that the characters are fragmented and the plot is contradictory.
What's the use of the protagonist? There's no plot change at all.
The most disgusting thing when watching the drama is that they insist on blowing off the little book, and it would be better to kill them all.
Don't write so fast. It's not like you are in a hurry to finish. The most exciting part of Golden Light is when Enma starts to reach the peak of Mo Wuxia, where Xuan Zhixuan is the villain. The level of each subsequent part has dropped visibly to the naked eye. Now that the most outstanding villains have been written to death, the next few bosses are basically pure numerical force bosses. Xuan Zhixuan and Wang Jinyan feel like they can all be written as branch bosses. I feel like these chapters are just to reduce variables and writing pressure, just like a series of "Thunderbolt" that took away the characters from the previous part and sent them crazy lunches.
If the food is tasteless, it would be a pity to throw it away.
The only reason why people can watch it may be the IP of Jinguang. The author has no concept of hatred between country and family, which makes people feel sad. Reading it kind of made me feel like watching Lu Taijun's "Nanjing Nanjing" again.