Xianfu

The writing is sophisticated and the plot is okay. I just don't like the description of the main character. After becoming a human for the second generation, my character has returned more and more. So much has changed. At one moment he is self-pitying and at another he is ambitious. He has been decades old in two lifetimes, and his writing is not as good as what he wrote if he grew up aboriginal. Or just be careful and diligent so that you can make up for your mistakes and keep writing. After a while, my ideas changed too much. Otherwise, this book would be a fine product, and now it would be considered as fodder at most.

It's good to cut it. I tried my best to find a master who didn't care about anything. He deliberately struggled to survive even though he could write about prosperous times. I cut the next book early.

The old immortal of Xingxu has boundless magical power, enjoys immortal blessings forever, and has a lifespan as long as the sky. It is a rare work that can give a true flavor of the boyhood. A lot of sect rules resemble those of a classical hermit celestial sect, and the recruitment methods and numbers are in a format where resources are not enough nowadays. Personally, I feel there is a bit of a contradiction.

To put it bluntly, it's too far-fetched. Almost everything has nothing to do with you. It's outrageous for you to insist on working hard.

The previous books have some good reputations. If I continue to open new books, some people will probably read them. Now the results are not good, so I won't cut them off again 😭

This one is not as good as the one the half-demon and Xianguan fight for.

The description is very good in other aspects. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist is described like a casual cultivator. Becoming a sect provides no benefits other than the bowl of porridge at the beginning. Oh, there are also some miscellaneous books that can be used to understand the world, which are equivalent to enlightenment books. Can't you just join the sect and become a disciple normally? Or are you saying that you won't be able to write if you leave the underworld and cultivate immortality? Then there's no need to deal with all these nonsense in the beginning.

The author might as well continue writing about half-demon

There are too many people, too many mountains, the story is too complicated, there are too many branches and leaves, the protagonist has too few skills and is not focused.

It's complicated and pretends to be unpredictable. It starts in the first chapter. There are many procedures to get started with, and there are two people from the same village beside you. In fact, it has nothing to do with the plot. There are so many people to interact with that it doesn't make any sense. Still like simple happiness! ! ! ! I wrote more than a dozen books and learned a sword technique in seven years, but it turned out to be of no use.

Well written, the author doesn't look like a newbie. I don't know whose vest it is.

I feel very good. I wrote down all kinds of details, the sect's method of cultivating disciples, and the ways of the world. The protagonist thinks like an adult, perseveres from childhood to adulthood, and is able to seize opportunities.

Is there so many things to read in a novel? What happened to two people in two lives? Do you have to have a superior IQ online? As long as the plot, character description, and main plot are passable, it will be fine. Nowadays, there are really not many fairy tale novels that can be read in the current slump, and it is normal if a new author has some flaws. After all, reading more is not the same as writing, so it is better to be more tolerant.

This book doesn't look like it was written by a newbie. Who is the author?

The writing is very solid. I hope it is not the father-in-law who has written about × toad and ×× Taoism. He is reborn 🙂

Although the character is like a piece of shit, I can't help but just give it a try. There is a new book to give it a kick.

The practice notes of Hongyun Temple are very similar to the author's writing style, but it is probably not the same person, so you can read it first.