After the Heavens Fell

What is this thing written by Lafayette? ? ? ? I paid for your reputation and wrote it like this. You might as well not write this book to ruin your reputation. Who dares to speak out of conscience? Please pay me the money I paid for the chapter before you reply.

1. The collapse of combat power The early writing was okay, but it became boring after imprisoning ghosts. The combat power collapsed, sometimes strong and sometimes weak. Practicing multiple methods at the same time is not as good as traditional cultivation of immortals. As a result, when I went to practice Taoism, I inexplicably crushed the immortals. Second, the cow-horse robot The protagonist is too busy and tired from watching. As soon as he has achieved some success in practice, he immediately goes out to wander again. Either on the way to wandering or on the way to find trouble, one world has not been fully explored yet he changes to another. Third, complaints about the plot World No. 36 Went too early. The author wanted to bring the protagonist of the previous book over to gain popularity, right? A plot where the crowd fell in love with you just because they took one look at you? Just because the protagonist is also haunted by ghosts, he takes extra care of him? Later, she became a nanny, and the protagonist of this book lost her character at all.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       <br

This is the author's true level, right? It's watery and smelly.

It's hard to imagine that it's the same author as Mysterious Resurrection

I admit that I came to make up for the mystery, but this really doesn't make up for anything 😅

It's not good to watch. It's even a bit ugly. It's purely for the horror recovery. It ended up being a mess of chapters. The later chapters are the same as or even worse than those written by AI.

{"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"}{"TopicId":"1008456628351991808","TopicName":"After Heaven"}  My name is Li Yang, and I am a ghost controller, and my wife's name is Huang Ziya. We are both ghost controllers. In our world, the evil ghosts have revived, and the world is like a prison. We are all poor people struggling in the last days. In order to survive, we have to go to the end to control ghosts. Then this is just a prick from the ants, and in the end we will still die from the ghost's resurrection.                                                                   I have a captain, and I respect the captain as a god. When the captain went to end the supernatural era, Huang Ziya and I couldn't hold on anymore, so we had to go into the ghost coffin. In the end, the captain succeeded. Since there are ghosts in this world, there should be gods. He used humans to become gods, but we can't wait for him. We have turned into ghosts, and I can't wait for him. Captain: See you in the next life! Until one day I heard a sentence: Li Yang, before you wake up, I opened my eyes and saw the captain. Am I not dead? At this time, the captain said: You are all dead, but I resurrected you. I am a god now. You can live a good life in the future. After all, we are too miserable. At this time, I remembered Huang Ziya's laughter next to me, and I laughed too. Thank you, captain. After that, Huang Ziya and I got together, and we gave birth to a big fat boy. We asked the captain to name him Li Yi, which means that Yi is brave and unique throughout the ages. We both like him very much. Time passed very quickly. In the blink of an eye, Li Yi was almost 15 years old. On this day, the captain found our husband and wife and told us that now all the ghosts have been driven to another world. He suspected the origin of ghosts at that time and wanted us to go to that world and cultivate a new god, and then cooperate from the inside out to completely end the supernatural era. We agreed. Before leaving, the captain asked us to control the ghosts again for our safety. I controlled the knocking ghosts, the sleeping ghosts, and the ghosts who owned the ghost domain in addition to the original number of ghosts. There were six ghosts in total, and they became aliens. Ziya was almost the same. That day, the captain split the river of time with a halberd, and then we came to this world, but our husband and wife discovered that there were no ghosts in this world, and the ghosts in our bodies were also suppressed. What was going on. Finally, we had no choice but to settle down in Tianchang City in this world. Xiao Yi also woke up and grew up slowly. I am waiting and I believe in the captain... Six years later, Li Yi was almost 22 years old. On this day, the sky of this world collapsed. I saw the ghosts flowing into this world like taking out garbage. At this moment, I understood that the captain broke time when he sent us off and sent us to this world in advance. At this time, we understood that it was time. In the end, Ziya and I decided to pretend to be Silent Ones, fall into a deep sleep, and then secretly protect and train Li Yi to become a new god. I believe Li Yi can do it, because the name Li Yi was given by my captain. His name is Yang Jian, and his god's name is "Yang Jian". Finally, let us look forward to the new god taking the throne...{"TopicId":"589 789696981467136","TopicName":"Mysterious Recovery"}{"TopicId":"866597508884529152","TopicName":"Famous Scene"}

It is recommended to skip reading the first 200 chapters and subscribe based on the titles you are interested in. Unless you must appreciate Fo Ye's ghost-like writing style, I do not recommend reading it carefully. After the next 223 chapters, you will be connected to the mysterious world of recovery.

Seriously, old Buddha, let's just finish this book with 500 chapters. It's already written like this anyway, wouldn't it be nice to just start a new book?

After being put on the shelf, Crazy Hydrology has several chapters that can be summarized in one sentence. The three chapters on measuring the absorption rate even have a combined information density of only one sentence, so the book was abandoned.

I read two hundred and seventy chapters in one go, and the aura of the protagonist Li Yi is comparable to that of the sun. The rhythm is very different from "Mysterious Resurrection", and it can basically be called an invincible and refreshing novel. There is a section that goes through parallel time and space to the world of mysterious resurgence. It feels like reading the mysterious resurgence for the first time. It is weird, as if you are facing the test of life and death with the protagonist. Although "Under the Heaven" has a lot of settings, including urban ghosts cultivating immortals and time travel, and even a dungeon flow, it seems a bit mixed but not refined. Leaving "Mysterious Resurrection", the world of "Under the Sky" seems very boring. It can't be just hunting strange beasts, right, and then the evil underground prisoners fight around? In fact, it can be seen that the author wants to support the world view of "Under the Heaven", and even copied Yang Jian. It seems that he wants to create multiple male protagonists or group portraits? It can also be seen that the author is not very satisfied with the ending of "Mysterious Resurrection". There should be more linkages in the future, hiding the real ending in this new book. However, the author seems to want to challenge himself more, constantly trying in the writing method of multiple elements, constantly opening up his imagination while traveling in multiple worlds, and practicing his writing skills in the portrayal of multiple characters. Personally, I think this is a work with great potential. If you can make use of its strengths and avoid its weaknesses, and write more in the places that should be highlighted, you should get good results.

After reaching chapter 100, I couldn't listen anymore. It was too awkward and wordy. I skipped to chapter 170. It was too boring and I withdrew.

This book is considered a masterpiece, and it's actually pretty good to read, but the plot is too slow and the updates are too slow. It can't be compared with mystery. Mystery is so scary that I missed a chapter. If you finish reading it in one sitting, this novel belongs to the first echelon of those masterpieces.

Anyone who has read Mysterious Resurrection should know that the author's writing is not very good (readers who are thinking of reading Yang Jian can run away, there are only a few appearances and almost no roles, Yang Wei is the same). This book is even more "progressing at a rapid pace", the writing is extremely bad, and the articles It is extremely confusing, all kinds of bugs emerge in endlessly, and the realm is extremely chaotic (from the Three Flower Realm of the end of Dharma cultivation, the Great Demon of the Demon God, and the Mahayana of the Mysterious Immortal, the evolvers in the same realm are basically beaten by the Immortal Cultivator, the Spiritual God targets the Nascent Soul, and the Spiritual Tribulation is directly forced to pass through the Tribulation, and the Three Flowers' The first flower realm is against the Mahayana, the second flower human immortal, and the third flower true immortal. One flower is beaten by the big demon and cannot beat the second flower, but at the same time he is afraid of the Mahayana? There is an endless stream of intelligent scenes, and the author has a very good understanding of human hearts. He can always inadvertently write characters that make readers sick, and he has a good way of describing fools. The protagonist is like a pig standing in the wind, with no brains, all because the "wind" is strong enough. In summary, this book is rated seven out of ten on a tomato scale. It would be unreasonable to do so, and it would make readers unhappy. It is not worth subscribing to read!

The writing in the early stage is good, the world of martial arts and the world of the end of the law are very exciting. The dark world is eye-catching (personal feeling), but it is a bit watered down when it comes to the stage of cultivating demons and gods. The combat power in the middle and late stages collapses directly. And the reason is too far-fetched, isn't it? Can bathing in some Tianzun's blood help you improve without any problems? Then can't other Tianzun spread their blood to improve the family's combat power? And from the middle to late stages, Li Yi was basically invincible and kept writing running accounts. The most important thing is that it is still unfinished and ends inexplicably. I'll give it all back! ! !

It's not about mysterious resuscitation. This book is really a fool's errand. It's both watery and intellectual.

Why do everyone say it's not great, but I think it's really beautiful?

You might say Pig's Feet is profound, but sometimes he's quite innocent. You might say he's naive, but sometimes he's quite cruel. This is equivalent to a world after the apocalypse, where Pig's Feet comes from the slums. Logically speaking, you can't be so innocent, right? Look at Palestinian children, are they really that innocent? What kind of environment supports the kind of people? No matter what, we must pursue the actual situation, right? Isn't this forcibly lowering IQ? You Shuangwenliu, Shuangwenliu has nothing to do with it Plot flow, the plot is also dragged out, leaving room for everything Currently there are 800 starting coins left, automatic subscription, nothing special, goodbye after the automatic subscription is used up

My name is Zhang Lei. When you read this sentence, I should still be alive. I am the captain of the Investigation Bureau and the boss of all investigators. At 8:15, I arrived at the Incomparably Familiar Investigation Bureau, "Strange? It's a bit quiet today." I greeted the investigators I met, and everyone looked at me calmly without any reaction. "Is there something on my face?" I looked at the glass, it was normal. "~~hurry" "?" I turned around and saw that the corridor leading to the office was empty. Maybe I heard it wrong. I opened the door and entered the house. The door handle was a little wet. Is there a leak there? Training Ground No. 3. "What are you kidding about... Hmm" A young man was about to scream when a person next to him quickly covered his mouth. He took out his mobile phone, operated it and handed it to the young man. 'Li Yi, don't say anything, this is a negative space! It is the unique ability of extraordinary creatures! ' Li Yi replied on his mobile phone: 'I understand Wang Jian, but how do you know you can't speak out? ' 'You should understand by looking at everyone's eyes that this extraordinary creature is definitely not using its eyes! ' Li Yi looked up and saw several people standing upright in the training ground. These people were both male and female, and their faces were dull. The most important thing was that their eyes were gouged into two 'bloody holes'! I turned on the monitoring, and there was no one in the training room No. 1 And No. 2. There were a few people in the training room No. 3, Motionless. "What are you doing? Pretend to be a ghost!" I just picked up the walkie-talkie and suddenly found that my hands were itchy and my blood vessels were bulging, as if something was crawling. I just lowered my head and wondered why I couldn't see my hands? Strange, why is it so dark before my eyes? Strange, it seems like something is touching my head, so warm, so warm. "What are you playing... Team...! You... Back!" I seemed to hear my team members calling me. I seem to understand. My name is Zhang Lei. When you see this sentence, please kill me. {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"}{"TopicId":"1008456628351991808","TopicName":"After Heaven"}

The book is quite good, but not as good as the mystery. The main character is too weak, like an incompetent husband.

These recent chapters are like reading short-form articles. They are not interesting, and there are many problems. I am too lazy to complain. They feel like they were written by middle and high school students... I can't stand it anymore, and I slipped away...

1. The author is indeed not good at writing stories between people as most people say. 2. It is indeed a good article, but it is a bit silly and will cause discomfort to many readers. 3. It's good to write about a new worldview and the supernatural. 4. I hope the author will not be a mess.

I'm getting more and more wet, and I'm a little bit smarter.

Why are there so many trolls? This book is a good book, at least it makes people want to read it. The plot is fast-paced and the story is also very good. If the writing is not good, you can search here and there are several books that you can read. Only old books can be read. It is not easy to write books these days. I just gave the author a few words of objective support, but I don't feel that there is anything wrong. Otherwise, I would not be writing a book, but writing an introduction. Those who are complaining probably mean that the updates are slow and they will not make up for the missed updates. I feel that as long as the updates are continued, there will be a lot of people following the news. Come on, old Buddha!!

Can you write about some heroic characters, such as Ye Zhen? The supporting characters are too stupid. How can they practice to transcend tribulations or Mahayana? The god of the incense world is also stupid. The cross-border plot can be written slower and some characters with distinctive personalities can be well created. After reading more than 600 chapters, I feel that Li Yi has no ideas and only kills. You can write more about people like Yang Wei, and give more descriptions to the supporting characters. Only when the supporting characters are awesome do I know that the protagonist is awesome. I feel like the supporting characters were slapped to death without even remembering them when they first came out. With so many characters, it is not as profound as Yang Yilong.

Why do you always justify yourself when watching the protagonist fight? You have to meet an enemy with higher combat power, and then you can fight with a bunch of explanations, pure protagonist aura. It is a common problem among many types of orthodoxy. The combat power is not clear and relies purely on words. I am more interested in the world view of the book, but the description of the plot is not satisfactory.

No, bro, it's a forced ending. It's too pure.

I think this book is pretty good. Many of the worlds are very imaginative, especially the world of the end of the monastic world and the world of game rules. I like it very much, but the problem is that the characters appear too many and too scattered, and there are too few characters that leave a deep impression. Especially the protagonist is simply unattractive.

What is puzzling is that 1 The girl is graceful, plump, fair, mature, and she is a eunuch from beginning to end 2 Many worlds cannot be effectively unfolded. According to the investigation, giving the world a contextual story is just throwing out a concept, and there is no adhesion to the main line. It is just needed to gain a sense of presence. A good outline is to twist multiple threads into a rope instead of straightening plastic-coated copper wires into wires 3 Combat power is still too salivating. Use the plot to promote combat power rather than using combat power to pile up the plot. The mentality is mapped to some aspects. People are always on the road. Although it is easy to hit the wall with big steps and insignificant with small steps, but standing still, the black chicken will never become a true phoenix. The support of fans and the efforts of the host are heart-to-heart comparisons and a kind of respect. In fact, in reality, the respect that can be achieved in many things is already the highest level. Just like the national football team LPL, there is always a lingering arrogance. The final ending keeps telling them that this is just self-impression and turbidity. Haunting is real So fans should give Buddha another chance and let him settle down and accumulate more and more

I remember there was a dub dubbing this book last year, right? Why is there only the king of diamonds?