Fairies Are Always Plotting Against Me

The Eleventh Realm of the Human Race ​Qi Refining Period ​Returning to the Yuan Period ​Elixir Condensation Period ​Yun Dao Period Real Person ​Sinzhao Period Zhenjun ​Tongsheng Period Saint ​Hedao Period ​Du Tribulation period God's arrival period Immortal ​God's hidden period ​Transcendence period Five realms of sword cultivation and sword intention Sword heart is clear Mirror stills water Breaking realm artistic conception Original artistic conception Heavenly Sword Artistic Realm Alchemist Realm Getting Started Apprenticeship First Grade Second Grade Third Grade Fourth Grade Fifth Grade Sixth Grade Seventh Rank Eighth Rank Ninth Rank Monster Clan Realm Demon Spirit (Qi Refining) Huang Jie (Guiyuan) Xuan Jie (Elixir Condensation) Earth Jie (Yundao) Demon General of the Heavenly Level (Zhenjun of the Si Zhao period) Demon King (Saint of the Tongsheng Period) Demon Lord (Hedao) Demon Emperor (Transcending Tribulation) Demon Emperor (Immortal of the Divine Advent Period) Demon Saint (Shen Yin) Dongtian Level White Mist Dao Level Purple Cloud Immortal Level Blue Sea Emperor Level Golden Whirlpool Supreme Level Red Vortex Saint Level Dao Palace Nine Stars (actually the Beidou Nine Stars, seven appearing and two hidden) Tianshu Star (White Water Greedy Wolf) Tianxuan Star (Black Earth Giant Gate) Tianji Star (Bimu Lucun) Tianquan Star (Green Wood Wenqu) Yuheng Star (Loess Lianzhen) Kaiyang Star (White Jinwuqu) Yaoguangxing (Red Gold Pojun) is the star Dongxing (Baitu Zuofu) Yinyuanxing (Purple Fire Youbi) is the dark star Space perception realm (tenth level) First level Distorted Space Fifth Floor Mustard Seed Xumi Sixth Floor Space Storm Tenth Floor Creation

- Theme: Xianxia, ​​harem Main characters Male protagonist - Lu Jinan - Background: Reincarnated in Yunding Continent for twenty years, now the Holy Son of Wandao Sect, the youngest monk in the late stage of Tongsheng Realm in the human race, and in the middle stage of Hedao Realm. - Characteristics: Calm and restrained, smart and wise, pursuing a free and transcendent realm. The heroine - Zhu Nazhi - Identity: Saint of Qingmiao Palace, with a Immaculate Immortal Body. - Personality: Possessive (disease J attribute), gentle and virtuous. - Mu Qingyue - Identity: Wandao Sect Mu Sword Immortal, adopted daughter of Pei Wanyu. - Personality: Aloof and taciturn, possessive, and possessive. - Pei Wanyu - Identity: Deputy Sect Leader of Wandao Sect, Huang Clan. - Personality: Charming, gentle and considerate, occasionally sinister. - Xiao Yinruo - Identity: Palace Master of Qingmiao Palace. - Personality: cool, noble, elegant, gentle and kind. - Lu Yunzhu - Identity: Lu Jinan's adopted sister. - Personality: Domineering, controlling, cold on the outside and hot on the inside. - Qiu Qingtang - Identity: Demon King of Qingqiu Fox Clan. - Personality: Pure and cute on the outside, talkative on the inside, and a bit naturally stupid. - Dongfang Xinglan - Identity: The eldest princess of the Eastern Dynasty. - Personality: Calm and rational, decisive and responsible. - Juyu - Identity: Daughter of the leader of the Qinglong clan. - Personality: Innocent and simple, cowardly and greedy. Plot and writing - Plot: A+ - Writing: A- - Speed: S- - Emotion: A- - Characterization: A+ - Novelty: B+ - Depressiveness: C - Overall rating: A+ (Borrowed from Qingfengsaoshu to summarize)

The author still has time to switch to a female protagonist, and the writing is very good, but as long as one female protagonist is left, such as Code Girl, the other female protagonists can be downgraded to female supporting characters, and then these original female protagonists can be teamed up with other male supporting characters, and a lot of plots can also be expanded. Group portraits are also very popular. After all, you are a small author who wants to make money. The market for multiple female protagonists is not as big as the market for single female protagonists. I hope the author will consider it carefully. ☝🏻️🤓

The introduction has been deleted, this is the full version The sickly saint wants to make me into a sword spirit; the master wants me to be a traitor; The blindfolded sword fairy sister wants me to be a slave; the vixen in Qingqiu wants to have a hundred children; The little dragon lady always drools at me; the princess wants to raise me in a deep palace; When I was a child, I was coaxed to eat up by a bad sister in the family... Obviously I just want to become a fairy, but why do they always want to do evil things to me! ? A few years later, someone asked Lu Jinan what kind of Taoist heart supported you to get to where you are now? Lu Jinan glanced at his charming wives and sighed: "I just want freedom."

The most attractive part of this article is the female characters, each of whom has their own unique characteristics, as shown in the introduction. This is where the attraction lies. But the plot problem is still relatively big. The first is that the Riddler is forced, the character's motivations are unclear, the speech is cloudy, and the foreshadowing is too blunt, and it is difficult for readers to understand what the characters in the play are doing and what the core point of the conflict is, which weakens the desire to continue reading. Secondly, there are too many "borrowings" in some plots, and the jokes should be moderated. For example, it borrows from "I Level Up Alone" and borrows from the movie "The Final Battle". Personally, I feel that it is okay to recite one or two lines, but the borrowing of the whole paragraph is too low.

Summary: 24W updated, 54204 away from target, 54775 words missing, about 11W in total, 24-11=13, daily average 130000/30=4333.3🙂 9.1 5214+5018=10232 9.2 5237+5026=10263 9.3 5080+5050=10130 9.4 10248 9.5 5088+5215=10303 9.6 10058 9.7 10088 9.8 10215 9.9 10081 9.10 10098 9.11 10269 9.12 10213 9.13 10204 9.14 10233 9.15 10293 9.16 4045 9.17 4100 9.18 8242 9.19 4409 9.20 10338 9.21 4256 9.22 4437 9.23 5235 9.24 8458 9.25 5261 9.26 8217 9.27 7093 9.28 6100 9.29 8034 9.30 4643

Kick me after passing by Baizhang

After reading two books by the author, I found one characteristic. They only focus on whether the female protagonist likes the male protagonist, and basically don't mention how she fell in love with the male protagonist. Especially in the last book, she pursues him just because he can solve misfortune. It is purely based on lust and inducement.

The author still has time to switch to a female protagonist, and the writing is very good, but as long as one female protagonist is left, for example, sister Lu Yunzhu, the other female protagonists can be downgraded to female supporting characters, and then these original female protagonists can be teamed up with other male supporting characters, and a lot of plots can be expanded. Group portraits are also very popular. After all, you are a small author who wants to make money. The market for multiple female protagonists is not as big as the market for single female protagonists. I hope the author will consider it carefully.

Please everyone~