The Journey to Pokémon Mastery Begins as a Ranger

The Elf Alliance in the book is not utopian enough, and the protagonist is too weak-hearted, which makes the character of this protagonist not very likable. So I feel that although the plot is good and the setting is also very good, not many people will read it. Modern people have a feeling that what they catch is their own. For example, the ring bear and the ivory pig who lived for so long before Chapter 76 should be collected into the Poké Ball to form partners, and these two are basically orphans without the ties of race. Two people with more than 50 levels and two pets of their own can basically walk sideways in the outer and central areas of the forest. However, the protagonist only establishes a partnership. There is a feeling that I caught it but felt that I was not sure. This kind of writing is not very suitable for modern people. The second point is that peat is directly used in the evolution exchange box. The relationship between the circle bear and you is not completely solid in the eyes of our readers, leaving the protagonist with an impression that he is not stable. Let me put it another way, you established a relationship with a girl, and then you spent millions to buy an apartment near your girlfriend's house. You told your girlfriend that you can live in the apartment with me when you get married. You can definitely confirm the relationship. You can buy it after you get married. The evolution box is only after the relationship between pets is confirmed before redeeming it. There was also a move learner that was too easy to pass on, so I gave it to Aaron casually, even though it was set to be used for a long time... It gave me a feeling that I was rewarded for my hard work, but I passed it on casually... In addition, the protagonist just appeared in the scene of fighting the poachers. It was a classic wild fight but it was actually 1v1. The protagonist seemed really not very stable. At this time, there should be one for personal protection and the other for fighting. It seems normal for wild fights to directly attack the trainer. As an international thief, there are three elves, and they are very loyal 1v1. According to normal thinking, they are all sneak attack trainers. One attracts the trainer's attention, and the other is a personal protector and can escape at any time (flying)... I have only read Chapter 76. There is a strong sense of separation between the Elf Alliance described in the book that is not utopian enough and the protagonist who is not stable enough. Either the Elf Alliance is more utopian and it is okay to match the character of the protagonist, or the protagonist is more stable and ruthless and the writing is more realistic, but I feel in the book that it seems to be neither better nor worse. But the settings inside are still good.

It was well written at the beginning, but later on I don't know why it started to pretend to be a slap in the face. The typical person is looking for trouble for himself, and wants to make his life less satisfactory if his life is too smooth. If you want to apply for building a house, but your application reasons are not approved, then don't apply. You yourself want to use the alliance's money to build a new house to entertain guests, but you know that this reason is not appropriate. Even if I ask you to go to your boss to get approval from a higher level, you won't go. You just don't know how to deal with the world and don't know what to do. Okay, but two NPCs come and pretend to slap you in the face out of nowhere, and you have to show off to them. Then there was a whole plot where the middle-level leaders bullied Jicheng employees, but the other party showed off their relationship with senior leaders. It's so poisonous. How could you think of suddenly inserting a piece of content like this? I really don't understand.

What have you been writing about lately? A lot of words. You have to explain something by writing it back and forth three or four times because of, so, but. Moreover, we readers read your book to see farming and elves. I'm not here to see you talk about worldliness, which can be a seasoning, but look at what you've written recently. There are dozens of them in one chapter, because, so, but, I'm convinced. The entire writing style plummeted from the moment we left the forest. The previous chapters involve raising elves, planting fruit trees, and exploring the forest. It is well written and everyone will love to read it. Now I'm starting to get started without any limit, I can't stand it anymore. I finally found a good elf farming article, but the rest is just a mess. I have so many monthly tickets for nothing.

It's really boring to insist on applying starting routines to Pokémon. It's obvious that there are levels and v-number settings in the game, but you insist on writing qualifications, such as the level of the king's hall master. There are obviously effort points and bonds to make up for the qualifications, but you insist on getting some qualification-improving potions. It's really speechless. Don't say you can't understand. It's not like my nephew who didn't even go to the first grade of elementary school and can't read a calendar. He won't die if he writes a few more lines. Don't say anything. Since Pokémon are so equal, doesn't everyone can be a champion? To be honest, have you ever taken care of children? Have you ever raised at least 6 children? Have you ever tried to study knowledge for these 6 children? Have you ever tried to train and play with six children? Have you ever tried to patiently teach these 6 children in accordance with their aptitude and how to study correctly? Have you tried to establish correct values ​​​​for these 6 children? Have you ever tried to connect with these 6 children and trust each other? Not to mention 6 children, as long as you can teach one, you have hope in Qingbei, and the so-called champion is to send 6 children to Qingbei.

Originally, the forest guard was watching well, but suddenly a few villains came to compete for the position. I don't understand the purpose of these games, and I no longer have the desire to read any more. It would be even harder to stand up to the Dragon King later with his cocky lips and so on.

The Forest Garden can also participate in the league tournament. I remember when I was watching TV, there was a Forest Garden who played Siduolan in the Alliance Tournament and won the championship.

After more than 200 chapters, I am still not happy at all, and there is no explosive point. The protagonist is really a submissive bun, too holy. As far as the protagonist has brought two ancient Pokémon to the alliance, I have not seen any benefits for the protagonist. He is also flattering to the king of the alliance. The more I read, the more speechless I am.

The plot is very detailed and even a bit cumbersome. With the current progress, the protagonist's strength needs to be at least a thousand chapters to reach the championship. A mission has more than ten chapters or even dozens of chapters, which makes people want to skip the middle plot and go straight to the end. Moreover, the protagonist is in his twenties compared to other time travellers. It can be said that it is a bit exciting. If it were not for the elf of the seniors in the beginning , I don't know how to gain a foothold. From the whole story, the protagonist doesn't see much despite his own efforts. It all depends on plug-ins and the help he finds. In the elf world, he can travel alone at the age of ten. I didn't understand that he had been staying in an orphanage for more than 20 years. The alliance should provide subsidies for orphans. Look at the desire to conquer wild elves. Don't you even have hope? The early levels are raised very quickly, and more than 200 chapters have been written. When it comes to the King of Heaven, I will ask you to tell me two or three years. With the current progress, do you still want to participate in those Pokémon movie plots? If you want to write heartwarming plots, write less about those tasks. Those tasks are more rewarding for small things. I personally think it is useless, and it's useless. He's not as good as you, his appearance is so ugly, the protagonist's cock is too small, he is already in his twenties, and the power of the cock is so small. Since he is cheating, you open the cock bigger, and it will not make the game any better. It is really a waste snack. You might as well just become a native and have a good cock. You, a time traveler, are really a bit rubbish. To be honest, after reading so many chapters, I didn't understand the main plot clearly. At most, the emotional line only has a little background. The writing is not bad. I feel that the protagonist has a natural disadvantage when facing A Liu and the others. Author, what do you want to describe? Do you want to use their cattle to set off the protagonist? You are writing about time-travelers, not indigenous people. If not, Long Aotian should at least look like the protagonist.

I don't understand why the elf novel has to arrange an urban novel plot to compete for jobs in 2333. The style of painting is very inconsistent. Of course, it is possible to say whether this is possible, but it is very strange and different from the overall tone of elven literature. It would have been fine if it had been a completely realistic urban novel with elf skin from the beginning. But this has been hundreds of chapters, so it would be awkward to suddenly insert such a plot. Emmm I hope this is the place

Originally the writing was pretty good, but it got worse and worse later on. The plot was okay, but the character of the protagonist was just like the one he had when he was 10 years old. Traveling to an orphanage in his 20s. I don't know what to say Well, what about the division of strength? I have to combine the game settings with the plot and animation plot. When I watch it, I always feel that there is a pitfall. Some of the words are wrong. The plot he wrote started after more than 200 chapters. Feeling like vomiting. I don't want to read it.

Pokémon Sirona

It is very important to read new books, so please don't be stingy. The so-called follow-up reading refers to the number of people who watched the latest chapter within 24 hours after it was released. That is, after seeing the update, you can just turn to the last page. Please🙏🙏🙏!

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The author's previous writing in this book is quite good, but when I saw the chapter about the reputation system, I really couldn't help but want to vomit, so please bear with me. There are two types of system flow: one is that the author does not have enough writing power to reasonably promote the development of the plot, and can only rely on the system to forcefully promote the plot, which is an obvious deus ex machina; the other is that the system is used as an auxiliary to allow readers to intuitively feel the changes, and also allows the protagonist to understand himself and the surrounding situation in some obscure and difficult to distinguish environments. The front of this book is actually both. The former's deus ex machina is mainly reflected in rewards and draws (various potential enhancement potions, gene complement potions). The latter's plot assistance is reflected in the release of tasks. For example, the plot of the Si'e Acupuncture Dragon asking for help is written in a logical way. The Si'e Acupuncture's mother first asked for help through the cursor in her dream. The protagonist received the help but failed to understand it. The system reminded the protagonist through tasks, which made the arrangement much more reasonable. Even the rescue of Pokémon and the rescue of lost people can have a reasonable explanation, that is, the rescued person left some clues, the protagonist is not experienced enough and did not notice it, or noticed it and failed to understand it in time. The system makes a prompt through the task, which is reasonable. Here I just want to complain about the reputation system I just saw. The smell of deus ex machina is too strong. In the original article, once the reputation system is turned on, being a forest ranger will directly increase the bonus by 20%. Pokémon that were originally hostile will put down some of their hostility. Upgrading to the chief ranger will increase the bonus by 30%... This way of writing is not inconsistent if you follow the numerical style of the game, but you obviously prefer a realistic writing style, but you write it like this, which is full of violation. If you asked me to conceive of this reputation system, I would write it like this. During the few months since the protagonist served as a forest ranger, he rescued a large number of Pokémon in the forest and protected the environment. These tasks made him gradually famous among wild Pokémon, and his characteristics gradually spread. Even wild Pokémon who have never seen him have heard of him, so they will not be too wary of him. The protagonist does not understand this situation yet, so he is a little worried about the work he will do when entering the forest. The reputation system clearly reflects the things about him that cannot be clearly quantified through numerical values, so that the protagonist and readers can clearly and intuitively feel it. This is a lot more reasonable and will not seem too inconsistent. I am just giving a simple example, and I hope that the author's writing will become more and more beautiful.

Sirona

Can you drink less? It feels weird, and not everyone likes drinking. A little watery

The recent plot of pretending to slap people in the face is too long and annoying. I'll watch it again when it's over.

Mongoose Kill

No, it looks okay, but no one is talking about this book review section By the way, the latest chapters, Six's Flying Up, this, it's as reckless as changing studios, a squid king who pulled a Chirulian to level 50 by experiment alone, and has dual characteristics, and is obviously malicious to other life forms. Just based on the news of leaving, I'm not sure if there is a back-up, when will he come back or something, so he dares to go to its lair alone. The protagonist is not the experimental material.

Is there a heroine or is she going to live her life by herself in the end?

It's slightly poisonous, so it's considered ordinary food.

The first part is okay, but the second part is just like a piece of cake The protagonist has always been obedient, not daring to take the initiative in anything, and is forced to synchronize with the plot. The reasons are all weird, and the things he does are inconsistent. Especially in one part, I got a mythical beast that was damaged by a chain, and in order to restore the plot, I sent it back to someone else, just to recreate the plot. It was so awesome that I directly posted a comment and scolded me, and they just gave me a lot of shit.

Do you still remember the protagonist's combat power? If he were to become a king, what kind of king would he be?🙂

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