Struggle in Valoran

The beginning is amazing, at least much better than others. Why the protagonist has such emotions and why the protagonist will act like a virgin in the future are clearly explained at the beginning, which is great. There seems to be no problem if the bully takes advantage of the pig girl, but the protagonist's behavior makes him not look like a person who values ​​friendship and there is a slight conflict with her virgin side. It cannot be said that a person who is a Holy Mother must be a binder who attaches great importance to friendship. But the protagonist's indifference towards his savior is a bit inappropriate. Or maybe you want to say that the protagonist's previous life caused him to underestimate the value of his own life? If you really look down on it, then the subsequent rejection will be a bit self-righteous. The protagonist is a big man, and the pig girl is a beautiful woman. After all, she is a beautiful woman who saved your life. Wouldn't it be nice to stick with you? However, if Pig Girl thought that the protagonist was dead and stabbed him to cause displeasure, it can be seen that the protagonist values ​​​​his own life, but the protagonist easily understood Pig Girl's behavior of thinking that he was dead and wanted to give him a warrior's death, but could not understand Pig Girl's subsequent behavior. Of course, what Pig Girl said about the protagonist's surrender caused the protagonist's dissatisfaction, but the length of the description did not have that flavor, and was a bit hasty, because the previous character did not show that Pig Girl was a person with a strong desire to conquer. If it was true, she would be too doting on the protagonist. This point of doting would cause a great conflict between the plot and the character's personality. Then when Ashe threatened the protagonist with those people, it was really... A bit incomprehensible. The plot started to feel like a forced arrangement. Before, Pig Girl couldn't tell what kind of character the protagonist was and could be her tiger. Udyr's beloved daughter couldn't tell (it didn't make sense). Ashe was also a leader after all. She was described like a little girl in high school, which seemed a bit silly. This is the translation of this threat to the protagonist. If you don't agree with me declaring you to be my slave, I won't take those people in. How can this sentence be uttered by a leader? The protagonist emphasizes in a loud voice that I am just a traveler. Do you want these people? I will exchange food with you. After the exchange, I leave, and then Ai Xi comes to do it, and then the protagonist agrees? (Sorry, I couldn't help but quit when I saw Ai Xi being pulled into the tent. I mentioned matrilineal matriarchy before, but here you are disrespecting the leader. Does the protagonist understand it?) In general, Pig Girl's conflicting personality is really strong. Wouldn't she wait until now, in a matriarchal society, in a world of ice and snow, are she still afraid that the protagonist will run away? (Zhu Mei didn't take the initiative to get to know the protagonist at all, which is quite strong) In the first few paragraphs, Ai Xi didn't feel like a leader, but like a female high school student. Personal opinion, welcome to discuss

The two words that appear most frequently in negative reviews in the book review area are "pretentious" The most repeated content in book reviews is basically "Valoran does not restrict you from having a harem, but also uses modern people's moral values ​​to limit yourself. If there are women, you can't get married, the protagonist is pretentious" Is this the starting point reader, i got i

Let me tell you my thoughts: I am also reading Celia Pay Back the Money Quickly. Comparing this book with the various metaphors written in Celia's book, in my opinion, it is not as good-looking as Farming. Maybe it's because I like watching farming? But I felt that Celia's car was too fast and never stopped at 200 yards, so I felt bored after watching it too much. There is no sense of expectation anymore.

Is this the legendary big stallion🐴?

The protagonist really looks like a hero, without any sense of disobedience

Why does it make me feel more uncomfortable the more I look at it? It feels so pretentious, the main character looks like a bitch and feels a little uncomfortable. Can't you just be more relaxed? And why, in a world full of wars, does the protagonist still have to act like a once civilized person? Don't want to make progress?

In the last few chapters, it is difficult for the protagonists to accept that just for a little food, they seem to have seen the gods, and they are just thinking about it for the sake of the name of an illusory successor. They have some feelings and want to respond, but the word limit is limited to posting. If it's really that hard to understand, let's put it another way. You find that there are actually children around ten years old carrying guns and going to the battlefield - such as Somalia, launching so-called jihad for the sake of food for the famine-stricken people, for faith, etc. It is indeed a reality. You can also say that you can understand the special circumstances of special areas, but it does not mean that it will be so easy to understand if you see it in person. From personal experience, I have seen a trafficked girl. She has lived for more than ten years and has several children. Her parents went through all kinds of troubles to find her and wanted to take her home, vowing to make the man who took him pay the price. Then the girl hesitated for a long time and told the police, no, my husband did not abduct me. I fell in love with him and eloped with him. Of course you can understand. I have several children, the oldest is in high school. This man kidnapped her but he has been okay with her all these years. After living with her for more than ten years, dogs have feelings, let alone sending this man to prison... There are so many reasons to find. But I felt very uncomfortable, very uncomfortable, I was so sick that I vomited for several days, and my chest was extremely depressed. The criminal did not get the punishment he deserved. This girl's life was ruined. Maybe she will go to a good university, maybe she will have a decent job, no matter what her future will be, she will definitely see a world that is countless times more exciting than now, but she has been trapped in this mountain for more than ten years. You can understand many things, but that doesn't mean your morality is acceptable. You can understand it, but please don't accept it. The more fragile the glass heart, the higher the moral bottom line. It is a powerful country with a long history, which brings the deepest pride to every citizen.

Is it true?

The author's writing style is very good, but the character of Pig's Feet is too dissuasive, and he doesn't want to stay in this place. He wants to save the old, weak, sick and disabled when he sees her. So you can just search for Pig Girl and go directly to the place where there is food? It feels so contradictory to write so ambiguously and reject others in the end. Taiyou is disgusting (=_=) Ai Xi is also concerned. You want to go home, but you are farming here. I don't understand. What do you need? Farming and not engaging in the army, speechless

Emmm, I feel that except for the dozen or so pictures at the beginning, I feel like the protagonist lights up one by one. The further you get to the back, the more you can see the unspeakable discomfort and distortion. There is a kind of pig's foot that is resisting something in its own world, like too much wine or too many leaves. For example, the plot of War Mother using herself to retain people is enough once or twice, and it will be annoying if she keeps doing it

Autumn pear cream! How about another 100 chapters? !

I opened it several times, but was persuaded to give it up. The author's writing skills are good, and I am very happy if he is willing to write fan fiction. After all, even the better writers in the fan circle are not interested in it. But you really don't want literary youth, don't be sad about spring and autumn, don't be indecisive, it's not the reason for feeling unhappy, it's real Internet writing, don't talk about what is there and what is not. This is not youth scar literature, it is just for everyone to watch. It's not impossible if you want to write some depth, but you also have to eat. You can't write the protagonist Yi Xiaochuan second, I feel bad when I read it. The story is quite easy and well-written, but I didn't enjoy reading it. I wanted to slap the protagonist in the face. I just kept this frustration in my heart, making it difficult to continue reading. You can set the stage, but it must be exciting. If it is not exciting, it will be inferior to others.

Who drove the car and blew up the group? I was playing games last night, but I wasn't online!

Noxus's definition of power is very broad. It is not limited to the power of force. It includes wisdom, capital wealth, and various life technologies. As long as you have a skill, you can find your place in Noxus. On the contrary, Noxus is cruel and ruthless for those who know nothing and are weak at heart. But from this book, I learned that I only saw the cruelty of Noxus, or the author over-described the ruthlessness of the Noxians, which is too one-sided. I don't agree with this. Just like Swain, this is a man who loves the country of Noxus very much. He loves this country, so he launched a usurpation. There are many such people in Noxus. Can you say that they are all selfish? When I read Chapter 4, I felt that this was a big dissuasion point in this book. If it was before the establishment of the Trefari Council, this kind of thing would still happen. If it was after it was established, it would be absolutely impossible. Considering Swain's spy, this violates the Noxian definition of glory, even if it is done in private.

After seeing so many people criticizing the protagonist for being pretentious, in that world, can we really give up the education we have received since childhood? Should we become a murderer? Do we really give up on the values ​​we have received since childhood? I don't think so. You can't change the world. Just change the people around you.

It's not that the protagonist is being pretentious, it's that the author is being pretentious. While saving people, he has to call himself a fool at the same time. Is it necessary? To save people, save with firm belief. This is the right thing to do. Why do you have to say that you are stupid to silence those who are about to say that the protagonist is stupid? Without firm belief, you still have to scold yourself while saving others. Is that all?

I haven't read more than 100 chapters. Now I came back to take a look. What the hell is this guy writing? This is an outbreak of literary youth disease, right?

The early stage is a masterpiece of taking off, and the later stage is spent in bed.

Goethe, you have opened a new book, but you still have not broken out of the law of true fragrance.

A little personal suggestion: when the author decides on major events in some works, he can consider the readers' mood more. . . I almost gave up the book when I read that the protagonist decided to kill Zoe. I understood that the author wanted to show the harm done to mankind by God's indifference to life. . . . But the official expansion story also said that the harm caused by the Twilight Stars to humans is basically unintentional, and sometimes it can bring good things, because the appearance of the Twilight Stars will lead to some distortions of reality, and the Twilight Stars are just an ordinary little girl who accidentally became a god. She is also a god who is close to humans. Although she is a little bit bearish, it is much better than the Sword Demon no matter how you think about it. There should be a lot of readers who like Zoe, and then the protagonist directly cooperates with the Sword Demon to kill Zoe? ? ? ? In short, there are many suitable characters for the author to create a divine enemy. It is a bit unacceptable to set a little girl as a typical character.

An interesting thing has happened. The protagonist thinks that he was a slave of Noxus. He has great malice towards Noxus and opposes everything in Noxus. However, in the eyes of outsiders, the new policy that the protagonist will implement in Piltover-Zuan (that is, to make people's lives better and everyone is equal, Everyone has a ladder to rise) is actually essentially consistent with the foundation of Noxus (the kings force you to kneel with hereditary authority and false reputation, Noxus makes you stand up, let you be reborn in glory, and let the world see it), which is essentially consistent with the identity arranged by the protagonist's cheap father. Tsk tsk, everyone sees the protagonist as a Noxian through and through no matter which angle he looks at. Even if one day the protagonist demolishes the Immortal Fortress and helps Ionia cut down Swain, the whole of Valoran will still think that he is just an enlightened Noxian. After Swain's coup, he might have felt that the protagonist's policies were in line with Noxus's and adopted them for his own use😁

I don't know why, but now I only read the first part of the novel. I kept reading and put the unfinished novels in the warehouse. Then I'll look for new novels! It wasn't like this before. I used to read one chapter at a time. Why don't I have the same feeling and persistence now that I had before?

I don't quite understand… What's the purpose of the protagonist's killing spree… He says he wants to beat them into nothing but empty shells so that they can practice their skills, but the result is indiscriminate killing? Not to mention that your violent killings will only push your friends who may have been on your side to the opposite side. After all, there are many people in Piltover who sympathize with Zaun. You can imagine the consequences of killing like this in the name of doing good for Zaun. Moreover, revolution requires blood, and the blood of the enemy - because this battle is a life-and-death battle, and you also need your own blood. Only iron and blood can forge a firm revolutionary will, and only iron and blood can awaken the power of the masses. It does not happen once or twice that a boy slaying a dragon turns into an evil dragon. Only when the revolution is constantly blocked, will the power of the masses continue to be united, otherwise it will not be easy to be corroded. Not to mention, Piltover is a big piece of meat. While they continue to make war profits, they also continue to develop themselves to survive. It is really weakened. Do you think Noxus is not greedy for Hex Technology? In this book, Shurima has also risen, and its attack on Ionia has been blocked. In order to divert the conflict, this kind of militaristic country can only turn its guns and attack Leather City. At that time, do you think Zaun can stand up in the face of Noxus' rule?

The further you get to the back, the more unwatchable it becomes, especially the part about Ionia. The protagonist just needs to be named. The whole time is just following the leash. Wherever someone pulls you, that's where it is. Next, we have to go to the Freljord. I don't think there are dozens or hundreds of chapters. It's just a super tractor. I don't know how long it will take to be beaten by the sword demon. Every time I meet, I give away my head and give me money. I even formed a group with other people who can also assist me. The protagonist will not be beaten until the end! I will give it to my wife opposite, otherwise this book will really abuse the protagonist all the way up to now, but to be honest, the protagonist is quite comfortable being a dog. There is an inflatable doll to play with, but I don't know if being pulled by a dog leash will make him feel uncomfortable!

This novel is disgusting! ! ! In the past, there were many harems, but everyone disliked them and strongly hated harems. Therefore, many authors began to play the eunuch style, where eunuchs visit brothels. In that novel, all the women like the protagonist and want to be the protagonist, but the protagonist is a eunuch. Why did you write it in such detail? Is it disgusting? To write about combat life well, do you have to write about color plots? The main character is also a eunuch, what is he doing? Just to make readers uncomfortable? Dead eunuch

The Piltover scene was really about pulling the crotch. The author's understanding of politics is too naive. Overthrowing the original stable social structure and establishing a new order today is only possible in a village with a population of three digits. So you want to change a city-state with a population of at least 100,000? The protagonist destroys the water conservancy system, who will repair the public health system, how to appease the people, do you rely on the grass-roots team you randomly selected? He can suppress it alone when the protagonist is here. How long has he stayed in Piltover? To what extent can these people he selected (and many laymen who have never been exposed to management) restore order during this period? There are too many loopholes in politics that I won't mention. The previous article has always emphasized that the protagonist is not strong enough to deal with the stars and the void. There is a sense of urgency for the protagonist to pursue becoming stronger. Now it's better to put aside the crisis of world destruction and start having a family dinner tonight?

After reading it, all in all, the heroine of this book is not Sejuani or Ashe, but Aatrox🐶

Magic is forbidden in Demacia. Silas was imprisoned because of his magic skills and later resisted. It was then that Glory started to use magic. No other Demacia hero could use magic.

I really can't stand it. Isn't it wrong for the harem to explain in advance? In the early stage, I didn't want the pig girl to marry Ai Xi, and I thought it was pure love. . . Then give me a critical hit later

Chapter 91 is a bit of a persuasion to quit. When I was in the Pig Girl Tribe, I gave so many excuses that I wouldn't die. But when I changed to a big tribe, I dismissed all the excuses I gave as farts? ? ?