The Invasion Begins on Earth

The author himself, after receiving valuable reminders from relevant readers, will adjust the punctuation marks accordingly to improve the readers' reading experience.            ，，，，，， Thank you!

The follow-up review comes from two days later. After re-reading the first chapter, I have become much more comfortable. Even from my slightly biased perspective with a relatively negative first impression, the first chapter can be read normally. Come on, author, I hope it can get better!

If you think this book is interesting, but you don't want to read it because there are still few words and chapters, you can mark it to unfinished. The number of readers will pop up. This is also supporting the new book. Thank you readers!

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After reading the first few chapters, I feel that it is quite good. I will come back to slaughter after I have fattened up.

Let me make a suggestion that is not a suggestion. After reading less than half of the first chapter, I really can't stand it anymore. I hope the author can standardize the use of punctuation marks. Regardless of how to do it, after all, in order to make the paragraphs look more concise and clear, it is normal for online articles to use punctuation marks indiscriminately, and use punctuation marks in places where sentences and paragraphs should not be broken. However, author, the first chapter of your novel is filled with a large number of "..." And "!" That look like mental pollution at a glance. These two punctuation marks can express very strong emotions and should not be used in such a random way. You use too much. Feifan cannot convey emotions correctly. Instead, it goes against the reading habits of a Chinese reader and makes it impossible for people to read. I hope the author can pay attention to "," and "." And stop messing around.