Ipartment: Yifei Is My Little Sister-In-Law

To be honest, I rarely post comments, especially in the middle of the night, but when I read this novel last night at 4:30 in the morning, I knew I had to post this comment. I started watching love apartments in elementary school, and now I'm about to graduate from college. There were no good entertainment activities at that time, and because my parents were working, I would play Love Apartment and Fairy Sword III every day, going back and forth from once to more than a dozen times. My childhood passed with a smile. This book written by the author has been praised a lot by other book friends, and it's all on the point, so I won't go into details. I'll just talk about a little bit. Looking at these words carefully, I really feel like I'm back to the past. I'm nostalgic, surprised, and excited. Looking at the language descriptions of the characters in the book, I also have imagination in my mind, or I can say that the tone, tone, and even voice of their words emerge. The author must have worked hard on the characterization. After mentioning so much, it's time to tell you the key points - this book, for those who read Love Apartment back then, I personally think it is worth reading, worth subscribing to and voting for, and worth recalling the innocence and joy of that year. I also hope that Mr. The author (please let me use the word "sir" to express my gratitude and respect) can continue to bring the book lovers a plot that is entertaining, memorable and even thoughtful, and that Nanfeng can make up for some regrets in the original work.

When I saw Curry Sauce, who worked as a waiter at the wedding scene at the beginning of Ai Yi, and when I saw the author's so-called self-time inference posted in the comments, I knew that the time for goodbye had arrived in 2014.

The story of a love apartment has been with me throughout my youth Looking forward to the next story

Come on, pigeon! ! ! This book is really good, it's like watching different versions of TV series in the book, and it seems like you are making up for the regrets of your youth. I am now afraid of the ending, just like I was afraid of the ending when I watched the TV series "Love Apartment". I hope the author will work harder and write more. However, I have a small suggestion that I hope the author can see. I always feel that there is a little too little in the way of writing about Nanfeng's emotional and story lines, such as Nanfeng and Yumo meeting Gu Xizhou, and Nanfeng and Gu Xizhou's reconciliation. I hope that some content can be added to these parts, and don't skip it directly. (The above is just my personal opinion. I don't put any pressure on the author. He has already written it very well. I hope it will not affect the author's mentality 🙏)

Holy shit, holy shit, is it finally the end of Season 1? Hurry, update soon.

Purely love the party? So isn't this a novel that uses love to generate electricity? Not optimistic.

In fact, I haven't watched the fifth part. In my eyes, the fifth part is just a fan. In my eyes, Love Apartment ended in the fourth part, so I have no feelings about the characters in the fifth part.

Let's talk briefly. Nan Feng, young genius, musician, petty, dead father, brain bruises, had a car accident so his left hand is basically useless, and has zero housework ability? The only thing he can make is sandwiches, and he is very sensitive to sounds. (Because of the blood stasis on the brain, the author probably wants to create a person whose attitude towards life is basically treating it as the last day to be here or alive every day.) Qin Yumo, the heroine to be determined? Because of Zeng Jin's nonsensical contact with Nan Feng, there should be no Richard's role. Nan Feng is the Bai Yueguang in her heart. As we all know, the reason why Bai Yueguang is Bai Yueguang is so mythical that even the person himself has to be inferior to it, so I am looking forward to the subsequent development. The overall score is 8, and the recommended score is 8.5. I think it is a good act to still describe the happiness we had in this love apartment for a long time, although this act does not make any money for the author. In this era of overflowing emotions and indifference, I simply hate all idiots who don't engage in pure love.

The author is really great. He has been writing in this niche field for so long. The most important thing is that he hardly eats the money from the TV series. Most of the funny plots are original ideas. It is really amazing. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

Xinling's physical condition is not suitable for being in "Love Apartment" . In the style of "Love Apartment", something might suddenly happen one day and Xin Ling's heart could not bear the shock.

It doesn't feel like a love apartment at all, and it's not light-hearted or funny at all. After reading thirty chapters, I just can't stand it anymore.

Is there anyone out there who feels like me that Weiwei is the most suitable partner for Zhang Wei? Dali is too young, and it feels like we are still in a play-house style relationship.

I can't stand it anymore when I see Lu Ziqiao flipping over. Just because Lu Ziqiao is a scumbag doesn't mean that Chen Meijia is an innocent girl. She just likes scumbags.

It's been over 500 chapters, but Zhan Bo and Wan Yu haven't confessed their feelings? The same goes for the protagonist and Qin Yumo, they are really stinky and long, how can they use so many original plots?

The heroine is Yu Mo, but the protagonist of the title is Yifei. If you didn't know the plot, you would have thought it was the relationship between the protagonist and his aunt.

After it was released, I ordered 100 chapters and read it, but I don't want to continue ordering. The original plot is really good, and the writing and scene creation also have the feeling of a love apartment. But the protagonist has a Korean drama buff, and his personality is that of Japanese manga Asashi. He enjoys the ambiguous relationship with the author's heroine Yu Mo but doesn't want to accept the relationship. Ziqiao is a scumbag and knows it. The protagonist is a scumbag and ignores it because of his own physical condition. It's a bit tea. Maybe the author wanted to write about the Japanese male protagonist's style of being very kind to everyone, but the problem is that he is too close and ambiguous to Yu Mo, which is a bit too hasty, so I won't read the follow-up for now. It is estimated that there will be a long way to go, and I will come back to read it when I have the opportunity.

The controversial point in this article is that Zi Qiao and a group of people set up a trap to make Nanfeng make a bet to "let" him grow up. This article is very good, but there are still many problems here, but sooner or later they cannot be hidden and they will emerge sooner or later. Problems: One is the collision between the author's concept and the reader's concept (love apartment is a happy plot or a growth plot, is the way to let the male protagonist grow up moral kidnapping), one is the lack of control of the rhythm (900,000 words were written in half of the plot of the first season, and everyone grew up, it was too fast), and the other is the author's writing style (more or less literary and youthful, in fact, I feel that it is not consistent with the genre of love apartment, that is, there are two chapters about happiness and one chapter about literary youth). Let's talk about it in detail: The main thing is that the author is too anxious. Obviously you said that this is only halfway through the first season and you have written so much, so changes can come slowly. But you have been in a hurry to let each of them grow. So how do you write the plots of the following seasons? Love Apartment is inherently happy, but the happy times in this story are always related to growth. This is the same as the concept of tragedy at the core of comedy, that is, the show always has to be smashed together at the end, which feels a bit hard to give meaning... Then it is uncomfortable to watch. I feel that a big reason is because of Zi Qiao. Why should he let the male protagonist grow up? Isn't he still a scumbag himself? This book has talked about him so much before, but in the end he is still like that (how can he be such a scumbag, but his friends help him to finish it off, because he pretends to be a bad person, so it's okay? This is a bit like a good person who will be criticized by everyone if he makes a mistake, and a bad person who behaves because he is bad, so he is used to it, which means it's aggrieved), Lu Xiaobu didn't dislike Lu Xiaobu when he was watching TV when he was a child, but when he grew up, he didn't think it was so good. It's just that Love Apartment used comedy and humor to make people watch it without thinking deeply. It's enough to have fun but not to think about it. Now that the author has written it in a novel style, there is nothing that makes people like it. This kind of character should be in a drama. The clown in the movie makes people happy, but pushing the protagonist to grow up feels a bit weird (when reading novels, people usually like to take on the role of the protagonist. If it is placed in a cool novel, Zi Qiao will simply overshadow the protagonist, and the protagonist is like a nanny) (Let's describe it this way for the time being) In fact, it's easy to say Maybe it's because everyone has a biased view on making friends, so I can be classified as a group of people who feel uncomfortable reading it. But after all, it's still a matter of the author's rhythm. It's too hasty, or it may be the first time to write a book. I'm afraid that you won't be able to write a long book and end it hastily. This is more important. Love apartments are like life, it just flows slowly. I have written so much, I hope it will be of some help to the author... Of course, let's have a friendly discussion In the end, I can't help but want to complain that the core of this kind of comedy is tragedy, such as the prodigal son turning back for money, putting down the butcher's knife and becoming a Buddha immediately. The first statement is to forcefully complicate the problem and give it meaning (in fact, it is to use tragedy to contrast and instrumentalize it). The second and third are how unfair this kind of tolerance is to normal people, so seeing these makes people speechless.

This is probably the best love apartment fanfic I have ever read. I really like it.

Yu Mo

When will the pig's feet return to health or is they cracked? Give me a kick.

After catching up on the latest chapter, I still have the feeling that the protagonist has not integrated into the love apartment. Everyone is taking turns to feel embarrassed, so why is he the only one who keeps letting others feel embarrassed? Others are acting in sitcoms, and it feels like he is a guest guest on another set.

The compatibility between Qin Yumo and the male protagonist is too bad, and there are a lot of duplications in settings. Their life skills add up to about zero, and they both have goldfish heads. There is still a four-year age difference. If they are just in love, it will be fine, but if they get married, I don't dare to think how bad it will be. No matter how true love is, it will be wasted by a life of chicken feathers. Just like Nolan in the TV series. If the author hadn't arranged for them to meet early before the plot started, there would be a certain opportunity. If they met after the plot started, I don't see the possibility of them being together.

I don't understand why I wrote about curry sauce. It's not that I hate the fifth season. The main reason is that the author, a novice, inserts a peer into a TV series. The plot may not be very smooth to write, let alone adding an underage girl. I really can't imagine how the plot will develop.

I still feel that without Meijia running away, Long Zaitian and Epode, as well as the most important Inception incident (actually there is another incident, Zi Qiao's adoptive father incident, which made Zi Qiao understand that there must be a destination after a wandering life), Zi Qiao's transformation is too blunt. The TV series used four seasons of foreshadowing in exchange for a change, but it was criticized as blunt, so Hongshu had to make a change in dozens of chapters? Throughout the four seasons of foreshadowing, it has been gradually letting Zi Qiao understand what responsibility is, and finally the fifth season to shoulder the family (even if this is said to be abrupt, but the character arc is actually full, and the image changes can all be found). Hongshu has to go through dozens of chapters to use suffering to make him turn back, so even if he turns back, can he understand the responsibility? In the TV series, there have been many incidents in exchange for looking back. Here, it has to be done in one step, which feels very abrupt. . . And after all, in the TV series, Zi Qiao couldn't bear to leave after being together for so many years, but they had only been together for three months, so what if Zi Qiao turned around and left? Leave here and change places, the same dragon wags its tail, or the same saying, without time to pave the way, Zi Qiao cannot learn responsibility, whether it is the responsibility of friendship or the responsibility of family. . .

Has the name of this book been changed? It used to be called Love Apartment: The Passing of the South Wind

After writing this book, will you still write about Love Apartment? 😭

No wonder some people say it is full of literary youth flavor

I feel like the results might have been better without the curry sauce in the front. How many people were persuaded to quit because of the role of Ai Wu?

Just add more

The people who added Aiwu didn't understand and even adjusted the timeline for her.