Gotham Has No Batman

After reading the first two volumes, I would like to share my personal evaluation. Although the reading time span of these two volumes was a bit long due to irregular reading, and I started to look back for foreshadowing (fish memory) after reading it over and over several times, this book still left a very good impression on me and brought many surprises~ What makes me think this book has great potential is: ① The author's understanding of the original comics and related derivatives can be compared to 90% of the authors who write similar superhero themes. The relatively low-magic worldview reduces a lot of fault tolerance, greatly increases the sense of realism and immersion, and to a certain extent enhances the seriousness of the plot setting and raises the threshold of rigor in plot arrangement. This makes it very satisfying for a researcher like me who likes to dig into details in some strange directions. ② The author's focus and subject matter are all new, and his ability has indeed supported a wet, gloomy Gotham where justice is suppressed - to be honest, it takes a lot of courage and time for DC fans to dare to write a non-OOC Batman, let alone a Gotham without Batman but feeling like there is a Bat conspiracy everywhere. I look forward to the follow-up development. ③At present, it seems that the author plans to dig deeper in Gotham and does not plan to expand the map too quickly. This means that the small and delicate love and hate of more low-level characters can be expanded and explored. There are too many fans on the market today who expand the map too quickly, causing the characters and rhythm to collapse. Although the continuous expansion of the map means more outstanding original characters and stories for reference, I still prefer innovation, and I personally prefer the way of discussing big issues from the small. ④ At present, if the protagonist becomes a bat, he will definitely not have the no-kill principle, but I guess the author may want to write something deeper. Judging from Batman's rebellion against traditional principles and the current situation of Gotham, I am looking forward to the author's subsequent interpretation and response to the dispute between consequential justice and procedural justice. ⑤The author has a full level of interactivity, and the main focus is to listen to advice-meaning that as long as you take a look at which article has not been liked by the author, then there is a high probability that it is not that the author did not see it, but that the article has been clipped. As a person who has posted more than 500 chapters, I have a strong say in this [Dense Fog] In short, the author is young, but he is easy to tease, so he will not lose money if he falls into the trap. It is conservatively estimated to be a good grass. Brothers, why don't you come and have a chat with the author 😂 I will write whatever comes to my mind, so let's stop here first. Although according to the past practice, we should make some speculations about the subsequent plot, but I am a little afraid that I will accidentally guess something and get scolded by others, so I just forget it hahahaha 🤓

1. The protagonist doesn't know much about the setting, but knows that there are many versions of Catwoman, one of which is Falcone's illegitimate child 2. He calls Catwoman by name when they meet and then makes up excuses to get close to her and follow the plot. She falls into heat too quickly and doesn't get much serious work done, so the heroine does it first 3. It's only Chapter 20 and she hasn't communicated much with Catwoman about a few things. Catwoman came back to save the protagonist inexplicably during a shared adversity, and there are also a lot of Catwoman's psychological descriptions of the protagonist. It's a greasy plot with a sense of mystery, depth, and mature charm 4. I don't understand why he is obviously a white man, but he starts eating Chinese food within a few chapters and says that this is good and that is good, and at the end he has to reveal that he knows Chinese? If I want to read this kind of mindless nonsense, why don't I read a book that takes China as the main plot? This kind of homesickness should be placed after the big plot point, right?

"Liangcao, the writing is very good, but not enough to read!" I read it from beginning to end in two days. I'm used to reading reviews on posts before reading new books, so I leave a special message. Basically, the reading experience from the beginning to the latest chapter is very smooth, the psychological changes of the characters are not abrupt, and the plot is not blocked by the original work. The protagonist described is born out of the original Batman but different from the bat, and has his own style of "v-bat"; there is an emotional line with Catwoman, which is a light line. Compared with some articles that do not grasp the emotional line hard and the effect is abrupt and inconsistent, this treatment is good; the rhythm of combat power is improved. It's okay, not too fast nor painfully slow; after reading it, I feel that the author's advantage is that small personal events lead to big events behind the scenes. It feels like reading a comic from the perspective of one character in front of you, and inserting other characters into the scene also brings out the causes and consequences. It can be seen from this that the idea is very clear. Potential food and grass, basically use it to handle the transition between the current world and the multiverse that follows, and hold the reins to ensure a good work. The first important thing when writing American comics is the original universe, and the second is the multiverse. The world will expand sooner or later. The current universe is very three-dimensional. For example, the title of the first comic book reads "Batman: The Beginning of the Crucible." Summary I look forward to the author bringing more plot designs in the future.

A very, very good novel. The early stage is not brilliant, but it is considered a normal transition to the beginning of the book. The subsequent logical framework, narrative structure, plot arrangement, etc. Are all very exciting. The article is also excellent in shaping the character image. Whether it is the foreign Qin Wei Will or the local hero, those dazzling qualities shine in the risk of facing crises again and again, or in the perseverance where no one knows, and the group portraits are lifelike. The arrangement of comic settings, the understanding of characters, and the deconstruction of "image symbols" are all reflected in the works. How rich, how unique, how beautiful. I am very happy to read this work, and I hope the author has a happy writing experience.

I actually forgot to write for this one... Scratching my head. Very, very good vbat, I really like the strong writing and narrative. It's really cool to watch it bit by bit from the beginning to the reboot now. He also wrote a book of Bateman with a different style. Among novels with bats as the protagonists, I would rate this one second! In the early stage, I might have been spoiled by the style of some Chinese online novels (I almost gave up at that time, but I continued to read it when there was a shortage of literature), but it was really great in the middle and late stages 👍 The heroine is Catwoman, which can be regarded as fulfilling my wish to fight Bat Cat. At the same time, you can also pick up a world auction, which is not Carl's, but belongs to V-bat's Superman. The portrayal of the little penguin was something I didn't expect, and I was very surprised (after all, except for those who write fan fiction with the little penguin as the protagonist, I have never seen a particularly good portrayal of the little penguin) At the same time, it also brought us a different kind of Thomas Wayne, who is really good. My biggest expectation is that the author will update more! Because it was very painful to catch up on updates, I started to read books, but after reading them for a while, I couldn't help but continue reading. (I don't have the patience to read the book next door that I have had for a year. It also proves that this book is really attractive!)

It's so good, meow, write more meow ❤️❤️❤️ I really feel that there is no need to rush to increase the combat power It's better to push the plot slowly I really think that pushing the plot too fast is a taboo Gotham's progressive villains will definitely be fun to watch Follow up the Zhenglian Dark Zhenglian JLA is not in a hurry, you have to write a lot of words for this book (how many millions do you have to write it, right?) The most important thing when writing a fanfic is to retain the charm of the original characters as much as possible, and at the same time let the protagonist shine I think there is no need to be too stuck on the details of character strength and character design, the author has the right to strengthen the characters he likes! ! (Probably) Find a balance between your own ideas and readers' suggestions, otherwise it will be easy for you to collapse, become anxious and lose your hair I suggest you open a book club, I want to join in ( ) You can try to read more and read some DC comics carefully. There are many descriptions and plot designs in it, and the design of various lines is very clever. You can also go shopping at Marvel next door, I just finished eating dd v2, the plot arrangement and design in the early and mid-term are also masterpieces Don't pay too much attention to reading and collecting, but I think your data should be very good in the future... If you have questions about certain places, you can actually check out the recent Douyin live broadcast. Many Qidian editors start live broadcasts at 8pm to answer questions, such as the thirteenth group of Xinghe, they will also invite some A master with nearly 100,000 orders came to Lianmai to clarify my doubts. After listening to it last night, I felt that I gained a lot I feel that the quality of the article is so high that it is not a problem to airborne in three rounds after finishing one round Promise me, just kill Sanjiang directly🤓 When it is put on the shelves, remember to open a new VIP volume, otherwise the book will be sent out for free, don't ask me why I know...

Now that the original Gotham Joker has appeared in the nautical world, I hope that the DC gang will also have their own Batman.

Update soon, brother, it's so painful to chase.

After a series of events Grandpa: I am very happy, you really protected our Gotham. Qin Wei: Our... Gotham? Grandpa: Yes, despite all kinds of problems, it is still our city. Qin Wei: No... It shouldn't be like this... It should be... Grandpa:? Qin Wei (laughing wildly): My Gotham! Grandpa smiled with relief () Gotham, equality drives everyone here crazy.

At present, the field of American comics is in decline. It is difficult to publish good articles. They are either mindless or NT articles. It has been a long time since I have read a book as good as this one by the author. However, don't just dig holes and fill in the characters in the plot. Don't write a completely fan-oriented work. You should also take into account the readers who are not so familiar with DC comics (for example, below [ fn=31]), sometimes you have to go to Baidu to check the characters to know who the author is writing about. The author can also introduce the characters in the author's statement without explicitly naming them, but comics fans can recognize them at once 🙂 However, if it is inconvenient, you don't have to do this. Let the readers guess for themselves, which is also a way to increase the discussion. From what the author said himself, writing novels is just a part-time hobby, and his main job is writing scripts. I don't know if the number of updates can be stable. Will it be updated twice a day after it is put on the shelves? How to arrange the update time? I mainly hope to ensure quality before pursuing quantity 🙂 Because I am short of money, I can't give rewards, but full ordering can still be guaranteed ☺️ Under the premise of ensuring quality, I will order one chapter when it is updated 🙂

On the podium, the great (bei) great (bi) Gotham leader Qin Wei was speaking. Qin Wei: Thank you, thank you to all the co-conspirators who support me. Without you, I would not be able to make a fortune in Gotham. Selena, Pamela, Thalia, Zatanna, Lady Shiva... Thank you so much. Oh, and Hallie, Jesus, she's doing a great job! Penguin:? ! Jason: md, Lao Deng, hurry up and make money! As for Dick? Come on, they are so incompetent that their love debts could clog Gotham City's sewers ()

Batman, I miss you every day when you are away How difficult it is to bear his will, I know better than you😭 Jason Todd, you really have a bit of him 😊 In this case, I don't have to hold back😠I'm offended👏 Today I'm going to teach future generations🤲 I can't withstand this crowbar, so I might as well do it again😕 I don't know why. Seeing you😩 reminds me of many things 😭😭😭 You robin, you really make me happy☺️ Those mediocre people in Gotham City😡No If I have more👉 it is better than I have less👈In the past when Bat was here🤧he was the only one worth playing You want to take over his cloak, this road... Is too painful😫 When Old Bat was taken to the dungeon by Bane, punched and kicked, his spine was broken, there was no pressure, now he has exchanged himself for you...😭 Let me try👆What is the difference between you and Old Bat! 🙌 You are not him after all😞☝ I am so happy to meet you this time😏 If you can't survive it, then you are not worthy of being the Dark Knight🙏 Since I'm helping you, I'll help you to the end (Pale Knight form👐 Laughing gas, kill me! 👿🌸🌬️ If you can't hold on, I'll kill you💀 It's too strong, fighting with you... Is still so laborious and damaging😩😩 Bat, you have to... Be full of fear! Death here is worthless. Only if you can survive can you be worthy of being... Gotham Knight! 👏😡 You look very much like you now! 😄👍 Batman wins... I sent all the villains to test you. After this moment😭 After that day, I realized today...😢 You can't keep him if you cut yourself off🏅😫🏅 Destroy him all over the house, but you can't stop him😖👋💫 I hope you won't let him down😑

Congratulations on the release. Come with a gift The ultraviolet rays on the plateau are still too strong for Gotham people, especially after the accident. The old butler does not have more opportunities to leave the room than Bruce, but even on the road, he always tries to let Bruce see more of the outside. Alfred pushed his weak child and walked out of the wooden house during the break in negotiations. In the flat area where sparse grass blades had just grown, he tried his best to make the wheelchair on his hand steadily roll over the high and low soil clods and stones. The subtle vibrations transmitted from the handle made Alfred so clearly feel Bruce's body like an empty shell. They stared in silence on the not-so-wide flat land. The assassin responsible for surveillance stood not far from them like a shadow that had been cast down on the spot. The cold wind from the snow-capped mountains blew along the ridges, causing continuous waves in the grasslands at lower altitudes. Further away, the local shepherds drove their sheep in complete ignorance, neither thinking nor caring about who was living alone on the mountain. The feeling of running under the wheel seemed different from that of stones. Bruce turned his head and looked hard. The thin oxygen around him made him gasp for two breaths before speaking, "Afu, what is that?" "Maybe it is the nest of some animal, Master Bruce." Afu squatted down, moved the wheel, pushed aside the shallow soil, picked up something like a dead branch, looked at it, wrapped it in a handkerchief, and handed it to To Bruce, "Please don't get too close." "Cordyceps? Why are you here?" Bruce was a little surprised. His eyes paused on the seedlings growing on the top of the stiff insect body. His thin and pale fingers slowly and tightly grasped the cordyceps, and asked in a low voice, "Why are they here..." Alfred instinctively felt that something had changed in the silence. He seemed to see a bonfire that didn't have much firewood burning silently and crazily in the cold wind. On Bruce's tall cheekbones due to his thinness, the steel-blue eyes gave off a cold and determined gaze. He couldn't help but step forward and hold the hands that were white and trembling from too much force, "Master Bruce..." What was he trying to stop? What could he stop? Maybe at this moment, the old man just wanted to stand in front of the door of destiny and block his child's glance from the darker abyss. "I'm fine, Ah Fu," Bruce's tone was still calm and collected. He glanced at the assassin who noticed their movements not far away and was hesitating whether to come over. He signaled that everything was fine, let go of his hand, took two breaths of oxygen, and naturally held the piece of cordyceps with his fingertips to signal to Ah Fu, "On the plateau. The air is too thin." "It's just Cordyceps." Then he fell silent again and looked thoughtfully at the snow in the distance. The exposed blue-yellow stone cliffs were exposed in the snow. Afu and he looked at the black spots flying in the sky, waiting in silence for the revelation of some god in the world. "Afu..." As if he couldn't bear the silence between the two, Bruce spoke in a chatting tone, "Cordyceps is a very magical creature. He was just a sick larvae of a bat moth at first. The fungus grew in his body and gradually became stiff and lost his ability. It was not until it turned into a corpse and the fungus rods grew out of the corpse that the two merged into one, and it was called Cordyceps, and it was regarded as a precious and precious medicinal material by the locals. It was only at this time that it showed its true value. " This is the moment, Alfred listened silently. Bruce gently turned the cordyceps cordyceps in his hand with his fingertips and looked at it with fascination, "Born to death..." He murmured. "Master Bruce, do you still remember observing the development of butterflies when you were a child?" Ah Fu tried to struggle one last time. "At first you were happy about the gorgeous wings growing out of the pupae, and then you saw the change process of their development from the book..." "Afu, I was too young at that time..." Bruce changed the subject. But the butler insisted, "You came to me crying, do you remember what you said?" "Afu——" "Do you remember?" Bruce opened his mouth, shook his head and said, "I said butterflies eat The caterpillar was lost. The adult disc developed in the nutrient solution formed by the caterpillar's body until it grew into a butterfly, broke open the caterpillar's body and crawled out." The housekeeper looked at Bruce's unwavering eyes and trembled slightly, "Yes, yes. You said, you said at the time, the caterpillar was eaten." Bruce seemed to be in a fugue, "Afu," he said with a hint of pleading, "Afu, I sometimes dream that I return to Gotham and become a bat..." He stopped describing the dream that he had told Alfred countless times, and then said with irreversible determination: "I have to consider whether that is the last chance in my life." The assassin guarding the door of the cabin signaled that they could enter. When they left, Bruce saw a little blood stain nearby. Two assassins were dealing with the body of the shepherd. He accidentally entered the assassin's territory because of the lost sheep.

I haven't started watching yet. Is the protagonist also playing house like Batman? He escaped from prison and was reincarnated. Normal people who traveled to the past would not have such distorted values. It's not that you have to kill people, but like Batman, it gives the audience the feeling that they are playing house with the villain, which doesn't feel right.

No one writes about decent clowns, protecting Gotham's smile!

Batman: I have money, power, and wisdom, what do you have? Me: Family

Thomas will become Batman after Bruce dies, then... If the Wayne family sacrifices to heaven, will Batman become... Alfred

Too weak, the protagonist is too weak. You say the protagonist is smart? Very talented, you said so yourself. It's not reflected in any way, it's just continued to be deduced from the comic content. Neither is combat effectiveness. It's too stressful, too stressful. It's almost like writing another Batman. But he had neither money nor power. You may want to start from scratch and take it one step at a time. But it's really depressing.

It reminds me that the investment has failed. When it is completed, click Finish!

I already know who owns the protagonist's body 🤭. I just want the protagonist to inherit and develop the hidden attributes of Grandpa Bat's harem king. His attributes can be suppressed by his broken character. The reader saw the stomachache and released this attribute

He is so famous in Gotham that he has his own nickname. The protagonist never leaves his hand and reads comics every day, so he is called Reader ()

You don't need to know who is under the mask, you just need to know that as long as he puts on the mask, he is Batman

Although the lack of killing in the original version is very slow for the novel's story, the character design in the comic is an absolute top-notch bonus. The protagonist is ruthless but has a different feeling from the original Batman who sticks to his words and deeds and behaves calmly. Maybe the protagonist should have some beliefs as a shaping factor in the future? Something that can drive the behavior of the future protagonist, whether it's a hero or a villain or something in between.

The book next door also writes about Batman, but apart from having a lot of shit, both the character creation and the writing techniques are very strong. I can feel that the author read a lot of comics in the early preparations, so that the language logic was affected when he first started writing, resulting in nonsense, but he obviously changed it in the later stage. The advantage of this book is the shaping of some scenes and the overall plot structure, which is definitely at the top of this track. However, the author probably has not put much effort into superhero fandom before, and has not even learned how to write online novels. As a result, although there is an outline, the details are filled in and I don't know what to write. The characters are very facially made up and homogeneous. The protagonist does not look like Batman at all, and most of the superhero character creations are superficial. As a reader, I feel that instead of writing big scenes with many characters, resulting in not much writing for each character, it is better to carefully study a few core character cores, write the characters clearly, and write a lot about the interaction and growth of the characters and the protagonist, so that the characters will not be rushed online, read a few lines and then be rushed offline. The author is a talented person, come on!

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! Congratulations to the author for the ending, and congratulations to Wei for getting a good ending! And thank you for the joy you have brought to us this year! ! ! Although the ending is a bit rushed, I still think this is the best Batman fanfic I have ever seen! ! ! {"NickName":"Dimibias2","UserId":383220398}

Analysis of the joke: Two primitive people fight and throw stones, two gods fight and throw planets

I experience regret → boredom → occasionally open → irritable, what is the book in the new vest, I want to read it

It's six o'clock in the morning, and it's rare for Gotham to clear up. Out the window is a gray-blue sky, and the morning light passes through the fog and shines into the kitchen of the apartment. Harvey Dent stood in front of the stove, his sleeves rolled up, and he was concentrating on flipping omelettes. A variety show discussing the looting of the casino was playing on the TV. "If you don't rest, Gotham will think you don't need to sleep." The voice from the sofa made Harvey turn his head and reveal a helpless and endearing smile. "I am a public servant and I have to serve the people." He put the fried eggs on the plate and handed them to the people on the sofa. "Didn't you say yesterday that you would stop eating late at night?" "I said 'after dinner', not including breakfast." The other party grinned, his eyes full of trust and weariness. Harvey sat down at the dining table, picked up a cup of black coffee, and looked out the window at the city. On the street, sanitation workers began to clear fallen leaves, and several taxis slid past the intersection. Gotham has not yet fully woken up, everything seems quiet and soft. "You know," he suddenly spoke with a gentle tone, "Sometimes I really hope that Gotham will stay at this moment forever. No courts, no disputes, no explosions, no blood." The other party nodded slightly, "It's a pity that everything came back as soon as the daylight came." "So we must keep these short-term tranquility as much as possible." Harvey did not speak anymore, just gently stroking the coffee cup in his hand. The sunlight slanted across his face, reflecting his chiseled, still gentle face. At this moment, he is not a two-faced man, not an anxious fighter, but a man who wants to make the city a better place. The church bell rang in the distance, seven o'clock. Harvey stood up, put on his suit jacket and arranged his tie meticulously. He smiled slightly at the mirror, as if he wanted to put that tenderness and hope into his collar, take it to the court, bring it to the court, and bring it into this city that is still sleeping but never surrenders. "I'm going out. What do you want for dinner?" "Just come back."

Congratulations on the completion, I'm officially ready to eat! (I will use another account to support it, this account is abandoned) This book by the author made me obsessed with DC novels. The subsequent book recommended by the author "What Bad Mouse Does Batman Have" made me even more obsessed with DC literature. Marvel fans are all pure cool writers, and most of what they write has no depth. I really like reading the author's writing that has some depth and can change regrets.

It's a bit too miserable, and it was depressing for me. It would have been miserable enough without the golden finger system, and the protagonist's combat power was also suppressed. I read the fanfic for the fun of it. In reality, I can't relax when I read a novel. The writing is okay, and the plot development is also good, but it is not my cup of tea. I'm leaving.