The Savior Who Emerged from the Freljord

The author's writing style is indeed solid, but once you put the title of your book, what do you think the people who are attracted to it want to read? It's nothing more than three sisters, various features of the Freljord. You just wrote that Ashe has been married to the Barbarian King for two years. What else am I going to read? Looking at the main character ntr, should we try another classic? Even though we have been married for two years, we are still virgins? You can't write a Runeterra fan at the beginning of the Freljord without a female protagonist, but with a single female protagonist, right? Wu Dan heroine, you should have made it clear long ago, everyone adjusted their psychology, but you took away the misleading title (what a stallion) and content (the protagonist is the prince of Freljord). Isn't this a natural harem novel? You can't just love boys purely in a matriarchal society, right? The second barbarian king?

There are a lot of things that are taken for granted, so that the characters lose their own stance and personality. For example, the performance of Pig Girl in Chapter 22 makes me unable to help thinking that a person who can make such a decisive move as matricide, a mature adult, may be able to change his stance, but his thinking should not change so quickly. Thinking has inertia, and the law of the jungle is her law of survival. For example, she might propose that only the strong should join the new country and that everyone else should die. Or she has her own opinions, surrenders to the protagonist's power, and then changes her mind in a long-term subtle way. Now that I have read Chapter 22, I feel that this is not a barbarian leader who can lead the clan to kill, set fire to, and rob men.

Use the narrative technique to write group portraits, which is both watery and 💩.

I want to read other people's comments, but they are all just posting pictures and no one is managing them?

When you call me sister, your face turns red and your body softens, and when you bow your head, you bow. Two-dimensional writing is not suitable for such a world.

In fact, it was okay at the beginning, but the characters were too frivolous and distorted, and the plot was also inexplicable. The protagonist had a brainwashing halo all the way, and the harem was also inexplicably open. It was full of virgin fantasies of early novels, and none of the Wudi novels were so innocent. . . It's a pity that I can't watch it but want to continue watching it. After all, there are still too few League of Legends fans. I can only say that I hope the next one will improve. . .

Why not change the name to "CJB from the Freljord"

Do you know why this is not a high-quality product? Because there is too much nonsense. To watch a battle, you have to read a large piece of inner thoughts. It is still a lot of nonsense. It is annoying. In battle, you beat me and I beat you. Why is there so much nonsense?

As of Chapter 13 of Volume 2 (I haven't read it yet, but the progress is already halfway through the book), the protagonist's entire growth is only more and more mothers, harems, and abilities given by the system. At least in the current description, his rationality, mentality, will and wisdom are not very different from the first few chapters of this book. Now I have become a mama's boy who relies on cheats to keep him safe, doesn't have a long memory, and waits for others to wipe his ass.

After reading more than 10 chapters, the character descriptions are weird. Maybe I prefer being self-interested and a lone wolf. The author writes that the protagonist has no independent opinion due to various arrangements. The priestess under him keeps jumping in front of the protagonist, which is very annoying. What I want to see is a decisive killing, not this Asasi style. I'm leaving.

There is no female protagonist in Runeterra, or they deliberately refuse to accept a female protagonist when they can. You...

I read a few chapters and couldn't stand it. . . . Half of one chapter is psychological description. . . Very annoying

The rhythm is too strange, and the parts that should be written slowly are not detailed enough. The protagonist expands the territory in Freljord, how to improve the lives of the people, the changes in the hearts of the people, the psychological activities and admiration of different groups of people for the protagonist, and the understanding and attitude of various forces towards the protagonist. These feelings are all written in more detail, which makes it more enjoyable. After meeting the bear, the rhythm suddenly took off. The protagonist's power development felt like it was all in one stroke. After entering Demacia, things around Lux ​​suddenly slowed down again. The protagonist's identity was revealed and there was no sense of satisfaction in being revealed to anyone.

When the author opens a new book, he will get a thousand rewards and monthly tickets, as evidenced by this post . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Whether it's shit or 💩

Except for the clone Lei. I think the author can learn from the lone wolf's characterization and recruitment routine.

Reopening the Twin Cities🤭🤭🤭

I feel that the author wanted to write a group portrait, but the writing was very complicated and messy, and there were many long and difficult sentences that were inexplicable. I don't know if the author could understand it after he finished writing. The protagonist couldn't beat anyone before, so he would call his mother. When it was almost over, he suddenly couldn't beat anyone anymore, going straight from one extreme to the other.

More updates from the author____

A matriarchal society allows a man to be the supreme leader? I can't speak to anyone who is not the Freljord The black land is also a big poisonous point. The tribal civilization is grazing, fishing and hunting. The entire black land is frozen soil. How can you farm? Even if there is suitable land, it will be in the south, not at the location you marked; This is especially true for "Gela". The Freljord people have their own traditional holy places, such as Rakstaq. Don't you think the entire "Gela" is very fragmented and inconsistent?

The Freljord was okay, but when I got to Demacia, the writing was just like a piece of paper, and the plot made no progress at all. I wrote a piece of cake, and I knew how to call for help every day. The plot also relied on the brainless behavior of the supporting characters to advance.