I Am the Cataclysm!

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I have exhausted all my talents. I can sew everything and don't have anything of my own to glue it together. It's just a piece of chocolate crispy water cake.

I just came from Rupifagu Taoist Heart, and I felt that the book was well written. I am also an old reader of Zha Yue, so I stopped by to read the author's new book. My current feelings after reading the chapters are as follows: 1. The first 50 chapters are actually not very good. I feel that I can read it, but it is not exciting enough. I am basically sure that this book will not be as popular as the first one on the list. As of now. 2. Some poisonous points are really discouraging. For example, the protagonist ate the witch's meat and fingers in order to gain time. Even if her meat has this effect, because she will definitely become the heroine, at least only the protagonist cannot eat it, because it is really a bit irritating, and she will become the heroine after all. People in the harem, think about this female character who will become the harem of the male protagonist in the future. She often has her fingers and flesh eaten by the male protagonist. This is already extremely poisonous, not to mention that in most online novel environments today, the protagonist who eats human flesh is already poisonous, and the food she eats is from the harem, so she took it. At this point, all I can say is that I hope the author can change the setting later, for example, so that the heroine can already control the power and directly give time, without the need to eat human flesh, or if it is a little more astringent, she can now give time by exploding a meal. It is really too poisonous. 3. As for the previous reader's comment about the little boy and girl and the male and female souls of Lei, since what I saw is the changed plot, I will not comment. As far as the current plot is changed, it is indifferent to this character and will not offend people. 4. To be honest, I persisted until more than seventy chapters only because I am an old fan who has a different view of the world (eating human flesh). In short, in my opinion, this book really started to get better. It was after the appearance of the female character Second Princess based on the Valkyrie in more than fifty chapters that it started to be written in a decent way. Many of the previous ones were a bit, well, in short, not exciting enough I still hope that the author will work hard. I hope that this time the author can have the same feeling as the two books of Rupi Fagu Taoist Heart and Dragon Master.

Chapter 4 begins with a whole chapter of random conversations with a witch, bragging, and trash talk, which is enough to persuade many people.

Witch

On the shelves, you can't even see the possibility of the undead army, there are no movies, and there isn't even much plot about the necromancer. The necromancer openly announces his identity but no one cares. Do you know what a necromancer is? Everyone the necromancer pulls up is other people's parents, children, and their loved ones are pulled up by others to work for others after their death. This is an behavior that is impossible to accept in any culture. The result is that the necromancer is upright and upright in your case? Do you know what you are writing?

I came to see the natural disaster of the undead. I came to see one person fight against the whole world Not to see the harem, not to see love and love

Let's talk about some shortcomings of this book so far. The first one is that I feel that the protagonist talks too much nonsense, is verbose, and has some conflicts in outlook. The second thing is that man and woman. I just saw it, but I haven't watched it since. Does anyone really like this kind of thing? The third is about the issue of cannibalism, which is a bit perverted The fourth is that you are so ridiculous about a legendary field, but the result is a magic-like spell that does not feel very powerful, and there is a limit on the number of times.

Are there any people who stand by Zhu Zhiyue in the fandom area now?

Author, why don't you return to being a fan?