What Kind of Immortality Is This?

I would like to ask everyone, my ex-girlfriend borrowed 5 W from me during our relationship. There was no IOU or receipt, only a transfer record. When the police asked me to send him the transfer records, I clicked on Alipay crookedly, accidentally clicked on Qidian and saw this article on cultivating immortals, so I wanted to ask why it hasn't been updated yet?

It's packed with laughs and lots of jokes, and it's a pretty good nonsensical and hilarious book. When I saw the name Hua An, I pictured the mean-spirited little book boy in Star Master's Washington House. Overall, it seems to be quite smooth. It is a piece of music that has potential and selling points.

It is important for new books and authors to read the latest chapters. Thank you, Yanzu.

Why is the plot of this book so familiar? I seem to have seen it before.

The subject matter is good, but it is too deliberate to be funny, and it lacks a lot of readability. Funny and nonsense can be used as highlights in the plot, but if the plot is designed to be funny, it will appear hollow and vulgar. Just like a tree can bear a tree of flowers, but a flower cannot be tied to a different tree. Even if it is Stephen Chow's Tang Bohu Dian Qiuxiang, he always focuses on the main plot of the tragedy, supplemented by nonsensical plots. This is perfect. If it is just for the sake of being funny, it will backfire.

Discover a new spiritual food

Come on, author, I will support you with my real name

The writing is quite good, but it lacks a lot of punctuation marks, which makes it tiring to read and demanding. What a shame.

Come, read with me: (hele)

Is this because the editing card has been put on the shelves? 380,000 Words are still not available on the shelves?

I feel like I could write a book "This is how I teach the world of immortality"

He has always been a crazy devil, looking down and asking about the universe of yin and yang. Millions of years of planning and savings, I am waiting for eternal life! The rules are the rules of the board and the laws of the chess game, and all laws in the world can be found. For the first time in the world, he opened up the magic path and tested his edge in three battles. As time goes by, gray hair suddenly appears, and there is endless youthful beauty in the mountains of books. Expand the divine power of heaven and earth, learn from the natural way of all realms

Looks good, funny, I like it

The content in the introduction is so heavy, how can I write it in a funny style?

I really like this kind of subject matter. Come on, author, hold on, you eunuch!