The Sword Emerges from Ancient Yue

I'm fed up with other Jin Guang fanfics leaving west Jian Liu alone. You've started writing fanfics, and you don't even kill these serious Japanese pirates? What kind of fanfics are you writing?

If I feel uncomfortable with your interpretation of Miyamoto Souji, it's because his character is supposed to be a righteous senior figure like the Nameless One, but you've made him seem petty and calculating.

In fact, Jin Guang's plot is very strong. Unlike Pili, which focuses on character development in the style of Gu Long, Jin Guang's early scripts, primarily written by Sanxian, emphasize plot lines and clearly define the power levels. Therefore, similar to Jin Yong, characters rarely die unless the plot necessitates it. This leads to a high likelihood of similar plots in Jin Guang fanfiction.

Take this move, the Lotus Holy Path opens with heavenly light.

The story is heavily influenced by personal agendas. The protagonist is a complex character who enjoys scheming and intrigue, is selfish, and is quite contradictory. After reading dozens of chapters, it feels like watching a webcam.

Too much personal bias leads to inconsistent character development and plot inconsistencies.

What's the point of having a main character? There's absolutely no plot development!

What I find most disgusting while watching dramas is the constant hype surrounding the script; I wish they were all cut.

Don't write so fast! Rushing to finish is not the way to go. The most exciting part of Jin Guang is from the beginning of Yan Mo to the time when Xuan Zhi Xuan became the villain, Mo Wuxia Peak. The quality of each subsequent part has visibly declined. Now that the most outstanding villains have been killed off, the later bosses are basically pure numerical combat-type bosses.

The only reason it's still readable is probably because of the "Jin Guang" IP. The author's lack of understanding of national and personal grievances is very distressing. Reading it gave me a feeling of rereading Lu Taijun's "Nanjing Nanjing."