The Immortal Swordsman in the Martial Arts World

The heat is almost done. Write your own story. A stable mentality, a small climax in Chapter 30 or 50. As long as your heart is too soft, don't force yourself to get into trouble. This is the third book. The more anxious you are, the worse it will be. The more relaxed you are, the more stable your writing will be. As the same saying goes, don't be too aggressive and stay calm.

A rapist who has harmed countless women can be let off? He is also a father, is he worthy? It was fun when I was young, but can I be let go if I regret it when I am old?

After reading more than 800,000 words, the protagonist has experienced so many martial arts worlds before, and the result is for Xie Xiaofeng. The most disgusting novel I have read in recent years. What a piece of shit.

Gu Long really doesn't understand numbers and money. If it's really 1.5 Million taels, who is the thief who intercepted the goods? Does he look down on our Ming army? The Ming army can borrow the heads of fellow villagers for some reward money and meritorious service. It really has so much money. It is normal for the local Ming army to send thousands of people to eat this money.

The story of Scimitar of the Full Moon is like a piece of shit. The protagonist has experienced so many lives and lived for so long. If you want to write that the protagonist is not as powerful as those experts, you will understand. The protagonist who has been living in the world of ancient dragons is already invincible. But you are the same as Xie Xiaofeng. Then you have experienced so many worlds before and it is like farting. Why is the protagonist now living like a dog? Before, the protagonist in Scimitar of the Full Moon felt that there was no plot and was just like a passerby. It was fine knowing that you were looking for someone to try out your own martial arts. But when it came to writing the protagonist, this was the result?

Don't wear it anymore. Zhutian is more suitable to wear it.

At first glance, you can see that there are many typos and incomplete punctuation, which can drive you to the point of obsessive-compulsive disorder.

This reminds me of a book in ancient times. He was born as the Chaos Demon God and was a brother of Pangu, with equal strength. After Pangu opened up the ancient world, Hongjun became a saint. When giving a sermon in Zixiao Palace, Hongjun asked him to come up and sit on an equal footing. If he was not the protagonist, it would be outrageous to discuss with Hongjun to become his disciple. It has been more than ten years, but I still remember this episode 😅

Can you write about the costume later? It's a bit like the spirit is reincarnated. Either the original protagonist is possessed or the supporting character is possessed.

I despise the most self-confident novels where the protagonist is not very good at martial arts and is forced to do a lot of things.

The writing of Chu Liuxiang and Yuanyue Scimitar is worse than the other. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. I don't know what the protagonist's purpose is.

Put down the butcher's knife and become a Buddha immediately. It means letting go of the evil in your heart before you do it. Go do good deeds. Don't misinterpret the meaning, okay?

Chu Liuxiang's chapter successfully created a feeling of feeding

The protagonist is really messed up in the full moon, and Xiangshuai is a bit baffled in the later period, but it gets worse in the full moon. Purely disgusting

It's useless for everyone to scold you here. This kind of writer is just a fool. It's better to report it and remove it from the shelves.

The three dungeons at the beginning: Sword of Eternal Life, Farewell Hook, and Passionate Ring. I have read them so long ago that I have forgotten many of them, but it can also be seen that the author tried too hard to imitate Gu Long, and the result was specious. Although Gu Long often writes like jokes on the Internet, he never shows off mystique in the narrative of the story, and his writing is extremely smooth. But what the author wrote is like the bark of an old elm tree, with lumps and pits, making it extremely difficult to read. It always feels like a paragraph is missing between every two sentences. When I read The Passionate Swordsman, Ruthless Sword, I read the book many times, and the problem came out immediately. It is also a common problem of many authors, that is, they do not understand the original work well enough. Except for the protagonist, the dialogue and action logic of the characters are completely different from the original work. For example, Li Xunhuan would never say that Tie Chuanjia is a slave; Tie Chuanjia's feelings for Li Xunhuan are even more complicated, and his character is not that talkative and funny; A Fei is even colder and arrogant, and it is nonsense to ask A Fei for swordsmanship at the beginning. A Fei does not know swordsmanship at all, and his sword is for killing people, not to mention the nonsense he said to the protagonist when he wanted to kill two snakes in the inn. When the logic of a character's behavior deviates from the original work itself, it is most likely to poison the readers.

It was a very good book at the beginning. At that time, it was on par with "The Melon-Eating Swordsman in the World of Ancient Dragons" in my mind. Although it was worse in the middle period, it was not much. However, starting from "The Scimitar of the Full Moon", I had to feed S.

The little old man Wu Ming is a clown. A search on Baidu shows that 99% of the time, the number one master of Gu Long's novels is him. As a result, the author's book is all paved the way for the likes of Jellyfish Yinji, Xie Xiaofeng, and Ding Peng.

Why are the copies of Lu Xiaofeng in Melon-eating Swordsman and Immortal Swordsman so long?

Guys, how do I report a book on the app?

The author's descriptions of Gu Long's original characters, fighting descriptions, and the hero's sense of freedom reminded me of an old friend named Wu Fang Loli. The person who wrote the first martial arts book, Zhutianliu, is personally unmatched in my opinion. It ranks first, and the description and characterization of the main world is very exciting and attractive. Unfortunately, this person's update speed is really ridiculous. Monthly updates are common and there are annual updates. He wrote a book in ten years, and finally it was unfinished at the climax of the plot. , It's a pity that the male protagonist of the book, Wang Shi, is LSB, and he is also the king of pretense, but he has never met Xiao Qingcheng. After he became successful in martial arts, he did not repay the favor of the beautiful beauty Qingcheng with a sword. It is a pity that the book ended without waiting for the martial arts beauty to pretend to be a pen 😔. To be honest, if the author hadn't updated steadily and at a good speed, I would have suspected that it was that person's trumpet. 🤭

Author, did you commit suicide together with Yue Buqun or Lin Pingzhi? ? ?