Yuntai Immortal Clan

Novels like Xiuxian Family are not suitable for writing protagonists. A family is everyone's family, not a person's growth history. If you read too much about the protagonist of Destiny, it will become boring. I hope the author can change the traditional concept and continue the story with a family instead of an individual. If there must be a protagonist, then I hope it will be the majority of talented people, not a certain one.

Family stories that are not group portraits will eventually become a one-man show for the protagonist.

They all predicted that someone would attack the iron mine, and they were still taking luck. They were sure that someone would come before seeking shelter. They had no emotional intelligence and couldn't stand it.

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It was interesting at first, but the more you watch, the less interesting it becomes.

If the family story insists on having a protagonist with a golden finger (the protagonist himself guarantees the finale and wins all the way), then the rest of the family must respond promptly and exit in time. In a happy ending like Battle Through the Sky, the named dead are almost all male villains, and none of the women die. How can it reflect the cruelty of the world of immortality and the sorrow of a weak family?

The family article is so plain and ordinary, do you really have the nerve to write it down? Not to mention the three golden chapters, even two hundred chapters are useless. It is not a time-travel novel. It has no golden finger, no spiritual roots, no parental bonds, and no strong support from the family. This is also worthy of cultivating immortals. Even if the immortal comes to the world, you can't write anything. The poison is too great. No chance can save this kind of waste.

There is something wrong with the author's setting. Since it's a family story, you must develop the family. The protagonist is not a saint, so the family must give him a lot of help in the early stage. The protagonist's spiritual roots are so poor, the family will definitely not give too many resources. This makes people feel very bad. Moreover, if the spiritual roots are too poor, a lot of adventures will be required, which will make many viewers feel uncomfortable. I feel that dual spiritual roots are quite good. The family will provide resources to cultivate them, and adventure encounters do not require too many. It is normal to practice quickly. In this way, it is normal and logical to repay the family. Let's see what the author writes 😁

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The protagonist feels like Zhang Wuji before building the foundation

It's very well written, but I don't know if I can stick with it.

For family novels, you should learn from Immortality Everlasting. The early stages of Immortality Everlasting are still more detailed, so the author should learn from it.

I like it very much, very exciting content

Why hasn't it been updated yet? Is it out of date?

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