From the Start, a Cloud: A Carefree Immortal in the Mortal World

A cloud! This is wonderful! 8U is ecstatic! 🤭🤭 Every day, I wait in one spot when the sun is at its brightest. A young woman walks by, and whoosh, a huge puddle of water falls. 🙂 Every detail is revealed, her beauty is captivating, and two rosy points are subtly visible through the haze, her curves exquisitely displayed.

Hongyun, right? Hongyun, right? Hehehe, ninety-nine thousand realms, Purple Qi Explosion Fist. Three thousand mortals, your true spirit will never perish, Zhen Yuanzi, save me.

So, is this an ensemble piece? The main character only appears once every two chapters, and then it's over with just a few dozen words.

Clouds and Fog: Life Connections Deformable Giant Cloud computing (supercomputers) Castle in the Sky

It's good, but the female character is so poorly described that it's ridiculous.

You're right, but you're not entirely right either. From one perspective, you're partially correct, but from another, you're wrong. It's not entirely wrong, but rather there's a slight discrepancy between the two. If we ignore this slight discrepancy, then what you said is certainly correct. However, if we examine your statement more rigorously, then it's not correct at all.

The idea is good, but the concept is a bit limited, and the opening is mediocre. It's not quite there yet, but it's readable.

The text needs to be more concise.

The author saw this and replied, thank you. I once read a novel where a character was also a cloud. When nothing was happening, it was just a cloud floating in the sky—not just one cloud, but the entire sky's clouds were its body. In battle, it would gather clouds and condense them into a dragon shape to fight.

Honestly, the last few chapters, especially after entering the dungeon, felt like I hadn't read them at all. Was it just a tea party? You know, the tension is all just dialogue, but I didn't feel it at all while reading. It's like a bunch of people playing house, constantly plotting against each other.