Star Tycoon

You were born to eat this bowl of rice. Who would have thought that you took the young woman's mobile phone for online loans?

I'm not afraid of you being stupid. The protagonist doesn't want money or women anymore, so I don't care. Watch the protagonist lie in bed and play games every day?

The more you write, the more rubbish you get, and what this crappy golden finger writes has no meaning at all. Is everything written on the shelves rubbish?

The book is too long. You used the title of Interstellar to attract people who like to read science fiction. As a result, you have written more than 30 chapters and there is no content related to technology at all, nor the role of the system. It only describes the main character doing business in a small county town while getting entangled with a group of women without any bottom line. I don't know what is written about the live broadcast. Anyway, after watching it for so long, I haven't seen anything related to the label, and I haven't seen anything about science fiction that I want to read.

What kind of bullshit did you write I paid so much money just to see you write that shit Give me back the money, ntmd

Stop writing about this system and focus on writing about cities. It's like there are no updates at all. Subscriptions cost real money, but the content never changes and keeps describing the system as water-filling. Since it was put on the shelves, the money spent has been as good as not watching it.

Don't feel uncomfortable to post comments and questions. It's fine to post in book reviews. It's easy to dissuade newcomers by posting here. Come on, Brother Li.

The system section can be simplified and simplified, but the system chapter is very confusing.

I am almost finished as an eunuch, and I am getting system water every day. If you haven't watched the plot, it means you haven't watched it.

I really am nothing 😭 When the protagonist took photos of the supporting actress for online loans, I even scolded him 😭 I am as blue and thin as a big cow 😃

The author wrote Goldfinger like Dog SHI, which is really useless. It can't even advance the storyline. The people summoned here all have the memory of the protagonist. So it's okay to engage in technology or something. This damn person is doing nothing every day. Being a host and selling games...

I knew these two pictures today were all kinds of calculations, but I was still moved. The structure of this storyline is admirable 👍

As soon as this cheat came out, it instantly turned this book into a third-rate novel. I couldn't stand it. It's best if the cheat is as simple as possible. If you are writing a two-world novel, you should focus on its role as a bridge, rather than mixing it up in many aspects, making it a mess. The key is that the author's level is not suitable for a plot that is too complex. There is really something wrong with it, and the integration is not good at all.

After being put on the shelf, the content is just a mess

Neither StarCraft nor Tycoon, just change your name to me. I'm at the starting point and I'm doing all the math.

It's a pity that there is only one Hajisan in the world. If there were more, I wouldn't be destitute 🙂

You're so awesome, Number Brother, you were born to eat this bowl of rice

It feels like there is less and less to write about as you get to the end, it's all about playing games in the system. You haven't written anything in the real world. Are you preparing for the transition and then writing about interstellar content? Rush out of the earth and into the universe? More and more water!

Ah, it's all finished, and it's still free for a limited time. This is a bit uncomfortable.

I just said that the main character was a little crazy, so I just deleted this chapter. I didn't expect it to end immediately.

Author, take a look, this can still make a lot of money, can you write it longer?

You, Star Tycoon, are lonely

Your game is seriously out of touch with reality, and the protagonist feels like he has no purpose. The protagonist has a good personality, but he has to have a long-term plan to let the readers see it. It's cool. It's not cool. It's not a business war, it's not high-tech. The issue of resignation from the company and then resignation really doesn't have much plot. Author.

What I wrote before it was put on the shelves was okay, but what I wrote after it was put on the shelves was a piece of shit.

Chapter 500 has not been written so that I don't have the light of a great god.

200 Chapters are limited to 666

I knew you were going to be a mess. After reading a hundred chapters, you are still doing business and hanging out in China. You are still an interstellar tycoon.

I cut it after reading chapter 100. There are many places where the preface and postscript are inconsistent and the characters are confusing. I don't know if it's just a random word count.

It's free for the next two days, so you can enjoy watching it😊😊

There's no need to read this book once it's on the shelves