Myriad Worlds: Douluo Starts Up

Write your own opinion It feels very ordinary. At the beginning, the three villages with Tang were born with full soul power, and then joined the Spirit Hall with this status. How to say it? A little bit crazy. The first point is that the time is unreasonable. The time from awakening to when Tang Hao knew the awakening of the martial spirit should not be 2 to 3 hours (as you can see from the original text, after cooking and ironing for a while, the awakening of the martial spirit was picked up, and then the time to see Tang Hao was lunch time. Excluding the travel time, it should be 2 to 3 hours. Let's just say, a great soul master of more than 20 levels with a To be honest, I really wanted to laugh when the little kid got rid of the title Douluo. Especially since there is basically only one road back to the town, Tang Hao is definitely chasing him. The second point is that he joins Bibi Dong's Wuhun Palace as a man with full soul power.

If you also bring a full-time mage world, it is best to awaken the spiritual system for the protagonist. This thing in Love Continent is like the water attribute skills in One Piece, and the special attack is directly maxed out.

Contra-level wolf thief, real or fake Don't talk about other people's descriptions of the heroine YY, forget it once or twice, you must come here once when you go out, it's really one of the best roast chicken Douluo people seem to be a little bit You are so brave. You dare to take action without knowing any information. You are really not afraid of being kicked to death by a passing master Why are you so nice to Zhu Zhuqing? If you accept it, don't let Shrek go. If you don't accept it, why are you licking your face and rushing to give money?

I haven't read the many unresolved poisonous points in the comments, so I haven't opened my desire.

How does the author plan to deal with Wuhun Palace. After all, the Wuhun Palace is the force of the Angel God. If the protagonist wants to develop his own power or belief base, he cannot avoid the Wuhun Palace. I feel that Wuhun Palace will be weakened like the Holy City in Versatile Mage, becoming the overlord of one party instead of the sole master.

Should astronomical progress be faster?

Generally speaking, many sentences are not very fluent.

The author could use less "~" symbol, it would be a bit confusing

What are the 9 soul rings and 9 attributes of the protagonist? The first 5 are the five elements, which are the basis. Sixth can be the spiritual attribute, using Tian Meng's million-year soul ring as the true body of the martial soul. The 7th and 8th can be time and space to increase means and self-protection ability. After all, the enemies at this time are basically super Douluo. Ninth I don't know what it will be. The protagonist also has a gate to the heavens. You can consider using this as a basis to develop the ninth attribute.

The author has made enough money to write this book, so he can no longer write well.