I Have a Problem with the Abyss.

I'm a little worried about the future of the plot and whether the protagonist's current situation on Earth will collapse. How does he continue now? How to write next about God of Earth? What is the significance of these chapters of Not Being the God of the Earth?

I watched it more than a month ago, and I haven't watched it since the protagonist returned to the original world If it is said that before returning to the original world, he was a pretty good person. Those chapters before returning to the original world and going to Dragon Ball again are the most poisonous points for me. It's uncomfortable to watch.

He also said that no one has read it, but these few chapters are enough to read, so update it quickly and don't hang out in the group.

Isn't there a mysterious man in Wulin Gaiden who can draw various martial arts secrets? This is much more powerful than Gongsun Wulong. Similar to the old beggar who sells secret books in Kung Fu.

Are Celia and Valoran still writing 😭? If so, I would like to support it.

... I also wanted to give a 1,000-coin reward for support, but it didn't work. I highly recommend the author to go racing on other tracks, and I guarantee my support. The Ready Player One I read before is gone, two of your books are gone, Enemies of Europa by Tong Chi Dao Ren is gone, and now this one has become a bicycle. Alas, I didn't even want to read it at the starting point. I looked through the book list and found a bunch of monk books. Life is so difficult, so I just want to read some cool harem stories. Is it wrong?

Why are the protagonists of many novels orphans? It's because parents are so difficult to write about.

I started reading Pandaren. Although I followed Celia with some impure thoughts, I felt that it was at least a well-structured story. But in this book, after the protagonist returned to his own world, it felt extremely awkward. It is understandable that the author wanted to describe the protagonist. The psychological journey is also a necessary part, but it is too stiff. It is not described or exaggerated from the perspective of God, but a didactic speech, so people can't help but fast forward. I hope the author can change the angle of description and describe the protagonist as a three-dimensional character. These are just some personal opinions. Whether you adopt them or not depends on the author's needs. I hope the author can see them.

The martial arts aspects of Dragon Ball are well received. After all, Dragon Ball focuses on martial arts 😏

I haven't seen it on the shelves and can't stand it anymore. I have no idea what you're writing about? There is also the purpose of going to those worlds. Even if the first world is a newcomer dungeon, there is no need to go to the following worlds. Even if it is random, then you can definitely write some worlds that are helpful to the protagonist. I feel that there is no need to write about the following two worlds. And in the main world, why do you have to go to a place with people? Your goal is to become stronger and go home. If there is no shortage of food and drink, shouldn't it be necessary for you to have contact with people in this world? Doesn't it do you any good? Then you pretend to be a god and you dislike other people coming to the gods to disturb you. This is contradictory, right? I have no idea what you were doing in those worlds. I walked around and came back without doing anything. Just take some coins. Isn't this possible in any world? Is it necessary to write it? Seeing that now I feel inexplicably confused and have no idea what you are writing about?

Congratulations to the author for liberating his nature and letting himself go. The more he reads, the more confused he becomes.

What can I say about this book? It feels like it's a lot lower than the previous two books. It hasn't even been put on the shelves yet, and it feels like it's going to collapse.

It's a bit obscene to say it, but I really want to see Rin's long black stocking legs

What did you write? Reading it from beginning to end is purely for the author's enjoyment!

Author, do you think this book is too idle? Don't talk about national affairs, even the mapping is not good. I advise you not to write about this plot. The current situation is full of minefields. Animation is fine. Don't talk about other things. Don't talk about other things.

What about the group? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Why did you suddenly disappear? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Tang Monk: Evolution → One punch Tang Monk = Punch Tathagata + Kick the Jade Emperor +...

I can't hold on any longer. I'm forcibly suppressing the protagonist's growth and losing control at every turn. Alas. The routine of five years ago is too discouraging now. I will read two more, but I found that the author has drifted away, and I guess I can only say goodbye.

After the protagonist reaches reality, he is poisoned and dies, and we see each other again.

When I saw that the red bottle could lead to immortality and rejuvenation, I knew that the author had no intention of writing a novel.

I see that it is becoming more and more dull and boring later on. The plot jumps too much, there are too many pitfalls and there is no filling. There are a lot of character plots with a large number of words. The positioning of the protagonist is dispensable and he is just a tool. Apart from the occasional complaints that are interesting, there is no plot development at all. The main line is vague and slips away.

Ah, my Celia is gone. Does the author still update? I just finished reading The Violent Search Team.