Mortal: I Have a Gold-Eating Insect Clone!

It's too slow, please hurry up.

How should I put it? It's okay to think about the subject matter, but I can't figure it out. The protagonist has turned a gold-eating insect into a soul clone, so he still needs an insect control method? Are you sure you're not kidding me? What insect control method is better than direct soul control? Just say it's a cultivation method, it's really a bit funny.

In the "world of mortals cultivating immortality", if you don't have the resources, it is impossible to ascend to the "spiritual world". Xiang Zhili is the representative of the human world for hundreds of years.

It takes about ten chapters to lay the groundwork for grabbing a bottle. Don't just give up on the little green bottle in the end. Not only are the chapters that others won't agree on, but they will also abandon the book when they see you give up. After all, I spent real money to watch you lay the groundwork for grabbing the bottle. In the end, the author directly tells you that I will play monkey with you.

Wait, I remember that gold-eating insects will evolve the insect swarm by reproducing offspring. Doesn't the protagonist consider having children?

How many knotted pills and Nascent Souls are planted in it? Just a storage bag can make the protagonist's wealth skyrocket. As a result, there are only various exercises, but I don't know what kind of weird operation they are.

I haven't read the entire original text, so I just scribbled and messed up. Even I, Wanwan, look down on this author!

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Write about chicken feathers. You can also get the little green bottle. Have you never seen Mortal?

Most people who read fan fiction have read the original work. In the original work, Xin Ruyin's cultivation is not high, but ordinary fans can remember her because of her loyalty to her feelings, her talent in formations, and her wisdom. After being rescued and teased by you a few times, she becomes the heroine, which will give readers a feeling that this girl is nothing more than that, and maybe a little disappointed. Even if the heroine label is forced, it will only give people the feeling of a soulless publicity store. In fact, many female characters in the original work are not suitable to be heroines in the same novel, such as Nangong Wan, Zi Ling, Chen Qiaoqian and other characters who have a close relationship with the protagonists of the original work. Most readers are disgusted by the women who write fan fiction either to rob the original protagonist of the bottle and opportunity, or to treat the original protagonist as a fool or a younger brother, taking advantage of the protagonist's opportunity and bottle (how do you survive two chapters with this IQ)? Many opportunities in the original work are just chance. For example, the three-headed and six-arm fragment of the Brahma Saint True Demonic Kung Fu, which Han Li majored in in his later period, was accidentally obtained at a black market auction on an unknown island he encountered on his way to escape from the outer star sea. Even if those of us who have read the original work go in and read it again and know the plot, do you know which year, which January, which day, which sea area, which island, which underground auction, and which man in black traded the copper pieces? If you miss this opportunity, the Brahma Saint's True Demonic Skill will basically be out of reach. In fact, I personally think it is best to write fan fiction and stagger the timeline of the original protagonist. On the one hand, it avoids readers' aesthetic fatigue. Most fan fiction retraces the path taken by the original protagonist and downloads the previously downloaded copy. It feels like I'm spending money to watch Mortals again, but the key is that it's not as good as the original. On the other hand, it is to avoid the retarded behavior of lowering the IQ of the protagonist of the original work to highlight the retarded behavior of the protagonist of the fan fiction (people who read fan fiction basically come to read fan fiction because they like the original work or have unfinished feelings about the original work. Lowering the IQ of the original work to highlight the protagonist of the fan fiction is already a failure from the beginning)! The timeline is directly hundreds or thousands of years earlier than the original protagonist, or even directly before the invasion of the demon world. Witness the prosperity of the ancient times, the prosperity of Kunwu Mountain's Ten Thousand Dharma Gates, the predecessor of Falling Demon Valley (Ten Thousand Medicine Valley), the Three Immortals Island on the sea, etc. As a low-level or mid-level monk, participate in resisting the invasion of the demon world, witness the origin of Xutian Palace, the formation of Falling Demon Valley, the sinking of Kunwu Mountain, etc. Due to the limited cross-border transmission, some people went to the spirit world with Kunwu Sanlao, and some people were transported to the Luanxing Sea to witness the hard work of the Luanxing Sea human race to open up the territory (a side explanation of why Tianxing Mountain and Kunwu Mountain are so similar in the original works of later generations, many of the Luanxing Sea's exercises are very similar to or have the same origin as many of Tiannan and Jin Dynasty's major exercises) and many other things that can be written. Either the timeline is hundreds or thousands of years after Han Li ascended to the spiritual world, witnessing the decline of the Luoyun Sect, the rise of the Yellow Maple Valley, the emergence of the magic weapon Lingbao that Han Li once used, etc., And it is confirmed by what Han Li saw in the lower realm of the clone in the original work. The Five Dragon Sea and Tiansha Continent that were not written in detail in the original work can be rewritten. A copy of the story can be made up at will, which is better than copying the original work! This is better than trying to steal Han Li's opportunity, steal other people's women, steal other people's bottles, etc. I think there will be many mortal fans who will buy it.

Trading the Heaven Palm Vase is the biggest poison. With Han Li's cautious character, why would he just trade Nuanyang Baoyu and the Incarnation Technique like this? He looked at me for a while and then forced me to be smarter 😒

The writing gets worse and worse, and the plot gets worse and worse.

I really can't bear it anymore. The subject matter of Gold-Eating Insect Clone is very good, and the writing style before it was put on the shelves was also good. However, it seems that the later part was written by AI. Reading it is like being fed history bite by bite. I won't play anymore, and I'll see you later 🔨

Don't miss out on good women and don't let go on bad women. You already said that Zi Ling might cling to a high-level monk for cultivation, so why can't this high-level monk be the protagonist?

La. Marrying the three daughters of the Mo family is La.

This book was good at first, but then the more I wrote, the worse it became. There were details in the front, but it felt like it was just an outline in the back.

Not engaging in the "Little Green Bottle" biography of mortals cultivating immortality is not a good mortal cultivation.

This book is useless and has no main plot at all. When it was put on the shelves, I got the little green bottle and was very sympathetic to the author. Later, I had no idea what I was writing. The protagonist's cultivation speed is completely at the speed of light. Will he be able to ascend to the spiritual world in a few chapters after the Nascent Soul and Transformation God?

It is impossible to trade the little green bottle. Han Li has a past life in the immortal world.

Nangong Wanbi will receive it