When the Indigenous Monks Loaded the Game of Cultivating Immortals

With all due respect, the settings in the first few chapters are quite interesting, but after that, I feel like I'm about to abandon the book. The problem is that the setting is the game, but it spends a lot of time in the outside world, deliberately lowering the level of combat power, and wastes a lot of plot to solve things that could have been easily solved, which is inconsistent with the introduction (very important). In fact, the game itself upgrades quickly in the early stage. After the level is high, the experience requirement is high and the upgrade will be slow. There will be various things that increase combat power to divide the experience, and various game directions will divide the players' upgrade energy. The complete upgrade cycle is 3-5 years. As long as it is set in advance, there is no fear of early collapse caused by fast level upgrade. In the traditional setting of cultivating immortals, the top monks can move mountains and fill seas at the Nascent Soul stage. Therefore, the world view must be very large to accommodate the realm after becoming a god. Therefore, the protagonist should not be limited to one place and compete with a group of people who are destined to surpass him in a short time. But start from the overall perspective, such as connecting the game with reality, tracing the puzzle, and finally discovering that it is a chess game played by immortals, or that the game is a projection of the previous era, and reality is the reincarnation after the Great Destruction. If you really don't know how to design, just find a barren mountain to go in and concentrate on the game. It doesn't matter if you come out with great skills and fight with a large sect.

Why is it necessary to take the Foundation Establishment Pill to build the Foundation? How did people build the Foundation before the Foundation Establishment Pill was invented.

Is it not good to have such a high talent? Could it be that if you have high talent, you won't be able to write a book?

I think the writing is very good. Why are my grades so average? I will vote for you every day from now on.

I saw the latest chapter. The heroine in the game died, and the protagonist has to go to the world of immortality to find her. This is a bit strange, like a person living a good life, and suddenly a person pops up: I am your husband in the parallel world. I want to marry you and implant a parallel world memory in you. Originally, it was difficult to write an indigenous protagonist, and it also presented an ethical problem.

This kind of imaginative book is easy to attract attention at first, but without solid writing and clear and reasonable logic, it is easy to write the plot into inconsistencies. Many places seem awkward with the previous settings, making people feel that some plots are forced to appear in order to let the protagonist complete certain things, which is very embarrassing.

Xiaohua should look like this Xiaohua

Are there any similar books? 😢 I was having a good time, but it's gone.

The author did not say what materials are needed for monster beasts to level up, which means that monster beasts can level up independently, but humans themselves cannot build foundations, which means that the underlying code of the world does not allow humans to build foundations, and the world itself does not produce materials for foundation building pills. Humans must rely on forces outside the world to build foundations.

I still wish there were less emotional scenes. It feels smoother without the heroine. There is really no need to force it. Moreover, I feel that the author cannot be so meticulous in writing emotional scenes. It is better to use strengths and avoid weaknesses.

Because I work part-time and type slowly, I have to write for a long time after get off work every day. After I finish writing, I read it several times, but sometimes I can't find typos when I write them. If you find them while reading, I hope you can point them out for me, and I will correct them all. I am very grateful to some book friends who are willing to point out typos for me after discovering them. I am also very grateful to everyone for being tolerant of my typos. I will read it a few more times after I finish writing it, and try to make typos first so as not to affect everyone's reading experience. Thank you everyone.

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Don't tell me, reading this novel reminds me of the Yi Nian Xiao Yao I played before. Civilian players can only upgrade slowly, but Kryptonians can reach Nascent Soul in one day.

Your game of cultivating immortals was created twenty years ago, right?

The drama of inexplicably building a high-performance AI that resembles a real person, then falling in love with a game character, and creating a wealthy group from another world to compete for inheritance rights all depends on this game😅The excitement is getting less and less. Not outstanding. It looks like there's no chance.

The setting is novel and the writing is smooth. If this book is not popular, God will not tolerate it! Come on!

I thought the title was about the protagonist recruiting natives as players.

The writing is good. The daily guide is a rare masterpiece. Please write quickly, author.

Come on, author, I will vote for you with my recommended monthly votes in the future. I hope you don't want to be a eunuch. I will definitely read it when it is released.

Adorable newbies, please collect and recommend ❤️