The Arrival of the Elves: Entering the World with a Dark Phantom

When I first saw the selection of the initial sprite, I was very unhappy! ! ! My comments always get deleted because I can't post them! ! ! ! It was there one second, and gone the next! ! ! ! I don't know the reason but I hope it's okay with the collaborator Send it again! ! ! To be honest, Roentgen Cat's strength is really not high. Although it is a pure electric elf, its resistance is really good, but its racial value is physical attack, and the attack surface of its skills is too small. Even with the learning machine, there are only a few special attack skills of this type, and the level requirements of the skills are still high. . . . Moreover, the speed is only 70 and the physical strength is only 80. The initiative and blood volume are not very good, so it is really not suitable for newcomers. . . If you don't understand skills, just check them out (ﾟДﾟ)ﾉ! ! ! ! Don't make it up yourself. . . . There has never been a skill like [Yawn] among the three forms of Roentgen cats in the pond, okay! ! ! ! ! ! There are no skills that are limited to learning before evolving! ! ! ! Anyway, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I slipped away. . . .

I have been following this book until it was serialized. Let me talk about the advantages first. It is a semi-invincible and refreshing novel, and the setting is relatively novel. It can be seen that the author is also quite thoughtful. I think other book friends have complained about the shortcomings a lot, so I won't go into details. The thing that I can't accept the most is that the Pokémon described by the author are too smart and too human, which makes me feel a bit uncomfortable due to the uncanny valley effect. Especially Electric Dragon and Gengar are completely the same person, which makes me feel that trainers in this world are useless. Because I think Pokémon and trainers complement each other. Trainers need the power of Pokémon, and Pokémon need the wisdom of trainers. So if Pokémon are so smart, why do they need trainers?

The author is so serious about writing books, come on

Many people say that the part of the plot where the protagonist self-destructs is very poisonous, but they have not said where the real poisonous point lies. My personal point of view is that when the author lets the mother appear for the first time, the protagonist directly reveals his secret to the mother. There is no preparation for the role of the mother before this. From the reader's perspective, the emotions are not in place. The author's own emotions may be in place for the mother's role, but the readers cannot understand it, so there will be a feeling of confessing one's secrets to a stranger, and this is where the poisonous point arises. Although the plot is logical, the emotional logic is also part of the plot logic. The author should not be like doing a math problem. Once he knows the answer, he only writes the answer instead of the process. In that case, he can only get 2 points out of 10. It is recommended that the author who writes a book for the first time should revise his manuscript and refine the text of the article. Water word count is not a colloquial way of writing an article. Authors who have the ability to use word count to retain readers have a very strong writing skills. The author's current writing style is indeed visibly immature. Don't develop the habit of colloquial writing. Try to optimize the description of the situation. The dialogue between the characters should be concise and the characters' personalities should be fully reflected. The ineffective words should be refined as much as possible. Writing on an online platform is a job that can easily make people impetuous. I hope the author can seriously improve himself first. It is very difficult to make money and improve at the same time. If you are not talented enough, it is easy to write your own book.

I came from the red halberd comment section and took a look at it first. There are not many to watch now, especially this one that is a little more peaceful, and even less. I don't like to fight and kill. It is originally a cute and warm Pokémon game, but it has to be given a dark style, and it is called reality. Which real-life game and animation is aimed at people under 20 years old? However, the author's update makes it difficult to relax. Let's take care of ourselves first, hoping not to die 🌹

In the previous chapter, the protagonist was not in a hurry to fall in love, and in the next chapter, the relationship between boyfriend and girlfriend was established... In order to make the protagonist independent, a woman was forced into the story. I didn't see any interaction or ambiguity between them, so I thought it was strange. In fact, it was okay without a female protagonist.

The protagonist is too lazy, the level of the elf is not as high as Xiao Yuan, and there are magical candies that he doesn't use, so they are all given to others, which makes him very poisonous.

It's too long-winded. It should be more detailed. It's a regular routine to get golden fingers through time travel, so I'll write two chapters. What a lot of worldviews explain bala bala, the protagonist's mentality changes, and what bala bala did in the past life. Why do you get a golden finger to force you to pull Balabala? Why is it so troublesome to do something that can be done in just a few words? It has been three months since I came to this world, and I have gradually become proficient in using the mysterious APP that was on my phone when I woke up from time travel. With this power, he is training the first elf he has acquired so far, Galar Meowth. My writing style is not as good as that of an elementary school student. If you write it this way, why do you need so many words? A bit dissuaded

In the later stage, even the battle was sketched out. It really didn't work. Moreover, the hook was so big and the protagonist was still so weak. His parents did not allow the protagonist to travel. It neither travels nor fights. So this elf novel is really lonely.

I beg for your support for the new book. Dear readers, some of you who have money will support me financially, and some of you will support me personally. Don't miss it if you pass by.

Don't watch it anymore. Goodbye. It was fine in the early stage. But later on, after I exposed my golden finger, I really used my own resources to help others upgrade. Don't you understand that your own strength is the last word? Give it up.

Telling my mother about the golden finger is poisonous to me.

There is a question, why do some people always think that the Gosan family is very precious? You know, no matter in the games and animations, the Gosan family is cultivated by the alliance in large quantities, and they are also the initial Pokémon that exist in the wild in large numbers. Neither precious nor rare. Their strength is usually very suitable for newcomers. In anime and games, the regions are different, and the Pokémon released for newcomers are different, but generally speaking, they are more suitable for newcomers and do not need to be rare or not.

The protagonist's personality is like a baby

Damn it, author, I found out that I saw this book you wrote in my dream 😥 Did I travel through time...

The protagonist has no personality, it feels like he just goes with the flow and has no plan. I can bear this. But when I saw Xiao Yuan and his sister, I didn't understand. Is it the control group? The Golden Finger for Elves Training is also long-winded and troublesome, and there is no focus. The elf competition that appeared in Liao Liao was not exciting at all. It was uncomfortable to watch.

For this kind of protagonist, two elves will not know the words "effort and strength" until they die. He is innocent and carefree, and his life is overwhelming the protagonist's combat power.

Personal opinion (not just talking about it): The Pokémon world is a world with extremely rich resources, advanced technology, and the power of gods. Pokémon can be seen everywhere, and they are the world's number one productive force. Thinking about the contrast between our world in ancient times when resources were scarce and technological productivity was limited, and modern times, we should also understand that the Pokémon world is a harmonious and friendly environment, and a world where people share common interests. Because of the power of Pokémon, social classes are blurred, and the powers such as the King of Heaven and other gyms that protect the people in the area are very close to ordinary people. The upward path is open, and everyone has the ability to pursue their ideals. It is an ideal and beautiful social model. How miserable are the protagonists and how miserable are ordinary people? An Eevee is so precious. The author is either stupid or bad. Most ordinary people don't need to work and they are still miserable. You can feed everyone by exploiting the Pokémon society. Why exploit you, an ordinary person who has no power at all? When it's time to play, you should eat and drink. The society does not lack the labor force of ordinary people. On the contrary, ordinary people can also rely on Pokémon to live a more comfortable material life and substantial spiritual satisfaction. The whole slogan "We want reality" is all nonsense. You know, people don't 😰😰😰

There are Zoroark and Lucario, how can Zeraora be missing 😁😁😁

I really can't understand "Pitch Black Phantom" without Zoroa... Judging from the title of the book, it is directed at the little fox.

That's awesome, you post something and then you can't convince others, and you're directly banned for 30 years. You can break your defense so easily, why do you still write a book? And I didn't scold you for just making comments about the content in the book. I'm not afraid to say it, but why did you delete my post? And you directly banned me from speaking out for 30 years? Really funny

After reading the beginning, I remembered a novel I had read before, which was also about urban Pokémon. The protagonist had a HeartGold and SoulSilver game console. Unlike the normal Pokémon that only used one Pokémon, the protagonist directly trained 2 or 3 dragons. I can't remember the name now. Does anyone know the name? Can you reply to me?

After reading Chapter 80, it was the first time I met the protagonist who has no merit at all...

Brothers, please read this elf novel in the early years. The protagonist Ye Yibu was killed by another time traveler during the competition. The female protagonist seemed to be Mei Yi who got sick and died, and then the male protagonist turned black. Later, when Hezhong was traveling, he saw a person who looked very similar to Mei Yi traveling together... And then forgot On a whim, I want to recall it.

Love it, love it, no matter whether it looks good or not, I just love this plug-in, it is my favorite Pokemon game.

After reading a little bit, I feel a little uncomfortable. Why is the protagonist written like a giant baby??? Also, the writing of family relationships is really not good. I feel constipated after reading it😖😖😖Why don't I write about body time travel or orphan start like others?

It shouldn't be said, this result. You must know that some are not as good as this, and some of the eunuchs in the middle have better results than this one. Didn't get the publicity, or did it go to the wrong partition? Or was it interrupted in the middle? Otherwise, a 1.5 Million-word elf novel wouldn't be so bleak. After writing it, it's still level one 😅

Is there a female protagonist? How is the female character written? (Is it normal from a girl's perspective 😂) I've seen too many toxic female characters before and I'm really scared orz

Come on, look forward to the author's new book 😁

Brothers, I once read a book about the original elf named Cathy. Cathy couldn't learn teleportation, but could only use telekinesis. He seemed to be suffering from a persistent illness. I went to read it at Dr. Oak's. I don't remember which book it was. Kick me if you know 😇