Mythical Gaowu: Starting Contract with Sun Dasheng

No, buddy, why are you doing this trick in Journey to the West? You look weird.

Nowadays, all high school students must practice martial arts, and the college entrance examination is a must.

In fact, I feel that the character Xia Yu appeared too early. The protagonist is cheating. How can Xia Yu keep up with her, and then cheat her and force her to keep up with the protagonist? It feels unnecessary.

I haven't read it yet, I hope the writing is good so far and the writing will be better in the future, after all, he is a childhood fighting hero. But don't write Brother Monkey as a monkey from Mount Emei.

Damn, it's over 300 chapters and it's still in the foundation building stage. It won't be 360 ​​floors in total.

But I feel that the breakthrough speed is still a bit slow. Chapter 180, the 24th level of Nayuan, is still the first small stage of the first stage of cultivation.

Journey to the West Nascent Soul Stage in the Human Realm = True Immortal in Heaven? Human Realm Transformation Stage = Heavenly Immortal? Mahayana period in the human world = golden immortal in heaven? Is the Hunyuan Daluo realm immortal? Is the world of Journey to the West so complicated? Pull in heaven?

Why does it feel like a harem when I look at it🤔🤔🤔

Open a harem, write more emotional dramas, and have more sex

I haven't read the book. Why isn't the original version of the Great Sage with a broken contract 108 transformations?

Looking at the introduction, Sun Wukong is also a little boy in this world.

I would like to share with you some settings and descriptions about Journey to the West in this book. There are thousands of interpretations of Journey to the West in the world today, and everyone has their own understanding. For example, the identity of Patriarch Subhuti, the true origin of the six-eared macaque, including the entire combat power system of Journey to the West, etc. There are different opinions, each with its own reasons. This book is also a second creation based on Journey to the West. So if there is any conflict with everyone's understanding of that world, I hope readers will understand it. For example, in the original work, there is no real explanation of the origin of the immortal stone where the Great Sage was born. However, for the needs of the entire system of this book, the theory of mending the sky stone, which has a certain popularity, is still adopted. For another example, in the original work of Journey to the West, Erlang Shen was never mentioned by name from beginning to end. If he made one up blindly, it would be better to just name him Yang Jian, which would be more recognizable. Finally, if you have any ideas, you are welcome to discuss them, such as the ranking of the combat power of various gods and monsters in Journey to the West, etc. Thank you! !

Just comparing it with reality, the upper limit of the world of Journey to the West here does not seem to be high. The so-called true immortals, heavenly immortals, and golden immortals, when compared, it seems to be a medium-level Westward Journey.

I've read sixty or seventy chapters, and it's quite interesting, but it still feels like it has some flaws. If the author feels that there is no problem, just pretend that I didn't say it. The first thing is that the monkey in the front is not monkey enough, does not have that kind of cleverness, and the writing is lifeless. The monkey in the back is okay, but a bit dull. Then there is the fact that the supporting characters around the protagonist have no personality, and they act like they have not seen anything before. They are always stunned, staring, and dropping their jaws... What they say is a bit dull, without any catchphrases. When they are stunned, they speak some official language. This is no longer a genius, but a monster. I have read too many novels and this kind of dull writing style is a bit unreadable. Why not change it to, Damn, this technique is awesome, or, tsk, some little genius from some family has some skills in stick technique. Writing characters like this makes it feel different from others. I feel like I really want to make the readers feel good about the writing, but it's a bit dry and not like a real climax... I don't quite understand the setting of not allowing access to the Internet below foundation building. While not allowing access to the Internet, I also got an activation code. All of a sudden, the message was blocked. It is understandable even if the battle is not allowed below the foundation level. What's going on with that information only on the Internet... Artificially setting up information barriers? Are we not going to let those who have not been admitted to a martial arts university or serve as soldiers practice Kung Fu? Maybe I took it with me and didn't remember it when I watched it, but I don't think the setting is very good.

Ask Shen Nong, there is no single girl or a harem, both protagonists are not double standards

When I saw Chapter 214, I wanted to ask the brothers if it was a harem. The trend is becoming more and more obvious. The book is very interesting, but I don't want to read a harem. It's uncomfortable😔😔😔.

Did that little goblin die in vain?

I'm so looking forward to it. How many of the Six Saints will fall hahaha

This book is quite well written and worth reading

I've been reading this book for so long, but I still haven't got 3,000 subscriptions? It shouldn't be

The logic of the first few dozen chapters is very self-consistent, much better than many novice novels. I feel that the writing style needs to be strengthened, and there is still a lot of room for improvement in character portrayal. I just need to polish the cool parts. 🙂 (I only said this after I specifically voted for a monthly vote, please don't curse)

I don't know if I can get signed if I write it well, alas.

Why do you all think that what Sun Dasheng learned is the seventy-two changes, isn't it the seventy-two evil spirits?

It's actually pretty good-looking, why isn't it popular?

Slow-heating type, I think it starts to look better in the middle to later stages