
Liaozhai: Clam Fairy
聊斋之蚌仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 169k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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115Chapters
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Transformation text! Fill in! The protagonist is female!
The sentences are not smooth and there are many typos and repeated words. The author should take a good look at it before posting. It is recommended to read his own book and revise it slightly, otherwise the reading experience will be really poor.
It's another female channel without cp, why don't you mix it with female channels? I believe you when you say you are single, no cp, no cp. These three words come out as a female author.
Literary works are not divided into men and women. The fact that this article can be recommended on male channels and be officially signed proves that there are people here who like it. There is no need to worry about where it should be classified. Only those who are interested will click in to take a look. If you don't like it, just leave. Why leave bad comments to make his presence look bad?
It's about writing about female protagonists. The men have a harem in the end. It's like they've never seen anyone. It's annoying when you see it. Anyone who doesn't like it will leave.
This book should be on the female screen, there will definitely be no results if it is sent to the male screen
The starting point is still conservative, with clear distinctions between men and women, with mostly straight men. Regardless of whether the heroine is a transformed one or a natural one, whether she is a great heroine or a weak one, there will always be people who will criticize her. However, female-themed themes have existed since ancient times (such as the eye-opening essay about changing marriage), which can indeed bring readers a different way of thinking. If a male author writes about female themes, which channel should he put it on? I think it is a male channel. In addition to the authentic routines written by code word machines, when the author writes these novels with niche themes, he usually thinks from his own perspective and reflects his own emotions. Only people of the same sex can appreciate these subtle points (not specific to this book)
Why doesn't the heroine go to the female channel?
There are so many wrong sentences and typos. And the sentences are not concise, which makes it really uncomfortable to watch. Please ask the author to change the drawing time.
Author, do you know what the biggest problem with your book is? It's your typos and sentence fragmentation! No matter how good your idea is, encountering such frequent low-level mistakes will only make your article look like a mess of words that were forced together.
In fact, if the author wants to write about the female body and the male mind, he can write more past lives, including men, women, and animals, so as to avoid readers feeling uncomfortable.
This strange word order and rhetoric seems to be written by Ai. But Ai doesn't have such outrageous typos. 😾😾😾 More tiring than reading primary school students' compositions.
I don't want to read it because there are too many typos in the wrong sentences, so I'll keep going, after all, I've only read the second chapter.
If you practice to become an immortal, you have to be controlled by the Heavenly Court, and you cannot be free.
I'd better support it. There are few books like this.
What a pity, a good fairy tale novel.
The author's idea is very good, the heroine's perspective is also good, and the writing style is also good. Combining the love, hatred and hatred of various people, ghosts and gods in the Liaozhai story, it has great potential. It's just that due to real life factors, this book cannot be continued! I look forward to the author's new articles and wish the author to find a stable and suitable job and settle down.
The problem of bad sentences is more serious
As title. Understand that the author is a novice, Understand that the author wants to write in an ancient style, although... And the form is used indiscriminately, and the specific application of punctuation marks is not clear. The theme of Liaozhai is novel and eye-catching, but the writing style needs to be optimized. I hope the author can write more clearly in the future.
Is it no cp? Just don't make the male protagonist disgusting.
Why did I break it? It feels pretty good.
Fine chaff
I saw Chapter 21 and I like it very much so far! Come on, author!
Not updated yet? I haven't read any novels yet
Wrong sentences with typos and punctuation give me a headache