Cultivating Immortality the Cautious Way: I Have a Longevity Painting

After offending an evil cultivator with five foundations and being hunted down, this pig character still chose to stay in the Zhou family. There was only one person who had just established a foundation and one who was about to die of old age. If you don't go to a safe Jindanfang market, you have to stay on a ship that can sink at any time. What kind of plot is designed by the author? If you can't write it, don't write it.

Those guys in the fast food restaurant, Diaomao and Xin, are weak and weak. You and Xin, please hurry up.

Do you want to defy heaven by practicing Qi? Qi training is just an apprentice, and foundation building is the entry level. It took six years to practice Qi to the fourth level. Are there still high-level immortal cultivators in the world you write about? Also, the world view is slowly spreading. Does the previous Qi practice require Nanming Lihuo? ? ? And mythical beasts? ? ?

There's something about pig's feet that has no desires and desires. It's just for the road. It suits my taste. Although there is a real turtle, I also like to read what you write.

It's Qi training, physical training, spiritual pets, all kinds of omnipotence, anyway, it's all about finding resources to break through the realm, infinite matryoshka dolls.

I finally realized that this is because the BG is so low. A spell that can be practiced during the Qi training period requires Nanming Lihuo 😰

The writing is a bit too petty. It is clearly about the world of immortality, but it does not make readers very yearning for it. The writing style is a bit jerky, the progression lacks waves, and the perspective is not broad enough. Even if the protagonist is still at a low level, even if he is still a small person, even if he is still a novice map. As long as the plot is relaxed and relaxed, a small incident, a small conflict, or a fight can be described vividly and vividly, allowing readers to take part in it, feeling as tense and exciting as the protagonist. But at present, the author is not profound enough in describing the psychological activities of the characters, especially in the arrangement of some hidden lines and the game between various forces, which is too naive. The rendering of the environment surrounding the protagonist is too deliberate and formulaic. In terms of emotional processing, the author may want to highlight the protagonist's single-mindedness, which I understand and support, but it does not necessarily have to be highlighted by "Others like me, but I don't like others." The single-mindedness can be the absolute determination when facing the long-lasting love between children, or the unyielding in the face of hardships, or the planning when facing natural resources, or the prudence in the face of conspiracies. All in all, since we want to depict a magnificent world of immortality, we must broaden our perspective, set our stance high, and let our hands and feet go. Don't be too petty all the time.

After seeing too many lonely Taoist cultivators, can't there be one or two Taoist companions who support each other?

Refining the void, combining rest, and Mahayana can directly save you, and you can become an immortal directly?

First of all, change the name of the exercises, even the Eternal Spring Sutra, make the exercises stronger and have more magical powers, and maintain more channels for obtaining various resources. And already know what is needed. The third suggestion is that women look for more. Don't imitate fast food. The woman writes giving up. Some are written to death. Even if we can't cultivate to become an immortal when we are together, it doesn't matter. I find it strange that monsters accompany me, but not women. Strange.