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What on earth are you writing? Let's not talk about the little kid at the beginning. Until now, nothing has changed. Not to mention that it has changed. Even if you do something, it's okay. Just one more, no more, and one less. What are you doing? This is a fanfic written by you. You should be more proactive, more adaptable, and more realistic. I suggest the author refer to the fanfic of Zhengdao from Zhetian. It doesn't say anything about changes. It's not good to integrate a little. It's really worse than reading the original text. Maybe the author has his own ideas and specific outlines. But the suggestions from the reference point readers are not bad. Like a lone wolf, I feel a bit cold and without warmth, let alone passion. Zhou Tong in "Zhengdao from Shedian" is as independent. But the one that looks bad feels better. At least he is more integrated. He has flesh and blood, dares to fight, dares to fight, dares to love and hate. There are also female characters in it, such as the Saint of Yaochi, Dao Yi, and the Dragon Girl. It is a bit hard to say that these characters are the protagonists. It is not about the harem, let's not talk about the last two. Let's just say that the Queen of Yaochi's intentions are very obvious, and the protagonist doesn't respond. It's nothing in terms of the plot. It's not that bad. But as a reader, I feel unspeakably uncomfortable. In the end, it's the author's integration point. Why did you write this fanfic? So far, nothing has changed. It's exactly the same as the original work. The protagonist is like a bystander in the original work and is experiencing all this. You have the ability to change some things. Just do it if you want. It does not affect the protagonist's path. In the end, it's Author, you have your own outline ideas for this fanfic, but you also half consider the readers. Now readers think about it, you don't say anything about the harem, you just want to integrate it and don't be a bystander.

Although there are some logical flaws in the writing, it does not prevent you from becoming the number one Zhetian fan.

Just go to the archeology department of the university to look for Oracle Bone Inscriptions, and then start to practice in Kunlun Mountain or Mount Tai. Ye Fan is only a sophomore and still has a few years to grow. Judging from what you wrote, I have no interest at all.

There is a lot of verbosity in the list, but I can't click on the topic. I almost lost my breath after reading it.

I think this fanfic is very well written. It is not like other fanfics that focus on the superficial battle level promotion with cool articles all the way. Instead, it tries to explore the practice itself. I think this is the most essential thing about Zhetian. Just like the original work, the immortal that everyone pursues is essentially the pursuit of taking one step forward on the path of practice. All battles are by-products of practice. I hope the author will continue his efforts and write better

The content is close to the features and the lack of a system is a good review. The non-interference and non-sweet protagonist are also good reviews. The self-created and independent creation is also a good review. The only bad thing is that you have too many narrations, accounting for 3/2 of the content, the plot content is incoherent, and there is too little plot development.

The Emperor of Desolate Heaven created the method of covering the sky to overcome the tribulations, and he would be hacked to death. When you traveled back in time, it was the breathing method. This new method subverted an era. Not even the heaven and earth can hinder it, and there are no tribulations. You can just use it.

In order to establish a relationship with Ye Fan, I insisted on asking him to help translate Oracle. What is a computer for? Can't I find a professor from another school? Can't it be taken apart and messed up? Also, can you be more decisive and say stupid things at every turn? You even said that you sent the "three companions" underground forever. In the end, you still look like a fool. And why are you like a licking dog? Women are nothing. In the world of cultivating immortals, you are still such a licking dog.

How to say it! I saw a few pictures! When I saw Ye Fan threatening the protagonist to give him something, I didn't want to watch it! If you want to play with women, you can find those who don't have husbands! You found someone who had a husband and was seen! Just the way you write it! Anyway, I can't stand it anymore! Goodbye to you

He holds hundreds of millions, and he travels through time. As a result, he was manipulated by an unrelated widow next door. Gao Fushuai turned out to be Chu Nan, a diaosi who had not seen a woman in decades and was innocent. Still looking weak. I created a 💩similar character that is disgusting. .

Chapter 12 is unbearable. I have been reading novels since 2005, and there are at least 18,000 novels. I will give you a summary of the previous chapters. 1. The innocent protagonist travels back in time and his father dies suddenly and inherits a family fortune of tens of millions. 2. Encountered the Zhetian small group by chance and went home to find the secret book. 3. Secret book translation, meet the Zhetian small group again. 4. Being innocent and not wanting to fall in love, he cuckolded someone else's wife 5. Sending secrets to the Zhetian Group to turn the wife into a widow 6. Abandoning the widow and cultivating immortals 7. Shennong died suddenly

The highlight of the whole story about Emperor Wu Shi is only his talent, which is what he eats. However, this highlight of his has not been outstanding enough since the late Zhetian period, so he fell behind. In the small universe of Zhetian, he is invincible because his father is the Dacheng Holy Body, his mother is the Western Emperor, and he himself is the Taoist fetus of the Innate Holy Body, conceived by a female enlightened person, and breastfed by a female enlightened person after he was born, which laid a solid foundation of qualifications. Because his innate talent for Taoism was so high that it shocked the world, so his parents cut off part of his Taoist foundation. As a result, he still swept the world and became the emperor. Everyone can see how talented he is, and he is definitely a first-class existence in the Zhetian universe. But even so, in the late stage of Zhe Tian, ​​with the birth of a large number of peerless monsters such as the Immortal Cauldron Spirit God Baby, Ye Yishui, Xiao Fenghuang, Chaos Body Ye Xian'er, Chaos Body Wang Bo, etc., He actually already has rivals, but he can no longer stand out. In the perfect world, there is still nothing wrong with the relationship between the Shi Hao Emperor and a powerful Immortal King, because the Immortal King is already at the top, and if you touch higher, you will reach the realm of Quasi-Immortal Emperor and Immortal Emperor, which will touch Shi Hao's butt. There is no shame in being lower than the protagonist. In the perfect + covering the sky system, Wu Shi is still a top talent plus a top Taoist fruit. He has no beginning and no end. He has completely widened the gap with the likes of Shenba and Ye Xianer. After combining the Taoist fruit of the two immortal kings, he has become a quasi-immortal emperor. He has no beginning and no end, and is officially one of the three people in the perfect world. You can also go back in time to support Emperor Huangtian. But it was difficult to deal with the Holy Ruins as soon as they came out. Before Wu Shi, there were seniors such as Shi Yi, Ten Crown Kings, Six Crown Kings, Banished Immortal, Qilin Ningchuan, etc., And later there were juniors like Ye Qingxian. Everyone was as talented as him, so why could Wu Shi continue to dominate Jue Chen? Shi Yi is in the same realm as Shi Hao and is fighting to the death. Is Wu Shi better than him? Ye Yishui's father is Ye Fan, one of the Three Heavenly Emperors. He is of the bloodline of the Heavenly Emperor and started as an innate holy body. He is also qualified to enter the Immortal Emperor. Is Wu Shi better than him? Obviously, Wu Shi is not better than them. The talent highlights of Wu Shi that were highlighted in the first two books were completely wiped out in the Holy Ruins. If Wu Shi were to forcefully reach the ultimate state and form a threesome, everyone else, especially the seniors in Perfection, would look like a joke. Beginningless is supposed to be the weakest! At the end of the trilogy, there are three sacrificial paths plus one sacrificial path, which is the protagonist of the three books + ruthless people. Chen Dong clearly wrote that ruthless people are weaker than the three emperors, but the ruthless emperor is amazingly talented, and the first in talent and spirituality is publicly confirmed. At the end of Zhetian, the ruthless man has the highest combat power. This is what Chen Dong himself said, but Ye Fan has the best path to immortality in the world of mortals and has the highest achievements. Ye Fan is the one who broke the double taboo that the holy body cannot become an emperor + the current emperor cannot become an emperor. Neither Wu Shi nor ruthless people have reached this level. Moreover, Ye Fan started out as a Heavenly Emperor-level Dao Fruit in his first life. In the subsequent nine lives, he transformed and reached the peak in each life. Chen Dong has actually made it clear that it is only a matter of time before Ye Fan surpasses the ruthless person. Without beginning. The Great Emperor Wu Shi was an innate Holy Body Taoist, and when he was in the quasi-emperor realm, he took on the World Emperor's soldiers with his bare hands, but in the later stages of Zhetian Great Emperor, he was really like that. To put it bluntly, Ye Fan's son Ye Yishui was also an Innate Holy Body Taoist, and he could do this with a minimum guarantee, and he would also be eligible to advance to the Immortal Emperor later on. Even in the late Zhutian period, Yang Xi was honing his skills to take on the emperor's soldiers with his bare hands in the Zhunjiu period. A ruthless person takes the immortal road in the world of mortals. He encounters problems intermittently. He relies on a big obsession, stumbling along the way and trying to make ends meet. As for Wu Shi, although he has also studied the method of longevity, or the ancient emperor who covers the sky, there is no one who does not study longevity. For example, Emperor Ye Tian will live the eighth or seventh life of the great dream of eternity. Emperor Wushi has also studied it and informed the Black Emperor. But in the end, he did not follow the mortal path of transformation from life to life at all. Instead, he relied on his extremely strong combat power to enter a strange world with a small amount of immortal material. His life span was suddenly extended dozens or hundreds of times. With the life span of the supreme beings in the perfect world, he could live for millions of years. Wu Shi followed the normal path of promotion from the Supreme Humanity to the True Immortal of the Immortal Ancient Continent. He did not follow the path of transformation from life to life. He only achieved Dao Fruit combat power similar to that of the Red Dust Immortal, but he was not the Red Dust Immortal. Then what is he? Quasi-immortal king! He is the quasi-immortal king of the perfect world, possessing the same level of Dao fruit and combat power as the Red Dust Immortal. The next step is to go through the Immortal King's Tribulation, and the next step for Ye Han and the two of them is to go through the Immortal King's Tribulation. The most bragging thing about Emperor Wu Shi is still his talent. His talent was so amazing that he took the lead in Zhetian Cosmos and left Zhetian Cosmos prematurely. This also caused his talent to become a legend in Zhetian Cosmos. It was not until the birth of Xiao Fenghuang and Ye Yishui in later generations that there were talent equals. So even until the end of Shrouding the Sky, there is still nothing wrong with the name of the trio. The Beginningless Emperor left behind originated from the perfect world. Perfectly connecting the beginningless and the endless, then the question arises, if an Immortal King is reincarnated (it doesn't matter what words are used to describe it, because there is a person behind the beginningless and endless), then his talent is enough to become a strong man in the ultimate realm of the chaotic world in the trilogy. Isn't this too childish? No matter how powerful the Immortal King is, he is only an Immortal King. How many Immortal Kings can produce a quasi-Immortal Emperor? The two immortal kings of Wu Shi and Wu End merged into one, bringing Wu Shi to the quasi-immortal emperor realm. This should be Wu Shi's last afterglow. The dividends accumulated by Wu Shi's two lifetimes of hard work have been exhausted. After that, he and Ye Han will slowly widen the gap. According to Chen Dong's usual principle of writing books, he insists on respecting only the current world. The reason is also very simple. If you really have the talent, understanding, creativity and luck, then your lifetime will be enough for you to become a top powerhouse. It's impossible that you couldn't survive in your last life and you will be top-notch in the next life. Therefore, Chen Dong's books are only respected for the current generation. The worst thing about Emperor Wu Shi is that he got involved with Wu Su. As soon as Wu Su came out, Wu Shi fell out of line. Although the Tao and Fruit of Wu Shi and Wu Shi merged into one, making Wu Shi a quasi-immortal emperor, and he was able to continue to side by side with Ye Hen, and still go to find Emperor Huang Tian in a perfect world, but it was actually very reluctant. No matter how talented the four Huangye Chuhen are, they are not the reincarnation of anyone. This has always been the case in Chen Dong's novels. The strongest person only cultivates himself for one life, and rushes to the top by defying nature and changing his destiny. Emperor Wushi no longer meets this condition, and Cao Yusheng is also affected by this to some extent. He has been on that road for so long and is still an Immortal King. There is actually a reason for being bitten by dogs. Ye Fan started out as a Heavenly Emperor-level Daoguo, and then transformed from life to life. Each life was at its peak, and each life became stronger than the last. The ruthless man was the Nanling Heavenly Emperor who only called himself the Nanling Heavenly Emperor in his third or fourth life. After that, he followed the path of immortality intermittently, and was mostly not at his peak. Wu Shi simply did not follow the immortal path of the mortal world. He went to a strange world with a small amount of immortal material, relying on hard work in this life and the accumulation of Tao fruits from the immortal king in his lifetime. As for Duan De, he has cultivated the ninth supreme Taoist fruit, and is a mortal immortal who has achieved the union of the ninth supreme Taoist fruit. However, not every nine of these nine lives is an emperor-level Taoist fruit. For example, the one with Ye Fan, which is the fifth life, is an alternative to enlightenment. Although he has lived for 15,000 to 6,000 years and is comparable to a real emperor in terms of vitality, alternative enlightenment is an alternative enlightenment, and there is still a long way to go to meet the real emperor. As for the Heavenly Emperor level Dao Fruit, there is not even one. So Duan De was not destined to be a part of the trio in the perfect world. He later went to the past with the Black Emperor and used the ordinary life-saving magic medicine for someone (most likely Wu Shi). He was constantly bitten by dogs and was looked down upon by Emperor Huangtian. At this time, Fatty Duan had an Immortal King-level cultivation, while the Black Emperor had a Ten Evil-level cultivation and combat power. In other words, he was still a quasi-Immortal King in terms of cultivation, but in terms of combat power, he could rival an ordinary Immortal King. Of course, it is not ruled out that Fatty Duan is also a quasi-immortal king, Hongchen Immortal, similar to the Black Emperor at this time. The two of them were sent to Shi Hao's era by Ye Fan or ruthless people to find the magic medicine to save people. After all, Fatty Duan's journey to the unity of the Nine Worlds was too watery, and it was probably the transformation method of the Red Dust Immortal planned by Emperor Huangtian for him. Some fellow authors said that the Little Fatty's Heavenly Tribulation Technique was left by Emperor Huangtian after he formed the Seal of Reincarnation and before he passed through the Tribulation of the Immortal King, and gave it to the Little Fatty to transform him into a Red Dust Immortal. It's just that Emperor Huang Tian was the Immortal King's physical soul and was buried in the burial ground after being killed. The reincarnation seal formed by it was enough for one life. As for Fatty Duan's supreme physical body, it needs to be divided into nine lives in order to achieve the effects of "things must be reversed at the extreme" and "quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes". This argument makes sense. After all, when Shi Hao saw Fatty Duan and a big black dog coming to his era to search for life-saving medicine, the black dog was extremely anxious and kept biting and scolding Duan De. At that time, Shi Hao worriedly asked Fatty Duan, "Are you still you?" Later, he also formed the seal of reincarnation. It was impossible for him not to go to Fatty Duan who was buried underground, and it was even more impossible for him not to interfere with the Heaven Calamity Technique to help Fatty Duan maintain his true self after endless years. But this kind of forceful force from external forces has the effect, but it is not too unnatural. In the trilogy, the Immortal King is the watershed. Without that talent, spirituality, luck and diligence, hard teaching cannot teach him. As for the quasi-immortal emperors and immortal emperors in the future, it will be even more difficult the further they go, the more difficult they become. External forces are only aids, and cultivation can only rely on oneself after all. Back to Emperor Wu Shi, Emperor Wu Shi could not enter the sacrificial path. His premature death just shows that Chen Dong has good control over the realm and the plot. He can completely bring Emperor Wu Shi to life, but if he brings Emperor Wu Shi to life, there will definitely be a large number of idiot fans asking Wu Shi to advance, but the promotion of Wu Shi will destroy his entire system. We need to protect both the realm system and the feelings of book friends, so Wu Shi died early. In the future, under the force of the Three Heavenly Emperors, he might be able to reach the realm of the Immortal Emperor. Didn't you see that the ending of the Last Holy Ruins didn't mention the cultivation without beginning? Only four people can enter the sacrificial path and the sacrificial path, namely the last four people. In fact, even ruthless people would have no chance if it were not for the strong demands of ruthless fans. Didn't the ending of the old version of Holy Ruins not mention the Dao Fruit of the ruthless person? Chen Dong obviously wanted to resolve this issue. The unwillingness to engage in realm water injection destroyed his promotion system and world view (although once the Holy Ruins came out, even those who had collapsed could not be saved.).

The author should understand the status and approximate order of magnitude of strong men of different levels in the world of practice. Don't just open your mouth and talk nonsense. In Zhetian Beidou, if you can open up the sea of ​​suffering, you can join a small sect and become an official monk. If you can reach the spring of life, that is, you can fly, you can go out and work as a casual cultivator on your own. You can be regarded as getting rid of the lowest level of the cultivation world and no longer a "reptile". And if your cultivation reaches the realm of Shenqiao, you can become a member of the cavalry corps of a great emperor family like the Jiang family and the Ji family, or a powerful elder similar to Lingxu Cave Heaven. The Jiang family knight Jiang Hanzhong and the one who asked Ye Fan to make medicine were at this level. If you can reach the Other Shore Realm or even the Nirvana Realm, you can be the head of a small sect like Lingxu Dongtian, which has dozens or hundreds of monks. If you have the cultivation level of the Dao Palace Secret Realm, you can be the head of the Qingxia Sect in the Northern Territory of the Eastern Wasteland. It is considered a small and medium-sized sect, with hundreds of monks. The status of the monks in the world of cultivation is definitely not low. In many middle-level sects, the elders who have the real power to take the disciples out for training are at this level. They can even serve as the elders of powerful forces such as the Ji family and the Jiang family. For example, the so-called "elders" of those who forced Ye Fan and others to go into the ancient forbidden land to collect medicine. If you can cultivate to the Four Extremes Secret Realm and begin to guide and understand the great ways of heaven and earth, you will reach the sky in one step. You will be a so-called famous person in a famous town. With this level of cultivation, even if you are placed in an imperial family such as the Ji family and the Jiang family, you will be an elder who holds great power and can decide many things on your own. Although there is no Qing Emperor when traveling. When the tomb is opened, the first few elders who appear are very popular, but they also have their own chariots or flying boat palace-type magic weapons. The representative person is Ji Hui. The original book makes it very clear that the Four Extremes Secret Realm is a famous person, an absolute big shot. For the Diaosi monks, they are almost as precious and difficult to cultivate as the golden elixir ancestors of mortals. The Four Extremes Realm is also the minimum cultivation level for super powers with special physiques to formally go out to practice, such as Ji Haoyue, but if you are a mortal body, it doesn't matter, no one will kill the mortal body, unless you are too heaven-defying. The Secret Realm of Dragon Transformation above the Four Pole is truly a strong one. It corresponds to the Venerable Realm in the perfect world. I read the original work of Zhe Tian and I am very sure that the elders of the powerful forces who came out to attract attention are nine Qingluan-type creatures, or Nine phoenix-type creatures or nine dragon-type creatures pulled their carts for them. Their true cultivation level is the Dragon Transformation Realm. Their lifespan is between 700 and 1,200 years old. The difficulty and preciousness of cultivation correspond to the Venerable Realm of the Perfect World, or the Nascent Soul Stage of the mortal stream. This is already considered a true big shot. It is a milestone in cultivation just like the formal introduction to the Great Way of Heaven and Earth and the beginning of enlightenment in the Four Extremes Realm. The Immortal Realm is half-step to greatness. In my impression, this extremely high number of monks are already qualified to serve as the "Supreme Elders" of imperial clans such as the Ji family and the Jiang family. In short, they are far more powerful and valuable than ordinary elders. The supreme elders of the Ji family killed by the Peacock King and Taoist Crow, and the supreme elders of the Ji family burned to death by Ye Fan, seem to exist in this series. And they are also the guardians of the super powerful young geniuses, such as the guardians of the Holy Son of Light and Lao Dao Bazi, who was Xianyi when he first appeared. There are not many such monks in the Ji family at that time. It is estimated that there are only dozens of people. The loss of one will be painful even for an imperial family like the Ji family and will make the family owner furious. For example, the Supreme Elder of the Ji family who was casually killed by Taoist Crow because he was scratching for refining a weapon in the Fire Realm was provoked. The entire top management of the Ji family went to the Fire Realm to investigate. A strong man of this level could sit at the elders' table and discuss family matters with the head of the family. Even for an imperial family like the Ji family, there could not be too many in an ordinary year or at a low point in cultivation. The Ji family had dozens of statues, and the entire Donghuang together would most likely not exceed a thousand. As for the Immortal Ermao, they really stood at the highest level on the bright surface of Beidou at that time. They were the rulers of the bright surface of the Eastern Wilderness. In the entire Eastern Wilderness, during the low ebb of cultivation, the number of people retained was estimated to be only one or two hundred people at most. The masters of the eight veins of the Ji family are only second-level immortals. Taking into account the family head and other strategic places, such as the holy city stone square, the family cemetery, the place of family heritage, and the retired old monks, the number of second-level immortals maintained by the Ji family in one generation is only a dozen, no more than twenty at most, and sometimes no more than ten. Why did the Peacock King dare to fight against the Ji family? It is because the strength of this generation of the Ji family is just this, and at the same time, the stalls are large, and you have to have people to guard various industrial areas, clan settlements, family cemeteries, and family heritage sites, and leave some manpower to guard against other big forces. In the end, the only mobile force that can be deployed to encircle and suppress the Peacock King is the head of the Ji family. He also needs to join forces with the Holy Lord Yaoguang, and the mobile forces of the two families are combined to defeat the Peacock King. The Mauryan King knows that you are definitely reluctant or uneconomical to open up the family heritage for him. Those family elders who are sealed in the source of gods heard that you asked him to break the seal and go out to fight for a second immortal. So the Peacock King seems dangerous, but in fact it is not that dangerous. The Ji family, including the Shaking Light Holy Land, has a limited number of mobile Immortal Powers that can be mobilized. It is impossible for dozens or hundreds of Immortal Powers to rush up at once to besiege the Peacock King. The Maurya King is so shrewd and ruthless that he cannot really be a reckless man who only knows how to fight. According to what the author said, there were not even 100,000 or 10,000 Immortal Immortals in one era. As the only forces in the Eastern Wasteland that had the Supreme Emperor Arms, the proportion of the Immortal Immortals they could cultivate with their resource output could reach 5%, even if it did not reach 10%. Even if the 10,000 Immortal Immortals mentioned by the author were counted, 5% would still be 500. If you squeezed in casually, you could squeeze out dozens of Immortal Immortal Immortals, which would have already made the Peacock King famous. If there are really 10,000 immortal immortals in the Eastern Wilderness, then the immortal immortals are really worthless. Then how can the Peacock King "cross the Eastern Wilderness"? How can you "fly to the top of the world"? Wouldn't it make people laugh if I said it? You only need to carefully read the first thousand or even the first 800 chapters of Zhetian, and then analyze and calculate carefully, you can estimate that the number of immortal immortals in Donghuang at that time was about one hundred to two hundred, Zhongzhou had about two to three hundred at most, and the other three regions were even less than Donghuang. The Beiyuan Wang family had about ten immortal immortals, such as the king who was killed by Ye Fan. The "Ninth Uncle" of the family is the Second Immortal Power. It is obvious that he ranks ninth in terms of weight and voice in the royal family. There are eight Immortal Two Powers in front of him, and there should be several Immortal Two Powers behind him. The Wang family in Beiyuan was considered the most powerful force in Beiyuan at that time, or at least one of the most powerful forces. It can be estimated that the number of Immortal Two Powers in the entire Beiyuan at that time was about thirty or fifty. At that time, the Donghuang Ji family had more than a dozen immortal immortals, and there was a high probability that they would not exceed twenty. With such a rare number, surely the fall of the Immortal Ermong is a big deal? Every Immortal Ermao has vassals, and vassals have vassals, just like a huge whale will be filled with Teng pots, which is directly related to the distribution of cultivation resources and interests of countless people. The Immortals rarely fall. Except for the sages in the forbidden areas and the hidden world of Beidou, there are generally very few people who can threaten their lives. They were the rulers and strong men on the surface of the Beidou Ancient Star Territory at that time. Before Ye Fan came to Beidou, they would most likely just sit down normally, or die in the restricted area of life in their later years. The fall of the Immortal Ermong would only occur once every one to two hundred years, or even three to five hundred years, precisely because it was not common. , So the duel at the Yaochi Holy Meeting every five hundred years is talked about by people. Even at the next Holy Meeting and even the next time, everyone is still discussing the story of the last duel or even the last time, telling the life stories of the duelists. The last duel feels like it was yesterday, and it is so fresh in the memory. Monks all live in their own world. Not everyone is the protagonist. They know many things in advance, including the tragedy of the emperor turning to ashes and the fall of Shengjian like rain. It is even more impossible to say "the great power of the East Wasteland has ten thousand if he does not have one hundred thousand". In the Black Emperor's view, the Yuhua Dynasty that ruled the entire Zhongzhou brought out a thousand immortals and two great powers at the same time, which made the well-informed big black dog shout that it was impossible, absolutely impossible. He believed that the Yuhua Dynasty could save a thousand immortals. The two great powers were nothing more than a matter of heaven and earth. Not even the Yuhua Dynasty, which ruled the entire Zhongzhou, could do it. This was simply going against common sense. However, Li Tian or Yan Yixilai believed that even if there were 500 powerful powers, it would be impossible for the Yuhua Dynasty to come up with it. In ordinary years, there is a second immortal realm, which is enough for you to "cross the Eastern Wilderness" and "fly to the world" like the Peacock King, because there are not many who are stronger than you, and most of them are hidden in the world. There are about one or two hundred people like you in the entire Eastern Wilderness, that's all.

There is a big difference between the Zhetian written by the author and the original text, but the Zhetian fan written by no one is different. Just like the understanding of the original owner of a martial arts secret book is different from that of others. If this is the case with Zhetian, it is better to read the original than to read any fan novel. Fans and fans are of course different from the original. They create various plots that are different from the original, rather than being almost the same as the original. If so, what is the difference between it and copying?

The protagonist is in love with Zhou Mei, but in the world of Zhetian, an ordinary female character is in love with the protagonist. It's really better to let a famous female character in the original work be the beauty. She won't have to have a relationship with Xia Siyu in the future, right?

Why are you on the bestseller list? I couldn't even survive Chapter 10. The protagonist went to school to ask someone to ask the professor to identify the oracle bones, but the woman suspected him of being a tomb robber. Ye Fan also thought the same and even planned to test the protagonist and died of poison. I asked the author, do you think this plot is beautiful and this girl is particularly cute? What's inexplicable is that he later described the "cunning" look in that neurotic woman's eyes. Why, do you want that woman to be the heroine? I don't need a woman to be in this position, and I still flaunt how calm and ruthless I am, and I don't see how contradictory it is 😁

I felt relieved when I saw so many people couldn't stand it. I thought there was something wrong with my brain.

It's better not to read books that don't match your three views. I've been discouraged from reading them in the first few chapters. Traveling through the sky, not thinking about practicing cultivation first, seducing a married woman first, and being complacent about it. What kind of people are reading this?

What's the point of that woman writing it? She's crazy and the main character is like a wild dog in heat.

Digging tunnels into the barrier is really great.

It's really a lightning protection, it's just a self-deprecating way of writing.

Damn it, you have 30,000 collections of such mentally retarded novels? Are there so many junk readers? Take a look at what kind of cerebral palsy article is written in Chapter 5 and Chapter 4. You can also read this...

Don't say that the rest of it is good to watch. There are no highlights in the first five chapters and they are all just wits. Don't read it. 1. Dog licking 2. If you have a golden finger and don't know the words, go directly to find someone related to Ye Fan 3. The characterization is extremely intellectual. It is difficult to find someone at the gate of the university and ask him directly if he is here to pick up girls.

A pighorn who marries someone else's wife and has children, the plot is hard to describe in one sentence

The writing of The Sky-defying Shark, those who can read ten chapters should hire an expert 😐

After going your own way, do you turn around and follow the ancient methods again?

At the end of this book, the scenery above the sacrificial path is described as the intrigues between the returning secular imperial powers, the fights in the nests of the three emperors, and the fights in Ye Fan's harem. The author may have thought it was a trick, and felt that he had written in depth. He simply couldn't see it...

It's all scolding, why is it still a good product? If anyone has seen it, how about an introduction?

I have only read three chapters, and I am exhausted. A broken shovel can be talked about for a long time, and even a bag can be talked about for a long time. What materials are not ordinary, a broken matchmaker can be talked about for a long time. It is a bad article. The first three are used to interest the readers, but they can be like this. I can't even think about leaving the following articles.

Listen to my advice and withdraw. I was a little poisonous in the first three chapters, but became more and more poisonous in the following chapters. Finally, I became addicted.