Alien City: Five Opens

The last few chapters have been too fragmented. Several accounts are set up with the same person, but they appear to be different people. The thief account is so reckless, and the main account is a complete loser. Maybe the author wrote about the character design that went back to the past, a bit like the male protagonist design of the previous works of Brother Li, but this kind of loser character is very fragmented here.

Author, please focus on the mountains and forests first.

. You said in your book and diary that you were stuck writing about mountains and forests. Is this okay?

What I admire the most is that a lot of the weird logic in the book makes sense in this weird world view. The author is really a genius. Ordinary people can't think of such an absurd and logical world.

After the guild war ended, it became more and more boring. The whole day was just about Zhong's crotch and Dong's low self-esteem and sensitive psychological activities, slipping away.

In the novel, characters keep saying that Zhong Mingsheng is disgusting. Where is the disgusting thing? The logic is baffling. Zhong Mingsheng did not bully others at a high level, nor burned, killed or looted. I always fight back after being bullied to the point of being bullied. It makes no sense to always say he is bad. The only thing about messing up the relationship between men and women is that in this context, it doesn't even count. He is not a man who is strong, it is all done voluntarily by others. The novel says that the atmosphere in the novel is that men and women do not matter, while also saying that others find Zhong Mingsheng disgusting. Are the people inside schizophrenic?

What have you been writing recently? Can you add some conflict plots? Is it interesting to describe Zhong Mingsheng playing with women all day long?😥

I saw everyone in the comment section was praising it, thinking how good this book was. After reading 10 chapters, I can honestly say that the writing is not bad. But you really can't see it. I really don't understand why level 3 thieves have nothing but agility 31? What's the point of adding this point?

Your writing is becoming more and more boring. The recent plots are too repetitive and cliche. Bring your talent back to urban writing. Ginji-boy paper-type protagonists are what you are best at.

I like this kind of novel about the author who is not bound by women and goes his own way.

The author who respects women the most on the Internet

It's a pity that I didn't fill in the gaps. This novel is the most enjoyable one I have ever read.

Even though 5 is better, 30 is a bigger world for me.

Well, regarding Nan Shouyi, although I know that the three Murong girls are vicious, they really love Nan Shouyi. I don't know how the author arranged it, but the low moral bottom line of this book is a bit disgusting. If Nan Shouyi really abandoned the three Murong girls casually, I might just leave the scene and cry alone, pure love is invincible, but this book is good to read. It's not that I have to be nice to them, I just don't abandon them casually and treat them like trash. I really love harem warriors purely.

It's almost 200,000 words. Why can the protagonist build five accounts? He built five accounts in one year of time travel. Except for the two orphans, they all have family backgrounds. These five accounts are characters that the protagonist had before time travel. So how were these five accounts built? Even if you don't pay attention to the setting, you have to give an explanation. There are always traps. It's so uncomfortable.

There is no main line, and the sense of fragmentation is very serious. As soon as one character shows some interest, he is immediately replaced by another character, just like changing the protagonist, and the content is completely irrelevant. After reading Chapter 12, the protagonist has been changed 3/4 times, and I no longer want to continue reading...

To be honest, there is no sense of immersion. Judging from the author's writing style in the previous book (because the writing style is the same), the setting of this five-person account completely ruined it. Both of them are not ordinary web novels that push the plot through contradictions and conflicts. The descriptions themselves are bland, coupled with the settings that have no sense of substitution. What is it if it is not G!

If tomorrow is also chapter 30, I would like to call it God

This novel is poisonous. After reading it, I always think about it and feel itchy. Where can I find other novels of this style?

? ? ? What a mess! ! People who watch it will have a headache! ! ! And there is no main plot at all. I don't know what I'm writing about. It's such a stupid bunch! ! ! I don't know what it means! ! !

This author doesn't seem to have only written two books. Does he have some kind of vest?

It's not sublime enough. In this society where everything is based on level and experience value, after the protagonist becomes invincible at level 100 in the later stage, he should actually enslave all the professionals and use them as experience babies to level up. Unexpectedly, the five numbers are so kind. In the later stage, they become daily routines. The scene of killing the powerful people of Qilin City is a little bit interesting, but it is too obscene to kill only men but not women. It needs to be fair.

The early writing was okay, but the later writing was a bit watery. It's not as good as Guo Jing's book. The author's next book will write about the city!

In the early stage, there are upgrades and guild battles to watch, but in the later stage, they are rubbish.

Dead eunuch😒

Opened a new book

Come on, author, I hope the next book will be better

When I first started watching it, I thought it was quite special and interesting.

Priority will be given to historical novels, such as Ke Shan Meng Late Ming and Lingao novels, and abstract novels such as this book, or a sudden onset of Abyssal Syndrome or Black Sails will do, as well as fantasy novels, as long as they are relatively rigorous.

I can't stand it anymore, I still have 500 left to go to Deacon, I hope I can persevere.