Cultivating Immortality the Cautious Way: I Have a Longevity Painting

After offending a powerful evil cultivation sect at the fifth Foundation Establishment stage and being hunted down, this pig-headed character still chose to hide in the Zhou family, where there was only one newly established Foundation Establishment cultivator and one nearing death. Instead of going to a safe Golden Core market, he insisted on hiding on a ship that could sink at any moment. What kind of pig plot is this author designing? If you can't write it, don't write about hiding.

That fast food restaurant's updates are weak and ineffective; you need to update faster.

Are you trying to defy the heavens with just a Qi Refining stage cultivation? Qi Refining is just an apprenticeship; Foundation Establishment is the true entry level. A Qi Refining stage level 4 cultivator took six years? Does your world even have high-level cultivators? Also, the world-building is supposed to unfold gradually. Qi Refining spells require the Southern Bright Fire? And there are divine beasts?

There's something special about this story. The protagonist is selfless and single-minded, focused solely on the Great Dao, which suits my taste. Although there's a turtle immortal involved, I still quite enjoy reading your work.

It involves both Qi cultivation and physical training, as well as spirit pets—all kinds of all-rounders. Basically, it's about finding resources to break through realms, an endless cycle.

I finally understand why the BG (Best in Gain) level is so low; a spell that a Qi Refining stage cultivator can practice requires the Southern Bright Fire 😰.

The writing feels a bit too small-scale. Despite being set in the world of cultivation, it fails to evoke a sense of longing in the reader. The writing style is somewhat awkward, the pacing lacks excitement, and the perspective is not broad enough.

After seeing so many solitary, self-serving cultivation practices, can't we find one or two close companions to support each other?

Refining Emptiness and Healing, the Mahayana path is skipped, and one directly becomes an immortal?

First, change the name of the cultivation technique; even something like the "Eternal Spring Scripture" would be fine. Make the techniques and supernatural powers stronger. Also, maintain more channels for obtaining various resources. And we already know what's needed. Third, I suggest finding more women. Don't be like a fast-food approach. Some women should write "give up."