Gao Wu: from Martial Arts Student to Cosmic Deity

Hello everyone, this is Shennong, and I am reluctant to do so. I just saw more than 80 chapters on the shelves. Let me briefly talk about the advantages and disadvantages! The advantage is that the transition is smooth, the content is large, and the writing is good. Although the slap in the face plot is quite chilling, and the protagonist's performance in the virtual space also makes people feel uncomfortable, but overall it is still worth watching. Disadvantages 1 First of all, you used the gimmick of Erlangshen, but I didn't see anything related to Erlangshen until it was put on the shelves. It was too slow, and I saw some people in the comment area saying that it took more than 200 pictures to get a crack. I really can't comment on your pace. 2. Secondly, the whole process is not enjoyable. There are too few weapons. The author's control of the types, quantities and number of users of weapons is too mediocre. Swords, guns, swords, halberds, axes and sticks. The whole process only sees an ax above the swords and guns. You have already played the high-five world, let alone a hundred flowers and a hundred schools of thought. You should at least get more weapons and attack methods. Even if you check online, ask Deep Seek?       3，，，，（，）      4 Here we have the protagonist himself. Erlang Shen's three-pointed knife weapon is originally a sword and fork, a kind of strange weapon, which is more suitable for chopping. What are you going to do with the whole big gun? When the time comes, let others go up and poke it? Even if you let the protagonist decide one by himself? I really don't understand. I felt very uncomfortable while watching it. I thought that even if the main character ordered a weapon before it was put on the shelves, I would not have so many complaints. I would learn your mountain-splitting spear technique every day. Let me ask you, who has a long gun that is used to chop and poke. Should I say that you are uneducated or that you are too lazy to look up? Even if you use the mountain-splitting sword technique, I will not say anything about it. After all, Erlang Shen also has a knife to use. In short, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. If you don't care about the details of the characters, you can still be a food and grass, but don't use Erlang Shen as a gimmick. I thank you, isn't it embarrassing enough? Nothing matched the whole process

The plot is too slow, the level is also suppressed, and it's so cool! Goldfinger is useless! I can only say that Yang Jian's talent is too rubbish!

Nima, let's call it Yang Kuiqu's template. Per capita in this world is Pangu, right? Five percent of Yang Jian ranks tenth among the two.

Refining blood, refining muscles, and refining skin are the three realms at the beginning. Are you telling me it's high martial arts?

It has an outline and plot that can be seen at a glance. 👀 The upgrades of the code, slaps in the face, and various competitions are not particularly outstanding in terms of writing. There are also small bugs in some places, but they are still tolerable. 🤔 It is worth noting that although there is a little brother, the description is too thin, and there is no eye-catching feature. It just protects the protagonist and is useful when talking to the villain in the villain, but there is no character charm. 😂 The protagonist can only be said to be an average male protagonist in web novels, and I think the protagonist is a bit too high-leveled. He is said to be the template of Erlang Shen, but he is only 5% of Erlangshen, and his marksmanship has not broken through to the second level. Erlangshen is really not that good. 😅 If you insist that the upper limit of talent is a 100-point system, the higher the score, the harder it is to improve. There is a chasm between 90 and 91, then I have nothing to say. In the later stage, when the template is unlocked to 8/90% and the protagonist reaches the realm, he will have to take a rocket to ascend. 🤨 In comparison, I think it is more reasonable to upgrade faster in the early stage 😠 Last point, the speed of upgrading the protagonist of this book depends on how strong you think Erlang Shen is. 🧐 If you go by the prehistoric novel, which is like opening up the world at every turn and splitting mountains with one hand, the Erlang Shen template in this article is definitely a no-brainer 🥺 If you want to go by the documentary, the Eight-nine Mysterious Skills are just ordinary martial arts skills, and the Heavenly Eye is just a mole between the eyebrows. I said that the Erlangshen template in this article is actually an enhanced version😋 Generally speaking, I can take a look at it, but I really can't find any shining points. On a ten-point scale, I can give it about 6.75 To 7. If I still use the old-fashioned writing method later, it may be 6.5 Points😢

I read a few chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. Erlang Shen's physical talent is top-notch, otherwise he wouldn't be able to become a saint physically. After merging one percent of his talent, his energy and blood increased by 0.1. After practicing for a day, he grew 0.2. Without fusion, he also grew 0.1 Every day. If he fuses, he will grow longer. Isn't the fusion in vain?

He was called Erlangshen, but it turned out to be too insulting Even with a few percent talent, he was crushed The protagonist progressed like a maggot.

The author is barely able to write about geniuses, and the author cannot write about geniuses at all. Erlang Shen still has to compete hard with classmates at the same level for a few percent of his talent. How to write the name of genius stream and waste material stream

After fusing Erlangshen's 1% template, the protagonist's health value skyrocketed from 5.3 To 5.4, A full increase of 0.1 Health value. It is estimated that when fused to 100%, the health value can rise to 10.3. Erlang Shen is so powerful.

After reading dozens of chapters, I really feel like, what kind of martial arts urban Erlang God is our template? Who is Erlangshen? Erlang Qingyuan Miao Dao Zhenjun, the best fighter in the Chan Cult, the best war god in the three realms, even if he is one in a billion with a talent, shouldn't he be able to learn basic martial arts at a glance and break the limit? After practicing so hard, oh, the progress bar has increased by a few percent. Are you Erlang Shen? ? ? Putting aside this template, I think what you wrote is pretty good.

To sum it up, so far it has been training, competition, and competition training, that's all, and it has been like this for more than 400 chapters...

After reading more than 250 chapters, it has been almost two years since the protagonist got the system panel and almost a year and a half since he opened the Erlangshen template. The integration level of Erlangshen's template is almost 20%, and his actual combat power ranks 13th among freshmen in this school, and 30th or 40th among freshmen nationwide. A genius who has awakened his ability can defeat Crane Tail without awakening his ability. If he uses his awakened ability, he will probably be killed instantly. There are 12 such awakened geniuses in our school this year, plus the other two top universities and the top ten famous schools, I guess there are thirty or forty. Books of the same genre Weak ones beat seniors as freshmen, Ordinary freshman enters the level of famous masters Super strong freshman starts playing with veteran strong players There are still dozens of people in this grade here. This is the worst time Erlang Shen has been hacked.

After reading the first five chapters, I really couldn't stop reading. Having a bad start has become a fixed pattern in novels, so I won't talk about it anymore. Fusing the Erlangshen template, the energy and blood increased by 0.1? Is this an insult to Erlang Shen? Even talent is not so insulting. To be honest, what Erlang Shen is, at least he is in the Golden Immortal realm. One percent of his strength is enough for a person to become an immortal. Even in the mortal period, it is not comparable to ordinary people. It is normal for Qi and blood to double directly. From 5.3 To 5.4, What does the author want to express? Is the protagonist's talent just a little weaker than 1% of Erlang Shen? The second funny thing is that when he came to school the next day, he gained another 0.2 Points of blood after practicing, which made everyone say that he had achieved a breakthrough and had become stronger. Just ask, an increase of 0.3, The overall increase in Qi and blood is 5%. Can this improvement be seen at a glance? You still act like a weirdo and surprise everyone. It's really invincible, I feel embarrassed watching it. Then the title of Chapter 5 is Substantial Progress. Does the author have any misunderstanding about Substantial Progress? Qi and blood increased by 0.3, And martial arts increased from 80% to 85%. Is this a substantial improvement? A score of 80 or 85 on the exam is called a substantial improvement? The author's understanding is indeed different from ours. It's embarrassing to look at.

What a cool story. What does it have to do with Erlang Shen? Even if you raise a dog, I will say that your writing is good. I have practiced marksmanship for so long. When I went to customize the weapon, I thought I could see a three-pointed two-edged sword, but there was nothing 😅😅😅

There's no end to your genius, right? Competition, genius, competition, genius, competition, genius. If you keep going like this, you can write the finale!

Geniuses, competitions, rankings, endless, more than 600 chapters are still like this, I just feel tired,,,,

15% Of Erlang Shentunfu can't get the first place, you leave the mark

There are always competitions, all kinds of competitions. The suppression was so fierce that I didn't say anything. This novel is obviously a racial invasion war? Make it like a domestic competition. Competition rewards, competition rewards in another place. Over and over again

The worst time Yang Jian was hacked. If you were asked to fuse Yang Jian, you would be able to fuse such a waste? Yang Jian's dogs are stronger than this

After reading nearly 400 chapters, let me tell you my feelings. It is indeed better than other books outside. The basic main line is clear, the writing is good, and the setting is basically reasonable. However, the whole rhythm is draggy, it is a non-stop competition. I don't know if all academics write like this. Monthly exams, month-to-month comparisons, from high school to college, non-stop repeating the plot of the competition, monthly exams - midterm exams - final exams - high school Examination - College Freshman Ratio - National Freshman Ratio - World Freshman Ratio - Worldwide Competition, the entire main plot is just the competition, without any other plots interspersed, which makes people feel repetitive and long-winded; what book friends complain about the most is that the protagonist is too severely suppressed by the template of Yang Jian, and the awakened things are not new or exciting, even if the integration is 25% Awakening a special ability Jin Feng... It feels ordinary, and everyone else can get it. The real Yang Jian's Eight-nine Mysterious Techniques, Heavenly Elephant Earth, Heavenly Eye, Howling Sky Dog, Five Thunder Art, Samadhi True Fire have nothing to do with it. This template is just selling dog meat on sheep's head... I think it is more suitable to give a Zhang Fei template, and there is no ability to fight beyond the level, just non-stop Accelerate training to catch up with other geniuses, practice hard at B level to catch up with genius A, defeat the genius S that pops up, catch up again, defeat the genius SS that pops up... Practice again to catch up and defeat the genius SSS that pops up (see this for now), the 400 chapters are basically written with these contents. Book lovers who like daily stories about getting stronger step by step will probably like this book. . . Book lovers who like settings + data + pure coolness may find it suitable to skip chapters. Bookworms who like plots with ups and downs and substantial content may give up after reading 100 chapters. . . Generally speaking, you can read it, but it seems better if you read it without thinking... Because the books outside are probably worse. . .

I have read four to five hundred chapters so far. They are all about playing competitions with infinite matryoshka dolls, college competitions, freshman competitions, national competitions, and global competitions. There is no other content. It repeats endlessly that others look down on - counterattacks - shocks. There are also talented matryoshka dolls. I was first in the last competition, and in the next competition there will be more talented ones, from s to sss. I haven't read the rest. I don't know if I will continue to do it.

Highly toxic. It is basically written in imitation of Swallowing Starry Sky, but the content is too intellectually depressing. The protagonist has a good brother, who is two levels stronger than the protagonist at the beginning. He takes care of everything. His own sister is malnourished, and he gives all the money he earns from working to the protagonist. Then the protagonist is also weird. He takes various talent support funds and doesn't want to grow rapidly. He buys an air conditioner and pays off the loan for his family. The improvement of his emotional strength depends entirely on hanging up. It's really disgusting to watch.

The protagonist is still a waste at the beginning. But there are panels. God rewards those who work hard. . Proficiency. Familiar panel, familiar text, familiar it. But your protagonist is a loser. The panel is also a piece of crap. The protagonist of Waste is bound to Yang Jian. The protagonist is fused with 10% of Yang Jian. It made me laugh. Do you know what happened? The vitality and blood value increased from 6 to 7 o'clock? You are making trouble for me. If people's Qi and blood in the real world are real, they can be exerted 2 to 3 times through exercise, which is 20 to 30. You're fucking writing realistic literature for me. I looked at the catalog and the blood values ​​were in the millions. Give me 0:01, which is 0.0001 Long. Is there any point in changing my name just now? The content inside you has not been integrated with Yang Jian. Yang Jian estimates that even a fart can destroy the world. He is probably stronger than you cell by cell. It makes me laugh to death. He fused with Yang Jian and actually fought back and forth with the geniuses in this world. Still level up the map, and then meet people at the same level. Then fight there and level up the map, and meet people of the same level again. I just thought about how there are so many awesome people on this small earth. Do they all have panels and are possessed by gods and Buddhas? This book was originally supposed to be a genius flow, but it turned out to be a loser's rise flow. The ending is not yet up.

I can't understand even if I copy it. Tomato's writing is mainly about being fun. No matter how you copy it, you won't be able to copy it. The most successful person to imitate tomatoes should be Fengxian. How do you make a protagonist who has awakened the Erlang Shen template be beaten up everywhere? Take one example. The geniuses of other people at the same time broke through the 4th floor of the original tower. Three months later, a genius who was also from Earth also made it through. Then the protagonist practiced for 10 years and awakened 60% of the Erlang Shen template. Then the next sentence should be difficult to get through and unstable. Then I practiced for another 2 years before I dared to try it. Then when I went to break out, I kept bragging about the protagonist from the perspective of a passerby. Don't you feel embarrassed? If you awaken a little whirlwind template, you won't be so embarrassed in another world, right? Don't embarrass Erlangshen.

I was criticized by readers for always writing about competitions, so I started to compete again. I changed the title of the book to Sports Channel.

It's ugly. I don't want to watch it anymore. It's all about games. I don't know what to write about. I'm trying to persuade you to quit 😰😰😰

It's not that you're not allowed to write about your family, the problem is that it doesn't look good, it's exactly the same routine as that of The Age of High Martial Arts. Who wants to watch you support your family all day long if you are reading a good and refreshing book? And there is a routine over and over again, apply for xx level treatment - others look down on it - take exams - others are shocked - improve the treatment, such as weekly exams, monthly exams, mid-term exams, joint exams, final exams, after the exam, I will give you a higher salary (╥╯╰╥)ง

With so many cheats enabled, I can't beat opponents of the same level for a long time, but I can't even beat opponents of a higher level.

I feel like the author is too slow in updating only two pages a day. According to the author's update, this book probably has an ending. One is if the results are not good, it will probably end at the highest point. The other is if the results are good, it may be to go out of the universe and come to a setting such as the Three Thousand Worlds or the Sea of ​​Chaos. Of course, the protagonist's incomplete list of gods is also a foreshadowing. I personally feel that it is probably the second one. Maybe after the protagonist obtains Yang Jian's 100% template, he will complete the list of gods little by little, and then obtain a stronger template. Of course, the above statements are all my personal speculations. The last and most important thing is to update quickly! ! ! The best🙂

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