Myriad Worlds: Douluo Starts Up

Write down your thoughts It felt pretty average. He started with full innate soul power from three villages alongside Tang, and then joined the Spirit Hall under that identity. How to put it? It was a bit irrational. The first point is the inconsistency of the timeline.

If it also includes the world of Full-Time Magister, it would be best to awaken the Mind-type ability in the protagonist. In the Romance Continent, this is like the Water-type skill in One Piece, which directly maxes out special attack.

A Contra-level wolf thief, is that real? Let's cut down on other people's fantasies about the female lead. Once or twice is one thing, but to come here every time she goes out—she's truly a top-tier jerk. The Douluo Continent cultivator seems a bit too reckless, daring to attack without knowing anything. Is he really not afraid of being kicked to death by a passing expert?

I have no desire to open it before even seeing all the unresolved issues in the comments.

How does the author intend to deal with the Spirit Hall? After all, the Spirit Hall is the power of the Angel God, and the protagonist cannot avoid dealing with it if he wants to develop his own power or faith base. I feel that the Spirit Hall will be weakened, like the Holy City in Full-Time Magister, and become a regional overlord rather than the sole ruler.

Shouldn't the progress of astronomy be accelerated?

Generally, many sentences are not very fluent.

The author could use the "~" symbol less often; it's a bit distracting.

The protagonist has 9 spirit rings, each with a different attribute. What are they? The first five are the Five Elements, which form the foundation. The sixth could be a spiritual attribute, such as using Tianmeng's million-year soul ring as the true form of a martial soul.

The author made enough money with their last book and isn't writing properly anymore.