Going Crazy in the Wizarding World with Ying

Why are the authors who write HP less and less careless now? They only care about venting their own emotions, completely ignoring the background and character framework of HP. A lot of things are completely taken for granted. The author wants to create a beautiful, powerful and miserable protagonist, without considering the logic of the plot at all... I'm really... Speechless😓 Can you read more information, or watch some background explanation videos? If you really can't stand it, you can play a game. The interaction of the characters is completely taken for granted

I have read nearly 150 chapters. To be honest, the love scene between the protagonist and his grandfather's family in the early stage was really vicious. The protagonist was like a clown who kept touching himself. After learning the truth and being hit with a life-killing curse, he was actually threatened and made an indestructible one. Really, if not Other plots attracted me, and I was about to give up the book. Another point was that his grandfather's family appeared in the magic mirror, which really made me sick again. He was so worthless and so in need of love. To be honest, the author is not saying that we can't have love, but in the love relationship you described, the protagonist is like a dog. The other plots are very good. As long as you handle this aspect well, this book will be T0 so far. In the end, it's true that it's okay to take care of his grandson, but his grandpa's family really shouldn't lick him. His grandpa put a curse on him since he was a child. After he saved his family from vampires, he cast a death curse in his hand. This is his 11-year-old grandson. Is this a human being? Do you still want to lick him? This point really discourages me from being a fan, and there are really very few good fanfics. This book already has the potential to become a high-quality product. It would be a pity if it was pulled because of the protagonist's dog-licking attributes. I hope the author can handle the protagonist's grandfather's family scenes carefully in the future.

How should I put it, the portrayal of Dumbledore is almost meaningless                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Dumbledore ' s portrayal, is almost meaningless. If Lao Deng insists on using conspiracy theories to explain, it is also a kind of "rule by inaction". It's not like jumping up and down, or even saying some very dishonorable things, or doing some very cowardly behavior It's just sitting there quietly, using unmatched power and prestige as the support point, and using the lever of love to leverage the "general trend" So whether it's the banquet when Al returns, or the subsequent trip to the giant. It is not suitable for Dumbledore himself, and even the description of all Dumbledore's psychological activities should not appear. If he has to do it himself, then all positive descriptions of his psychological activities should be removed, especially his inner thoughts. For this type of character, his psychological activities should be left blank, allowing readers to make up their own minds through his external performance.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       .         ， He is the boss of the highest joint court and review body in the wizarding world, as well as the boss of the Wizards United Organization. If we have to use actual official positions to make a comparison, Lao Deng can be compared to the Prime Minister and Supreme Judge of Japan, and Fudge is just equivalent to the Governor of Tokyo. Although the two are two systems, they are still divided into upper and lower systems. And he is also the principal of the only educational institution for wizards in the Commonwealth. All talents must pass through him first. If it were Dumbledore who was fighting against Grindelwald, perhaps the Minister of Magic could have a fight with him. At that time, he was just a middle-aged man, his strength had not reached its peak, and he did not have the huge prestige accumulated over a hundred years

I don't quite understand the writing. At first I thought it was about one person and one elf taking revenge, then I inserted a bunch of relatives and friends, and then the Ministry of Magic. I can understand it until now, but I don't understand it because I went to see my mother whom I had never met before and then compromised... Now I feel like a domestic slave with three surnames...

Well written, the plot is exciting. But if the current plot continues, I'm afraid it will become a legacy of Hogwarts😂

The previous writing was okay, but the level dropped rapidly from the time he entered school. The protagonist became indecisive and restrained in everything. There was also an inexplicable relationship between family and friendship.

You've become a bankrupt since you first came out, and you've set up your identity as a tyrant?

Just to make a rant, the French royal family went into exile in England. A bit difficult to stretch.

This protagonist is really, sometimes a primary school student, sometimes an adult, sometimes a normal person, sometimes a dark and disabled person, sometimes lacking love, sometimes a super hero, sometimes a rational person, sometimes a neurotic... Really schizophrenic...

In fact, the writing is okay, but there are suspicions of abuse of the protagonist in the early stage. It's really exciting to see how the protagonist is in danger. Although sometimes the protagonist is quite neurotic, in most cases he is very ordinary and has no special personality. Generally speaking, the madness is not very complete. It is either really crazy, or it just darkly roars twice after being stimulated. There is no fun to watch.

I'm not going to talk about all kinds of crazy laughter without any emotion or motivation. I can't empathize at all. I just feel embarrassed after seeing it. The protagonist's motivation can be said to be inexplicable, inexplicable anger, inexplicable sneer, inexplicable contempt, and he gets mad at every turn. Doesn't he have a mouth? Can't speak and communicate? It does have the flavor of post-modern psychosis. Also, don't you know who the author of Lockhart's style review is? I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 51. I'm still engaging in a partner drama here. I think there are too many readers, right?

The writing makes me almost evolve into an Uchiha.

The plot design is okay, but the protagonist is a mess. He almost looks like a psycho. He is mature and mentally retarded at one time.

I am neither a good person nor a bad person. I just want to kill all the people in the world who are worse than me. This book is simply the best for me.

It might be more appropriate to change your name to make yourself look bad in the wizarding world.

This book only contains two words: "Constructing History"

Come on, come on, come on, it's not enough

The Third French Empire severely tortured the magic world, and it was so interesting to reverse the course of history 😊 And didn't Voltaire act like a philosopher king? He even blew Qianlong to the sky () If a capable Louis came to power, he would be the first to support the monarchy.

I feel like the author should suppress his urge to express his next book and write more outlines, plot settings, etc. 😅

The theme of power struggle in Harry Potter is rare, and the writing aspect of this book is indeed unique and does not follow the plot. Although it is niche, it seems quite novel to me. Come on, author, I hope the protagonist will be able to say, "You don't even want to call me King Louis" one day.

Just a few more chapters and no more?

No, why is it updated again? How can anyone come to see it like this? You might as well cut it into a new one. I still quite like this style

? Won the Easter match

The book is good, but it's a pity that I didn't figure out the starting point recommendation mechanism. I was dragged down by the title of the book, so that if I want to read this kind of book, I can't find it. Those who occasionally glimpse it may not like fan fiction.

As the title says, the content is a bit problematic in dealing with some relationships, but the story is good, and for me personally, eh it's okay