Hong Kong Comprehensive: the Rise of the Kowloon Walled City

The most annoying thing is to set up a special soldier or a mercenary and not be able to write it. It is obvious that the character is a special soldier or a mercenary, but the behavioral logic that fits this character cannot be written. It is said that he is a special soldier but he behaves like an ordinary person everywhere, which makes everything contradictory and contradictory. I sincerely advise the author, if you don't have this experience and can't write, don't try to copy it.

I like Hong Kong. But the protagonist's rise is too fast. How can he look like an ordinary person? The protagonist I like is an ordinary person, greedy for life and afraid of death, and then uses the plot to slowly grow up, collects male and female protagonists, plus money to clear the way, poor information, and uses power to overwhelm others, rather than a small gangster who charges into battle. Believe me, only people who have nothing will fight for their lives. How can a multi-billionaire fight for his life in a Hong Kong movie? Can you be stronger than a bullet?

Less than ten chapters were written when female escorts began to appear.

Straw sandals, white paper fan, and red stick are from the same generation. It is difficult for straw sandals to go further. You are also a talker.

Can you at least take a snack while writing? Who else would tie up the red stick after tying the straw sandals? The straw sandals themselves are already the outsole, so what else is there to wear? Do you think you are going to the club to seduce a lady? After one shot, do you want to take drugs and do another shot? Can the author at least have some respect for his own work?

Years later, before being shot, the protagonist said calmly: I was dreaming, right? Laughing to death

The best novels on Hong Kong Island are business war novels, while the worst novels on Hong Kong variety, Hong Kong entertainment, and gangsters are generally not read by anyone, with 99 copies out of 100 hitting the streets. Traveling across Hong Kong and not thinking about how to make a fortune as a tycoon and playing with women, he actually joins some association and becomes a big boss. Those big bosses are nothing in front of Hong Kong's consortiums and wealthy families. What other entertainment tycoons are even more ridiculous? A building is worth at least several billion. For example, Harbor View City, the charter boat king, collects more than 10 billion in rent a year. How many movies do you want to make? The time traveler clearly knows this but just doesn't do it, and instead goes for some entertainment😓

I just watched the movie Kowloon Walled City. Wang Jiu's hard Qigong is a bit buggy.

In fact, I think the most popular people writing about Hong Kong Island are entertainment stars and provincial flag soldiers. Personally, I feel like business war gangsters are always a bit uninteresting, because in the early days, no matter whether you were a gangster or a white man, ordinary people had to be a dog to the British if they wanted to reach the top.

Doesn't the author know what she was doing before she met Lian Haolong? Wouldn't it be better if you put a hat on Han Shen? A second-hand car is better than a bus after all, right? ! ! ! !

I used to like watching it when I saw it, but now I don't like to watch the protagonist who fights hard. I prefer to watch the protagonist like "Brother Silver Snake".

The more you look at the back, the more pitiful it becomes. He rose to power inexplicably, broke up with his allies inexplicably, it was too out of the ordinary, there were a lot of typos, and the character names were inconsistent. If it weren't for the book shortage, I really can't stand your book, it's too dissuasive 😤😤😤

I thought it was a movie fan who had magical powers like the Golden Bell Mask's Secret of Immortality, but it turned out not to be the case.

It's okay, I can read it when I'm bored. There is no sense of substitution except for the tattoo.

Gosh, there are so many typos. Don't you check before uploading? Looks so tired

You have also appeared in a new work by a famous artist. Look at the dialogues in your emotional scenes. They are so messy.

Did you write the book yourself? Even if your name is spelled wrong, you won't change it? Studio AI text?

I heard that if you are not an undercover agent, you have to be banned?

I can't bear the book shortage anymore. This name has one on the left and one on the right.

I am already having fun behind this. What follows seems to be the author's inner world, and the more he writes, the more exciting he gets. If he sees a woman and wants to fall in love with her, he will kill her. Most men are like that when they have money and power. You can have six or seven of them. Don't just have sex with women when you see them.

Update, what kind of plane are you planning?

What to do when the end of the world comes? "Red bean paste? Our Gundam in the sky, Ultraman on the ground, Godzilla in the sea, the apocalypse and so on, it's really Simimasai!" The little girl Fuso bowed deeply and showed her white European style sincerely. "Axiba, the end of the world has been declared a World Heritage by our Great Cold Underworld. With a history of 10,000 years, we have never seen any disasters. If you say this again, be careful to charge you royalties, Smecta!" The boy with the Great Cold Spirit cursed and shook his hair in disdain. "Hi, boy, we have experienced the rise of the Planet of the Apes, Resident Evil, alien invasion, 2012, global storm, meteorite impact, Thanos snapping his fingers, and the apocalypse has come countless times, which one are you referring to?" A pair of red-neck brothers touched the holsters on their waists and came closer. "Oh, my God, I want to max out all my credit cards, scold all my annoying classmates, colleagues, bosses, and bosses, confess my extramarital affair to my wife, leave the house, and confess my love to my gay friends without leaving any regrets!" A British and French gentleman arranged everything in a very pessimistic and romantic way. "The end of the world? You mean you can no longer drink Ganges water, defecate on the streets, put curry in your left hand, and grab rice with your right hand? Oh, my 333 million gods! It's really terrible." The devout Asan was uncomfortable with his face being distorted. At this moment The two bright moons in the sky suddenly shattered The subspace psychic energy roared across the world In a world of great conflict, should you kill at the slightest sign, or should you go forward with a knife? If the world ends, are you ready?

What the hell are you doing after Chapter 100? The prince and Han Bin are also at odds with the protagonist? There is no foreshadowing, making it hard to watch.