Simultaneous Transmigration: Great Love Across the Heavens

Seeing Lu Mingfei's sly face makes me feel unlucky. Then a bunch of supporting characters, as if they've been infected with a plague of bad luck, spout nonsense all day long, constantly using the trio of youthful pain, forced stupidity, and self-deprecation.

Modern fanfiction writers are too rigid. Original novels are like historical records, while fanfiction is about traversing the real world. Fanfiction requires uncovering content not recorded in the original work, demanding a higher level of reading comprehension. For example, it requires learning to selectively omit inconsistencies in the original text and developing one's own style. Without a personal style, writing countless novels will only lead to stagnation.

Try to avoid writing about cultivation novels. I was turned off by reading that one, "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality." Try to choose a system with a similar power structure or one that's more inclusive; that way, it won't fall apart.

Some readers have asked me why it took so long to write about a single world? Because I think that's the style of the original "time travel" genre. I remember when I first read Duke's book, where he traveled through 99 worlds at the same time, he would write dozens of chapters or even more to tell a complete story before switching worlds.

What I expect the protagonist to do in Naruto is unification, not something like the Chunin Exams. In the Naruto world, power reigns supreme; politics is merely a supplementary tool after unification. What you're doing now is just pointless.

The protagonist should ideally be intelligent. Don't be like other authors who constantly portray their protagonist as too stupid.

It's said that Douluo Continent is a bottom-tier game where Soul Masters have to kill beasts to obtain Soul Rings in order to level up, and even breathing fire requires Soul Skills, but that's precisely its most powerful aspect. It's not mentioned much in novels, so nobody pays attention.

When will we change worlds? I haven't subscribed to a single chapter of Dragon Raja.

Meanwhile, in the multiverse travel genre, I feel there's a major flaw: each protagonist treats people from other worlds as themselves. In reality, from the moment another version of me is created after the transmigration, even if that other person has the same memories and way of thinking as me, they are no longer me. It's just a matter of how long it takes for everyone's similarity to change.

The author's writing skills are lacking. While the plot of Naruto, Douluo Continent, and Dragon Raja is actually quite good, and the main characters have distinct personalities, it seems to suggest that strength is temporary while coolness is permanent. However, the writing style is insufficient.