Nolan from Love Apartment Is Actually My College Classmate

I hope that the author will not be disturbed and write at his own pace. The pace of daily texts will be slower.

Come to my house with your quilt in your arms 🤓

It made me laugh instantly

Today is also beautiful

On the way to work

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I suggest the author not to write about the interaction between the protagonist and his mother. You don't know how to write emotional scenes. I'm almost embarrassed to death.

It ended so suddenly, what a shame. I still want to see Yuyou's appearance, Lanyu's wedding, Xianfei's ending, Boyu's bond, Qiao Jia's ups and downs, and Zhang Wei's singleness

Your appearance when playing tennis is the peak of your appearance😁

It can be seen that the author is a newcomer. To be honest, I almost couldn't get through the first few chapters at the beginning. The newcomer author expressed his patriotic feelings nakedly. However, due to some well-known things, some friends are now a little disgusted with those things. The author should remember not to express his position too clearly when writing books in the future Having said so much, author, can you give me more updates? Two weeks of saving is not enough 😭😭😭 I am the helmsman, do my opinions have any weight? Update soon!

The equally beautiful Qin Yumo. Hope you are the only heroine in someone else's book.

The setting in the front is a bit toxic. Just watch it quickly. The emotional scenes in the back are very interesting. It's a pity that Nolan is so gentle and intellectual. I really like it. There are not many good-looking love apartments, and the heroine Nolan is even rarer.

I don't know what your subsequent writing is like. The comments may be good, but the first 3 chapters directly discouraged me.

I hope the author can give Zhang Wei a perfect ending in this book. Zhang Wei is my favorite character in Love Apartment. Because he is most like a normal person. He saves money and plans for his future. He will work hard to make progress and want to live a better life. If you damage other people's things, you have to pay for it even if you spend all your family property. Three charity banquets were held. The money and donations were all provided by Zhang Wei alone. (Because he felt that Qin Yumo's behavior was his own fault) While the others enjoyed everything with peace of mind (maybe in their eyes, this was just a small amount of money, not worth caring about), but no one ever thought about him, after he, an orphan, spent so much money. Will there still be money? The person with the best relationship with Zhang Wei in the love apartment should be Lu Ziqiao. The other people feel that they are just ordinary friends with Zhang Wei. No matter how good the relationship between the rich second generation and common people is, their values ​​will always be different.

I don't know what happens next, but I really can't continue the first three chapters.

I've finished reading your new book, and I'm not satisfied so I'm going to read this book. Thank you to the author for the story. The following story is still very good. If possible, I will write another one about Nolan. I still want to read Nolan! ! ! Also, here's to another extra chapter! ! !

According to the plot, Nuolan should have been the kind of character who didn't cherish the people in front of her at first. As Vincent divorced her, she gradually understood that it was all her own problems in the past few years. After Teacher Zeng did a series of things, she became more aware of everything and responded to the sentence of being confident in being favored. The author has to write this feeling to make it right. The attraction of Nuolan in the TV series is because of her experience, which brings her intellectual character, right? Also, I feel that Vincent should be from China. Some people don't like others to call them something, and it feels weird to call him by his first name. So for example, the boss of my company, we call him Pitter. In addition, Nuo Lan and Vincent are both studying abroad, so they are used to calling each other in English, so they just call him Vincent? I prefer this setting, but it doesn't matter if you are a foreigner. As for the character, to be honest, I am not very optimistic about it. After all, many readers nowadays are used to watching smooth-sailing plots, and give the protagonist a little bit of hardship, either giving away the daughter or spraying poison. After reading the first half, the author should be planning to write that Nuo Lan has a good character? But I prefer the setting of the original work, a little insight

The first few chapters are really too toxic. It's not easy to persevere. Are you sure you don't want to change it? There's no need to open it up when screening readers.

I would like to make a suggestion, collect all the little theaters of psychological activities of the characters. I don't really like this way of expression, it will appear superficial. If any readers like it, just pretend that I didn't say it.

Okay, okay. Raised for so long. Finished reading in one wave. To summarize. Just think of it as a suggestion for the next book Say it first. Single heroine. Each female character in the love apartment is independent and charming. There will be competition and there will be no willingness to share It has its own plot (although it is a bit immature) or the book review will have a greater impact. It interrupts the rhythm and the relationship is not smooth sailing. The twists and turns are normal. In the end, the twists and turns are only one or two chapters. There is not enough buffer. If the author wants to open another book, I suggest you read it (I really don't want to be reborn). First, write an urban novel covered in the skin of an apartment. It will be easier to start with the general environment. Let's talk about what I think is not good. There is no need to be so eye-catching in the first three chapters. Sometimes it's just like this, the more you want to do well, the less you can do it. Set the male protagonist to death. He doesn't need to satisfy regrets or anything like that, incompleteness is the beauty. The open one is relatively large. Urban writing is not necessary. It's good to be relaxed and realistic, and to start a career, you need to locate a more suitable industry based on the male protagonist's family and actual situation If the female protagonist is decided, you can start writing from a young age. Childhood sweethearts, and then the fate of heaven, choices, Shura fields, these are actually bonus points. Don't be so quick in emotional dramas, otherwise it will be like this one, where there will be nothing left but sex in the end. In fact, fan creation allows everyone to improve the world. It's nonsense🔨 Don't mind the author. Open a new book and go to support it. Goodbye Jianghu🙏

I hope Qin Yu and Nuo Lan can use the song Gentleman when they get married. This song is also a memory of the love apartment. Your best friend is by your side, and your favorite person is across from you. I hope the author can improve it a lot.

The writing is really good. It is the best love apartment novel I have read so far. The male and female protagonists are really the same as the male and female protagonists. I don't want other love apartment novels to copy the plot, and the protagonist is as dispensable as the air. Come on, author

The book I saw two days ago was very fast. I just finished reading the previous chapters.

It's too poisonous, I can't stand it. I can't stand it when I write spells in the love apartment.

It's a pity, it's really good, but it has persuaded too many people to quit. I look forward to the author's next apartment that starts with Nolan.

It was so sudden. I discovered this book on the night of the 29th. I read it on the 30th and liked it very much. It ended on the 31st. It was so fast. But I have one thing to say, the beginning is really not good, I almost couldn't watch it (I wish you all the best)

Oh, what a pity. It's very well written (except for the beginning). Just finish it when it's over. I respect your choice.

Me🌿, I was thinking about raising it for two days but it ended

Full order. First time full order. Although it's a bit small, can I add more details?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

New book, extras not updated yet I read this again 😡😡😡😡