It's Over, I'm Controlled by the Narrator

Just write an unlimited flow normally, don't do all the bells and whistles, readers will be confused after reading it, and there is no direct writing at all to foreshadow it. You are not a great author, how can readers have so much patience to read? Transparency is so well said. Tradition does not mean old-fashioned. Not to mention that the first book is used to accumulate readers. Just write about unlimited fandoms normally. Don't do those messy things that are flashy and have nothing at all. Be down to earth first.

Silas, the setting of the demon seeker has overtaken the previous setting of Silas leading the party. Silas: a great and upright male protagonist, leader of the rebel army, a man recognized by Morgana, and the savior of Demacia. Demacia Nobles: Commoners and mages engage in human experiments, commit all kinds of evil, and seek to seize Kyle's power. Morgana: "My sister will destroy all of Demacia when she comes back and sees what these nobles have done."

As the title says, this is a place to summarize everyone's complaints. If you feel that there is something in the work that you don't like, you can say it here. First, everyone can be my vane and receive feedback from readers in a timely manner. Secondly, everyone's opinions are gathered here, so don't go out and post them separately (please! I also realized that I need to keep the book review area beautiful, but there are really many suggestions that need to be listened to, so I made this decision. I will delete other comment posts that don't have many discussions. I hope readers will forgive me!) To sum up, this is Jiang Zi, a bit of a newcomer's complaint post. Thank you for your support! !

I subscribed for two or three chapters and found that the chapters were wrong. It was not this book at all. Except for the main character's name, everything else was written in otherworldly texts, and I couldn't understand what was written.

The new chapter suddenly became wiser. Really, I took the initiative to be the foreign aid for the locals. To be honest. Waste of time and energy. Really a bit nosy.

Has the author offended some organization or someone? Why are there so many people criticizing the author? I am thinking about the author's treatment of parents' time travel. After reading it, I feel it is a bit inappropriate but definitely not disgusting. Why are there so many people criticizing 😅

The characters of the supporting characters are all so weird. It reminds me of the books from 20 years ago. When I randomly write out the name of the character, no matter what historical figures or characters in popular works are named, all Weiguang is doing is male thieves and female prostitutes. They are always full of swear words. Per capita prenatal education graduates

The only thing I'm unhappy about is that they're already married and they still haven't slept with Kasha. Is the protagonist as impotent as the male protagonist in Japanese comics?

The first part felt okay, but the quality started to drop all the way when the reality chapter started. The Fengshen List chapter felt a bit creative, but later on, the physical and emotional chapters for the narrator, emmmmm... It almost became a story. To be honest, I really liked this book at first. I can only say that the author should work hard and look forward to the author's next book.

I estimate that there are ten books and nine books on cultivating immortality. No matter what, you can't escape this curse. In fact, it is quite interesting to start the fast travel of the second dimension and history. Alas, the sudden change in the painting style is amazing. Come on.

That chapter of Nezha is really ugly. It's not that it's not written well, but that the tone of Valoran suddenly changed to oriental fantasy. Just gave it up. No, it's not because the author's writing style is bad. I loved reading it in the early stages, really.

I didn't miss it, why are some strange things popping up out of nowhere? What's wrong?

At present, except for the time when the whole family travels once and some people can't accept it, it's still good if there are no obvious poisonous points But the author can't open the head of the containment object in the main world and stop writing it. If it doesn't fit the style of the painting and the outline is changed, you can't just dig the hole without burying it, or you can't even open the head.

I almost wanted to run away, but out of nowhere another one popped up in the main world.

Good in the early stage, weak in the mid-term, poor in the late stage

I'm convinced, brother. I knew I wouldn't read the reality chapter. I read it so well. Your reality chapter just gave me the feeling that it was a complete and unfinished outline and I didn't want to read it anymore. I finally saved so many chapters. The appearance was too sudden. Ao Zihan had all the foreshadowing. You, a vegetarian, had no foreshadowing at all. The traditional ancient urban cultivation of immortality was inserted into the body of Wuwuwen. The key was to cross it horizontally. It felt like cutting the infinite flow in half and turning to the urban cultivation of immortality. Wow, my brain was shaking. I didn't even know what I was going to say. Just let me die. 😭😭😭

Is this a bad ending? I feel like what I wrote at the beginning is really good

Friends, when will the League of Legends episode end? Kick me, I can't understand it if I don't play this game 😥 Thank you for your hard work 🙏

Alas, the writing collapsed. It was good at first, but after the reality, it became really poisonous.

It's a bit interesting. The setting is a bit like when I was managed by the system a few years ago.

If you don't read Chapters 7 to 21 after they are released, you should still be able to read them.