Mortal: I, Qi Yunxiao, Am Cultivating Immortality

It feels too fake. How should I put it? You can collect the breath that has lasted four or five hours in just one Qi training period. Even if you walk alone for four or five hours, you can still smell the smell, and then kill the monks of the Foundation Establishment family, and you can still see the scene of death. These are never seen by mortals. The old demon has killed so many people from the sect, and there is no scene that has ever appeared. You just killed a person to establish the foundation, and then it appeared. It's boring. If you don't know how to write, don't write it. Every time you hit a small one, and then the old one can catch your little tail.

The painful loss of Nangong Wan's little green bottle at the beginning

Licking dogs, Xin has never liked licking dogs, it's just that this dog is so good at licking, and he's moved. Unexpectedly, the author's protagonist still licked it.

Two late-stage foundation-building monks boasted that they could struggle in the hands of early-stage Nascent Soul monks, which made them laugh to death.

There are now 40 chapters in total. After reading 20 chapters, my cultivation has improved a little bit. The main goal (rescuing Xin) is not at all. In order to boil eggs, I forcefully increase the difficulty when I am about to get them. I feel boring...

Xiaomei can't help but kill the giant poison.

In harem stories, harem beauties are tool people, with the goal of giving birth to children to extend their lifespan.

Come on, author, there are a few new books recently written that are quite good.

Write less emotional scenes, it's a bit embarrassing to watch

It won't be updated anymore. Can you give me a message from the author?

Good author, please keep updating 🤓

Collected it, hope the author can finish it.

It's well written. A novel is just about telling a story. It's enough if it can be told successfully! As mortals, I think we need to be both the same and different. Come on 😊 I wish you write better and better!

This introduction feels so familiar 🙂, I seem to have seen something similar somewhere.

"Mortal: Poor Taoist is not good at cultivating immortals but has some skills in fists and kicks" to promote it. Welcome to come back and come back. Let's work hard together. Thank you!

No, bro, there are errors in the introduction, and it's hard to make people want to read on. Together->Together