A Mortal’s Journey to Immortality: The Yang Immortal Clan
凡人之杨氏仙族
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 509k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
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164Chapters
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23.4kFans
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This book is utter nonsense. It talks about innate treasures. Can innate treasures be crafted after birth? Doesn't the author realize that even saints like Taishang and Tongtian Yuanshi wouldn't dare claim they could craft innate treasures, let alone innate supreme treasures?
Refining a Primordial Treasure?
Innate treasures can be refined; what's refined should be called acquired treasures, right?
Aren't innate treasures born from birth?
Those who practice calligraphy are all treasures acquired through practice.
The plot is so overpowered, yet the writing is so petty. Is it some kind of primordial world where a saint can move ten meters in a single step? And does the protagonist even have a system that grants many children and abundant blessings, yet everything he encounters in each world is a family heirloom? I just can't relate to it.
They've started dragging a bunch of people into cultivation again. I've read 94 chapters and they're still dragging out the plot. It's already February this year. You're good at fooling people. And in fights, your face turns pale for no reason. You should go write romance novels instead of cultivation novels, especially fanfiction-style, hellish "Mortal Cultivation Chronicles."
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In families that cultivate immortality like this, there's no need for generational names. With so many characters and similar names, it's impossible to tell them apart.
Female lead
Don't write too much about the female lead, or it won't be interesting. Talented characters like Nangong Wan, Zi Ling, Yuan Yao, and Ling Yuling are worth taking in, but characters like Xin Ruyin, Mo Caihuan, and Senior Sister Chen, who have few roles and mediocre abilities, are unnecessary. We can use and cooperate with Han Li; there's no need to target him.
Are the primordial era and mortals on the same level? What's the difference between this and someone using a Great Luo Golden Immortal to travel through the sewers of Douluo Continent?
Don't let your family end up as mere laborers with no bloodline left. Besides, in a large family, you'll find all sorts of people; family traditions are also important.