The Comeback Begins with the Divorce Variety Show

To be honest, the writing is very good, but this counter-conventional attempt to outline how a man pulls himself in a relationship is actually a bit unflattering. In my personal opinion, you don't want to use your ex-wife as a label, but try to go deep into this ten-year relationship. This is a very good idea, and the writing is also very delicate, but the protagonist is a bit stereotyped. You can refer to the movie "The Star Comes from the Earth" in Xiaguan Crow. The protagonist begins to reflect on the gains and losses in love, which needs a fuller character arc to shape. Your blank space is a bit too much, and it seems that the male protagonist is too aggrieved, too accommodating, and loses himself in one-sided efforts. At the same time, it is difficult to write the role of an ex-wife. The ex-wife you have created now is more like an overconfident, spoiled, kind-hearted girl, and she should feel that all good things must be hers. Therefore, in love, she feels that she cannot ask for it, and she is always giving alms in a condescending manner. This cannot be solved by regret and self-blame and shed tears, nor can it be outlined by having sex with the male protagonist a few times. The emotions you describe are very real, but the self-pulling in this kind of relationship must have a purpose, or introspection itself should make people become better people. This is a kind of improvement of state. At present, although the male protagonist says he has let go, he has been making decisions under the influence of emotions. This slow growth makes this relationship a bit hypocritical. Of course, how to write it later depends on what kind of story the author wants to present. At present, I am satisfied with the description of most of the emotions, but I feel that the arrangement of the specific plot is a bit deliberate. And this kind of counter-routine description that is not too pleasant determines that the audience will not be too large. If you want to balance the performance, you may need to appropriately emphasize some pleasant points, and it cannot be a low-level pleasant point with a reverse slap in the face. This really needs to be carefully polished by the author. Finally, I hope the author will maintain his enthusiasm for the story and his emotional devotion to the protagonist, and hope to see better stories.

Your problem is, you have to sell hot and sour soup in Mixue Bingcheng Of course, there must be people who are willing to buy it. After all, they just like this taste, but the sales volume cannot be high So don't worry that no one will collect it and subscribe.

If you are stupid and have too much money, please subscribe if you are insane.

What I wrote before was okay. When I saw Dong Xiaoxiao was pregnant and wanted to have an abortion, the male protagonist ran over to her and had repeated pulls with his ex-wife regardless of the show. It was really poisonous. Then he skipped to the finale and watched it, which was really disgusting.

To be honest, I can accept everything else now, but when I saw the violent comments made by the champion and Shen the night they were together, it felt so intellectual and poisonous. It was like you fantasized about such a woman when you longed for love the most, but when she actually appeared and was with you, you called her despicable and responded to her with the most filthy and vicious language.

After seeing Chapter 140, I have to slow down first! The author should be a woman, right? Anyway, I don't think men can write this kind of article. This novel made me nervous... The protagonist fought for it again and again, then was relieved countless times, gave up countless times, and finally refused to let go... I have a curse word that I don't know whether to say or not! Also, I still think the author Wen Qing's style is good. After all, I think I am the same kind of person hahaha It's the plot, I can't say it's not good. The disadvantage is that it's too awkward.

I have been reading novels for so many years, and today I am really tortured. Although there is such good writing, but the plot is always so paradoxical, it is like you are outside a restaurant and you are very hungry. Then you see that this restaurant seems good, and you try to walk in. Then you are surprised to find that the decoration is good, and you like it. Then the aroma of food comes from the kitchen, and you are full of joy. Later, he serves the first dish, and you taste it and discover It's very delicious, very suitable for your taste, and then you can't wait to look forward to the next dish, but the next dish is very nauseating, but with Zhuyu in front, you try to look forward to the next dish. While you are looking forward to it, the aroma of the kitchen seduces you all the time. Then the last dish comes, you taste it, you are fooled, this is not a kitchen, this is a toilet that makes dada more fragrant [Emm]

I'm totally fed up with watching it today. The male protagonist is so pretentious and his thoughts are so extreme. He deserves a divorce and get out. The relationship between the two women is directly pulled and pretentious over and over again. It's disgusting. I really can't follow it anymore. Goodbye.

Can I unsubscribe from this? I feel like the money is not worth it. A man who is mentally exhausted cannot control his lower body and wants this and that. There are also a bunch of mentally ill women who are trying their best to attack. Both men and women cheat on each other and go crazy. When I watch entertainment, I just want to listen to songs, review variety shows, and watch movies. Why do I still want to vomit? It's late at night. Can I unsubscribe? Damn it, pay me back.

Alas, this licking character almost poisoned me. I originally wanted to endure it and see if there would be something darker in the back, but I didn't expect it. You really licked it to the end. How did you discover such a niche track? Also, who reported me? You can break the rules without even using any illegal words. It's really six

To be honest, I didn't think it was too literary. I really liked the back-and-forth of emotions. It made me feel real and complex emotions from the words, rather than the so-called sweet articles about abuse of wives and spoiled wives. The words are indeed powerful.

The biggest problem in this book is not the characters, but the plot arrangement: the title of the book gives people a sense of expectation for a comeback, which means that the readers come in not to watch the emotional drama, but to watch the protagonist take off step by step and become invincible in the world, and then the ex-wife regrets her mistake and other queens throw themselves into her arms. It's okay to write about entanglement, but you should write it later. Write the beginning first, and then write about what happened after others regretted it. You wrote dozens of chapters for the Eighteen Days Variety Show. You wrote it quite well and the characters stood up, although they were a bit sick. One post complained that the protagonist even said three times that he wanted to start over, but he still looked like he was about to lick his ex-wife's sister whenever she pulled him. No matter how exciting the writing is, the last relationship has already failed. Don't write about it at the beginning. Just go through it in one stroke. The entanglements will be written slowly and slowly when the story unfolds and the protagonist is on track. The producer of the Civilization series once said that a huge empire slowly came to an end, but it was reborn from the ruins and became more glorious. Isn't it cool? No, players don't like to fail. As long as they succeed and succeed again and again, when the empire they build is in decline, they simply can't wait for the production team to prepare a script to turn the tide, and they will just start over. The same goes for readers. Readers don't need you to spend dozens of chapters explaining how the protagonist bids farewell to the past and starts over. What readers want is for you to start writing from "start over", don't just talk without practicing. The author also defends himself in the text. The protagonist is not a dog licker, but he is too emotionally involved, "ten years" and so on. He seems to have not realized that it doesn't matter whether the protagonist is a dog licker or affectionate. The important thing is that you write the main story. The dissatisfaction of readers is that you wrote "failure" for too long, and no gains can be seen at all. As long as there is dissatisfaction, no matter what you write, it will be wrong. To meet the needs of readers is to write about how the protagonist "turns the tables" first, as the title of the book says, and then to write about emotional matters later. You might as well have the protagonist die from grief and excessive drinking at the beginning. After the time traveler took over the body, he had no feelings for his ex-wife and immediately threw himself into his career. His ex-wife's sister was hit a wall after several attempts, and he regretted that he had played too hard and his temperament had changed drastically. This book is also finished. I hope the author will consider more plot settings while maintaining his own style. I think the author likes to write about such muddy, stomach-ache, and inextricably linked emotions. This is not impossible, it is very stylish, but more consideration should be given to the plot arrangement.

To be honest, the writing is good, and it's already on par... But after reading it, I became even more angry. It was the first time I hated a male protagonist so much, and I felt like I was suffering from intermittent mental illness. The plot design is OK, but the comedy conflicts are too frequent and it makes me tired to watch. The emotions are always carried away. I am sad and angry at the same time, and I feel that I have become an intermittent mental patient after being involved in it. The feeling of pleasure brought by this golden finger is mostly reduced. Let's talk about the characters. The character creation is very successful, and the characters are not templates. The key lies in whether readers accept it or not. It may be my poison and his honey. In short, it's really hard to comment.

After reading today's update, I was almost pissed off. The main character quickly committed suicide. Let's end the book. My monthly subscription is like feeding a dog.

The show about the breakup in the early stage was well written, but in the later stage it was exaggerated, made to let go and let go countless times, and the child was also beaten, and he was still a licker, with no growth or change at all, and he couldn't accept this kind of plot. Shen Zhimi's character is quite frustrating. A broken person like the protagonist is not worthy of love. Saving him will only hurt him more.

Reading this book is too tiring. It is repetitive. In my opinion, it is immature. I am also a very nostalgic person. I have not been in love a few times. I always think that if I had done better at the time, I would not be like this. The fact is not true. They will not miss you. When they break up with you, you are the worst in their eyes. Then it is time to fall in love and continue to talk. Of course, I won't keep them when they break up. After all, we have been together for too long. I understand them and know what they want and want to say! Letting go is what makes us all best! Set her free and let her fly.

Do you think what you wrote is called the ending of dying alone? You call this an ending where everyone collapses, and everyone's character settings collapse. To write about loneliness, if you have the ability, ask Shen Zhimi to get married. Although the groom is the second generation, he is a very good person. Although Shen does not love him, he can live a good life with him. Then she got pregnant the next year and unexpectedly met the male protagonist. The two were speechless and could only cherish each other. Do you dare to write? You don't dare! Dong Xiaoxiao is completely focused on her career, and she even collaborates with the male protagonist in film and television. They even go to Dong's house together during holidays, but they are no longer like passers-by. Only Dong Yuxie is still with the male protagonist. Dong's father still wants to match them up, but the male protagonist has no love for her at all. At the end, there are still many people around the male protagonist, including his senior brothers and his family, business partners, friends, and even the Dong sisters, but he is already devastated and the only thing left is to live.

Can I return the chapters I ordered? It's so toxic that I can't stand it anymore. It felt like I had eaten a big bite. There are 99 more mouths to follow

The author's writing is good, but the writing made me vomit.

Abandoned the article, the main character is mentally abnormal, I can't appreciate it, I really can't stand it anymore!

The conception of this book was in vain, and the author in the later stage was also confused and forced to make up the word count.

I hope the author can make the main character more normal in the next book. No matter what the plot is, the writing is still very good. The male protagonist in the early stage is still very handsome although he always cried. I am speechless. I have read half of this book, or less than half, and was persuaded by the plot. But I think the author's writing is not faulty, and you also paid for your final remarks. I originally wanted to see if there are any plans for the next book, but I am speechless again.

Chapter 160~161 is so disgusting... Sb

The male protagonist has been repeatedly arguing with the two female protagonists. He feels that the male protagonist is seriously ill and persuades him to quit.

I used to read it for coloring purposes, but it took me a year to remember it. I have read Chapter 181 so far. So far, from the perspective of a novel, it is like the title of 180. It is a bowl of osmanthus and lotus root powder that is not crystal clear, sticky and substandard, but in terms of life experience, it really cannot be truer.

I finished ordering the book, ah, what kind of bad ending is this? The writing is good, it's not Long Aotian who carries the whole audience, but this ending is so depressing, so unreasonable, it's like a bad ending, it ends suddenly, and from now on, the male protagonist will be screwed with bad views, I will never read it, it's almost 40 yuan, I'm rough, it's worth 20 at most, it's so unpleasant to watch😦

I didn't expect such an ending. To be honest, the overall design of the ending itself is outstanding. The heroine managed to withstand the tremendous pressure of thousands of knives on her body and the scorching sun, and once again saved the male protagonist from fire and water, just like she did when she was seventeen years old, echoing back and forth, starting and ending. In the end, Dong Xiaoxiao chose to blow up everything in the form of a press conference. She accomplished her feat in one battle, blowing up all the conspiracies and conspiracies against the male protagonist. At the same time, she also blew herself up into pieces. It was hard to fight even if she wanted to. In fact, she could have stayed out of the matter. As long as she did not participate, no one could blame her, not even the male protagonist. To be honest, this plot reminds me of the tragic scene when Vegeta used all his energy to kill Majin Buu by self-destructing when watching Dragon Ball. Is this an apology? Self-salvation? Or is it love for the hero? No matter what it is, it is difficult. It is actually difficult for people to face their own mistakes. What's more, her facing up requires paying a huge price and bearing huge pressure. This is a very difficult thing, especially when there is a way out, but she did it: I made a mistake, and I also realized it. I will not escape or ask for mercy. I will give you my life. The key is to give it back. For this reason alone, I feel that Dong Xiaoxiao, the heroine, is unique. At least I have never seen another one in the entertainment online literature. One word is "sa", and two words are "character". With such a layout and such outstanding characters, I think the ending itself is flawed. The main problems are the early foreshadowing and the way the ending is realized. There are still many logical problems. For example, the implementation form of the anti-male protagonist alliance is not very convincing, and Zhang Yan's sudden reaction is also very abrupt, and I think it is unnecessary. The fact that there are various forces surrounding the male protagonist is enough reason to promote the female protagonist. Of course, privately, I feel that the life trajectory of Zhang Yan's character is already miserable enough, and there is no need to keep catching a sheep. Anyway, in general, my evaluation is that the flaws do not hide the flaws, and this book is worth reading.

Lao Zhou, are you ready to read a new book? Even though there are problems with this book, it doesn't mean that you can't write it well. I watched iPartment before, and I actually quite liked it. Looking forward to your new book.

Then write about being together with Zhimi. After all, you had already made your choice at that time, right? Guilt comes and goes, it's almost the same as Feihu Gaiden. It's really a shame for everyone. Author, are you worthy of the readers who recharge you?

The underlying reason for leaving the choice to Pei Nanchuan was because Dong Xiaoxiao was also tired. Dong Xiaoxiao thought that half a year ago, if she had relied on her status as her girlfriend to force Pei Nanchuan to settle the matter in a hurry, there was no guarantee that Pei Nanchuan would not regret it afterwards. After all, there was Shen Zhimi stalking her. Dong Xiaoxiao left the choice to him. There was always only one core logic. She was tired. She wanted to finish the battle in one battle. She recognized whether she won or lost. Now that she has lost, she admits it. Dong Xiaoxiao thought that the root cause of these years of painful entanglement was that she forced Pei Nanchuan to appear in "Goodbye Lover 3". She didn't want to force him anymore, she didn't want to see him in pain and hesitation, so she simply gave him the choice. Faced with the current situation, Dong Xiaoxiao finally accepted it calmly, because she knew that Pei Nanchuan had carefully considered this answer. That's it, the past is over. Dong Xiaoxiao thought, now that she is thirty years old, she does not want to continue to be entangled in such pain. Thinking of this, Dong Xiaoxiao touched her belly unconsciously. Chapter 346 Shocking Change She must be pregnant with Pei Gou's child again