Dedicated to the Imperial Examination, You Say You Are Bai Suzhen?

The first few chapters were okay, but by chapter twelve it was a bit unbearable. Perhaps the author wanted to make the protagonist a little more free and uninhibited to make the plot more lively. But free and easy and unconventional are two different things. Nonsense may make the audience feel interesting in the movie, but it depends more on the actor's interpretation. If it were a worse actor, the perception would be completely different. It's like watching several classics starring Stephen Chow and the Mermaid he directed. It feels completely different. It is extremely difficult to make good use of nonsensical elements in text novels, and it can even be said that it is almost impossible. Just like this section sung by Zhao Cailiang, some readers may smile knowingly, but it is just because they think of Stephen Chow's movie clips, not because your writing is interesting. Text novels require readers to draw pictures in their brains through the words they read, so words have "inertia". When your plot and description violate this "inertia", readers will subconsciously feel that "something is wrong", and a novel that is "something wrong" cannot be read.

You have set the position of the protagonist too high. No matter how you recruit the most talented person who has great popularity among the people, he will not be a fool. It is full of contradictions.

The writing is nonsensical, but the main character looks like a fool 😅 It would be okay if you watch a movie or something, the words are really speaking, but your brain feels like it is just for your own entertainment.

Nowadays, if the character of the protagonist is well written, it will be very comfortable to read. I am increasingly unable to stand the greasy and frivolous protagonist.

Chapter 12: Run away! The protagonist doesn't understand medicine, so he suddenly takes out a pill and feeds it to someone, and he writes like Bai Suzhen is a fool! Twelve hundred years of experience and cultivation wasted?

It's just a nonsensical and funny question, okay?

The subject matter is very good, but it's too greasy. If I write more seriously, I think it will become popular.

How to put it, you can understand that Bai Suzhen can eat you in one bite, forget it if you have no ability to resist, and still run around and jump around to tease others. If you are not at home, a passing dog can kill you. Nonsense is funny, but just being nonsensical makes you speechless. That is called a clown. If you offend people, they will slap you to death. You are too proud.

The protagonist of the novel has a kind of innocent beauty! What a prosthetic eye Dingzhen! And the protagonist smiles very innocently

Ten thousand collections, still a eunuch?

The protagonist is a human succubus, right? The so-called Zhu Yingtai and Min Xiaoyue fell in love with the protagonist after meeting each other twice?

The recent reviews have been all negative, but this is all phased. I think it's fine, smooth and fun. It's just that compared to before, the protagonist is indeed portrayed a bit like a puppet. I hope you won't interrupt the update because of this comment.

😐No one can write this subject better than Xu Xianzhi.

The internal investment in this book has passed, you can invest with confidence, please collect and read 😁😁

Thank you for recommending a new book of the same type.