My Life as a Killer

All I can say is, damn you, if you want to write a cool article, write it well, and arrange to be arrested. Just in this wave, do you know how many people will be abandoned? How don't you want to be popular? There is not much content in this book. It was cut when it was fun. It's almost done. Let's go.

It seems that the author likes arrogant and unreasonable heroines. . Can't bear it

Author, haven't you noticed that your plot has seriously gone off the rails now? Since the protagonist was inexplicably caught, the plot has now become a mess, with meaningless killings and being hunted down like 🐶 every day. Is this kind of plot interesting? I remember that your book started out as a killer in a movie world like John Wick. Now the protagonist has changed from a killer to someone who wants to subvert the United States? After killing a bunch of people and not saving my friends, if I want to see the dismemberment of America, why should I read this novel of yours? The readers here are all readers who want to watch time travel movies and travel around the world. Do you still want to see the plot with such results now?

The protagonist seems to have a serious illness. The heroine chosen is either promiscuous or has suffered inhuman treatment, and her naked body has been seen 😅

Author, you are not suitable for writing about women. In all plots involving women, the protagonist is a weak character who can be trusted as soon as there is a so-called intimate relationship, just like a licking dog. The writing was okay originally, but it was ruined by these garbage plots.

Although the previous plot is not very smooth, at least it can be watched. After the forty-five chapters, the plot begins to be stiff and foggy, and it is inexplicably difficult to watch.

From Broke Sisters

I feel that the protagonist is not very stable. One moment he is a "quick shooter" who kills people without batting an eye but is ruthless and has few words. The next moment he acts as a carbon copy of Deadpool in a Continental Hotel, so there is a bit of a disconnect between the two. The advantage is that the pace is quite fast. These 100,000 words have been collecting girls from Sarawak. It is a good and refreshing article. Come on, I will continue to chase you.

The writing was good before Chapter 45, but suddenly at Chapter 46, it gave the readers a huge headache 😅

Hot Girl Assassin Chisato and Mahiro

The plot is so confusing to watch, it's so torn, the time is confusing, the plots come one after another, the whole process is tense, and it's very tiring to read even though it's a cool novel.

The gunshot wound on the protagonist's leg at the beginning has suppurated, does it not affect the action at all? Chapter 2 Of the two killers whose hands were injured by the protagonist with a gun, one of them was stabbed in the shoulder and could still follow the protagonist's instructions with deft hands and feet? Did the employer's son react at all when he was stabbed in the leg? Let those people react like normal people, so that passers-by can look like real people and can speak openly without offending readers...

At the beginning, I wrote that the leg was shot and suppurated. Except for the fact that the protagonist reacted a little when the leg moved, the rest of the time it seemed that there was no such injury. After about ten chapters, I finally remembered this setting and added a sentence in the text that the body traveled through time and mutated.

The first 45 chapters were great, but then it started to turn into shit after a few chapters, and he was suddenly caught and experimented on

The Pretty Lady

Why did the writing go wrong? The male protagonist of the cool novel suddenly became violent. This is because his grades are not bad enough.

I originally wanted to read some cool American dramas, but... First: the author loves to write about the gold coin system in a self-righteous way! ! ! A meal is 1 gold coin, a flight is 10 gold coins, a room is 1 gold coin, clothes are 10 gold coins, and a glass of wine is 1 gold coin! Getting off the plane and taking a taxi also costs 1 gold coin! The financial system has collapsed and you still don't listen to anyone's advice! ! Second: I didn't think about the plot, repeatedly faked my identity, and then it was useless after two chapters! ! ! Laian? Antiquity? Jack? Women are all protagonists. They have just established their identities and are immediately revealed and destroyed! Third: The character design of the protagonist is also very repetitive! Let's be funny and lick the dog! If you haven't planned an outline, just write whatever comes to mind!

Um, this is the first time I saw a person who was just being chased and then turned around and started to act righteously. It was so touching.

Jack: Li's identity should not be exposed. It feels like the protagonist is rootless. Li's identity is an anchor. No matter how much trouble he causes outside, the protagonist should also have a safe corner in the book, otherwise it will make people look too impetuous.

The content is good, but the writing technique is too young, and the parts that should be featured are casually passed over. For example, when Winston and Charon first appeared, you didn't give them close-ups for such distinctive characters, which was too casual. There is no description of the upper-class clothes and aristocratic killer temperament in John Wick. These are all characteristics of that movie. I thought they were two insignificant little characters. The author pays too much attention to the plot and neglects the characterization of the characters. The characters in your work are like a running account, with a shallow impression. You can barely recall the other person's appearance based on the plot, but this is very tasteless. Look at how people describe Hisoka's first appearance: "Zhao Gao saw a tall man at the end of the corridor. He should be 1.9 Meters tall, with a thin build, and he was dressed like a clown performing in a circus. He has sky-high hair like a broomstick, strange patterns on his face, a square under his right eye, and a drop of water under his left eye. He was playing poker in his hands and had an evil smile on his face. He glanced at the martial arts masters coming and going with perverted eyes, his expression was like picking fruits at the vegetable market.

This introduction is a bit interesting. I have to save it first. I hope the content is also unconventional and interesting.

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