Incorrect Way to Open Ipartment

In Love Apartment, Zhan Bo actually took the wrong path. If he had developed his professional career as a programmer from the beginning, if he could create a weakened version of Jarvis, he might actually be able to be with Wanyu in the end.

Later I had plastic surgery

A dog-licker will not die a good death, and he has no right to be reborn again.

It is obvious that the author likes sour literature that is painful and heart-wrenching. I would also watch this kind of plot, at least I don't think it's too toxic. But as for the scene in Chapter 8 where Zhan Bo sucked the blood off Wanyu's finger, the separation between it and the previous scene was so great that I was poisoned and died at that time. A burst of anger went straight to Tianling Gai, as if I saw a beautiful woman fart while dancing and smelled it myself. I myself became angry with embarrassment. I don't even know why. There is really no problem with Wanyu being the protagonist. On the contrary, I also want to see the various pulls between these two people. After all, they are a couple that I particularly liked when they were young. But we always remember that the couple separated entirely because of Wanyu. Let's not think deeply about Wanyu's life, three views, and character background. Even though Zhan Bo clearly did nothing wrong and Wan Yu abandoned him mercilessly, you can't sympathize with Wan Yu and feel that Zhan Bo deserves his fate, right? Moreover, you wrote six things about the reborn Lu Zhanbo earlier, which made me think that he is mature, rational, and wise. You have already raised your tone and given me a character image. Then what did you do? You let him suck a drop of blood from Wanyu's finger without any preparation and in public? You were still rushing to do it yourself, Wan Yu, you didn't even write a word. If you want to write about your interaction with Wanyu, you must at least have normal logic, right? Just reborn, just refused to confess to her, just showed us his ambition and future. As a result, he took the initiative to suck a female friend's finger, but he still didn't feel anything? Do you really not understand the boundaries between people? Don't you think this part is awkward? Even if you want to show their romance, you can't be so anxious and crazy, right? According to Shuangwen's process, Wanyu should be anxious, regretful, and take the initiative to find Zhanbo. I guess you don't want to and won't write like this. But you can't let Zhan Bo lick it so straightforwardly, right? What position and identity did he have to suck the blood from a little girl's finger? I'm really sorry, I really couldn't stand it after seeing this plot. I thought I found the fairy grass that suits my taste, but I couldn't resist the sudden punch. The words were a bit harsh, I apologize.

I won't say much else. Others have already said it, including myself. This time I will give you a piece of advice: don't write about harems, at least not recently. What is needed to write a good harem book, especially one in a modern context, is self-deception and some indifferent and ruthless scumbag thinking. And you are a young man with rich emotions. This is not your field, and all your books are not about harems. In a word, you are suitable for pure love. I suggest that you write a book with a single female protagonist according to your own nature. Regardless of whether you continue to write Love Apartment, I do not recommend that you write multiple female protagonists.

If you are willing to write a story about pure love with a single female protagonist, it would be pretty good, and the emotional scenes are also very good. Why do you insist on having a harem? The point is that you also insist on adding Xin Ling. It's simple. If you have a single female protagonist, Xin Ling and pure love, I am willing to watch it. You insist on adding it, force it on. This person has no genes for having a harem. I've read a few of your books, and they all ask for a harem. Why do you want to open one? There are many types of sexual immorality, and they must be killed in the harem.

It's written by a female author again, and it doesn't feel at all enjoyable.

This subject matter is already very niche, and your literary youth style is even more niche. It is impossible to support your family by pointing to it. But your writing style is very good, suitable for eating this bowl of rice

Oh, I've opened a new book 😃

I hope I can just stop it when I need to, and don't give it a final blow or not write so much. This was the case with previous books. This way of writing is really cool. . . . . .

Lin Wanyu

At first, I thought I had completely looked away, but Gou Gou Shou ran over again.

Nolan

Without a golden finger, Zhan Bo, the four women, would probably not live to be forty years old. Let's arrange a golden finger!

Also, if you want to achieve results similar to Kuiba before, you should touch it less, mainly because it is too rare.

You can only keep reading such a bland plot, but if there are too many good novels, it is easy to lose your fandom.

I followed the author's last book and wanted to raise it myself. Overall, the style is still the same, and it's maintained quite well. The starting point of Lu Zhanbo's rebirth in the past is not bad. In my opinion, the most interesting thing is that it abandons the tendency of those urban rebirth novels to be self-centered and the world revolves around me. Readers can feel whether there has been a change or not. I'll keep reading anyway. I just have a small suggestion. Currently, Lin Wanyu's role is a bit heavy. If it were a single female lead, it would be fine. However, if we want to add other women's roles such as Xin Ling later, we need to strike a balance. Or the two can be separated for a while.

In fact, the concept and entry point of this book are actually good. It has a bit of a feeling of being in love after being reborn. Lin Wanyu can just miss it. There is no problem. The seabird and the fish fall in love. It was just an accident~

Or Nuo Lan Yu Mo Xin Ling three piece set

I advise you to think twice before you act There is no Nuolan Yumo in your article, just like there is no yellow flower fungus in Mushu Rou

I was deceived by my entire subscription. Author, you are already on my blacklist unless you change your vest.

Nuolan's emotional scene was moved to Zhanbo's side to make it perfect

Nuolan faced off against Wanyu, this Shura field was perfect

I like this kind of love apartment. I feel so stupid after seeing too many others.

It's just... There are really too few. I kept watching and felt like I didn't see anything. To put it bluntly, the content of these few pictures was written according to the outline. It was written in one day, so just follow it. I think it's better to wait and see it. Otherwise, it is too torture. Just leave it to Lu Zhanbo. What does it have to do with us?

Either be more ruthless or be more promiscuous. Don't write so hard that it's neither good nor bad.

Both important and established, written by a female author?

So who are Nuolan and Yumo? ? ?

Why so few updates?