I Create Elves in a World Where Spiritual Energy Is Revived

In fact, the book is overall good, but I am personally dissatisfied with a few points. 1. The subject is wrong. To be honest, most of the people who clicked in are Pokémon lovers and want to read Pokémon fan fiction. As the title of the book suggests, the main subject should be Pokémon. We don't mind if he has some kind of superpower or spiritual energy recovery. But this book always focuses on the protagonist himself, and it seems to occupy 70% of the space, 20% Pokémon, and 10% psychics! ! The first 100 chapters are exciting after all, because most of them are about creating elves, accepting elves, and promoting elves. They mostly describe the changes brought about by elves and the bond between elves and humans. But what about behind? ? Although the story line is still coherent, it is more related to the protagonist: for example, the protagonist goes to a certain company to do business, the protagonist goes to visit a certain seminar, and the protagonist goes to show wherever. Really, not interested! ! ! We all want to see the protagonist's self-development. There is a saying: Tao Li will make his own mistakes without saying anything! Write more about the impact of Pokémon on the people around you and the natural environment, the convenience that Pokémon provides to technology, and the new changes in the revival of Pokémon combined with spiritual energy. In short, the main theme is Pokémon, not the male protagonist. Wouldn't it be nice for the male protagonist to be a tool? 2. The progress is wrong I have an inexplicable feeling that the author has not planned the order of creation! ! I don't have a detailed count of how many illustrations the male protagonist has made so far, but it should probably be around 100. 100 elves. The ninth generation of Pokémon has just exceeded 1,000+! That is to say, 10% of the progress has been made. What about the mythical beasts summoned by the male protagonist: Marshado + Salud + Yandi + Frozen Bird + Meloetta! ! I just want to say, what combination are these? ? No rules, no intensity, no system at all! ! My personal suggestion is: go by region or version. For example, if the progress is not increased by 5%, the phantom beasts of the area are summoned; for every 10% improvement of the progress, the first-level god + subordinate second-level god of a certain area are summoned. For example 15%: Three Holy Birds. 20%: Mewtwo + Mew. (Complete in Kanto region) 25%: Three Holy Beasts. 30%: Lugia, Ho-oh, Celebi (completed in Johto area) 35%: Three Divine Pillars. 40%: Rayquaza, Kyogre, Groudon (Hoenn Region) 45%: Latias, Latios. 50%: Jirachi, Deoxys (Complete in Hoenn region) After that, Sinnoh region, Unova, Kalos, Corolla. . With some planning, only the bonded ones will be released at a time, and then let them restrain each other, and divide the world into Alliance Area 1 (Kanto), Alliance Area 2 (Johto), Alliance Area 3 (Hoenn), Alliance Area 4 (Shennoh)... You currently have no guarantee of the strength of the east one and the west one, and it makes people look very messy. 3. The protagonist is inexplicably weak Afraid of his big brother at home, fear of the commander-in-chief, the alliance, and other potential threats from the Beast God Cult. Forget it at home, I really don't understand why your elder brother will question you when you create an elf, and then you will be weak. Maybe I didn't look carefully, is he a brother-controller? ? This family issue is nothing to worry about. The important thing is: Being questioned by experts and professors under the name of a certain group about the source code of Pokémon, and then they are so weak that they always want to quibble about the method? ? Is this the result of not planning the order in which the bosses will appear and having no confidence! ! But that's enough for Mashado. He has beaten the commander-in-chief. Do you ask those experts if they dare to question the commander-in-chief? ? No comment, top secret information. Why should you explain the origin of the code to others! ! Asking is a company secret and a personal secret. If you follow my second point, if there is a first-level divine formation base camp, why bother dealing with an alliance? ! Wouldn't it be great to summon the boss as soon as possible, and concentrate on creating elves with peace of mind and completing the illustrations! 4. Not keeping pace with the times Am I wrong? ? Why do you feel that the main character currently being promoted is: ordinary people with no or low abilities + strong elves. . Or the illusion of strong men + ordinary elves. . . Normally speaking, shouldn't level 4.5.6 Superpowers be paired with level 4.5.6 Elves to join forces? ? The same goes for the Pokémon world: Boss Sakaki (Power of Tokiwa) + Super-Developed Giant Stitch. Natsu (superpower girl) + superpower Pokémon. Adu (the power to control the dragon) + dragon (flying system?). As long as the strong match the strong, the spiritual energy is revived, there are so many superpowers, and they will definitely be stronger if they match Pokémon that match their superpowers. . But in the book, except for the city defense team, most of the contestants in the competitions rely purely on Pokémon? ? Didn't adapt to local conditions and team up with superpowers and Pokémon? ? If nothing remains the same, what's the use of adding spiritual energy recovery! ? ? The above are my true thoughts! !

Oh my god, after reading it, there are more than 430 chapters. The plot unfolds at a ridiculously slow pace, and there is almost no climax. To put it bluntly. No one cares about the protagonist's performance in the business war and his interactions with several women. Everyone just came to see Pokémon. The book I was chasing before was about the eunuch who created Pokémon, so I kept pursuing it. But no matter how warm-hearted the plot is, I won't be able to keep going.

It can be seen that the author wants to write well and carefully, but from the reader's point of view, there are too many shopping malls in the family, and the fun is only scratching the surface. The business transactions are just a stage for the Pokémon to appear, and the overly cumbersome descriptions take away the spotlight. To be cliché, what everyone wants to watch is "Shocking! Global Sensation! This New Creature Actually..." Rather than "The Novel Pet of the Genius Brother Next Door"

In Chapter 258, when he went to the Meihe Group for cooperation, he had no idea that the protagonist was afraid of someone else. He was frightened when someone tried to trick him just a few words, and he also thought it was strange that someone saw through him. I don't want to think about how outrageous it is to "create" an elf with my academic qualifications. It's not like I don't have any trump cards. The more I look at it, the more frustrated I become.

I think you know what to do

It was so boring that I couldn't watch it at all. I didn't realize that this was an elf novel at all. The male protagonist was also a coward. He didn't dare to do this or that.

I was very interested in this book when I first searched for it. I finished reading it in two days. The first hundred or so chapters were pretty good, but recently they have become a bit boring. There are several aspects that I would like to discuss with the author. 1. The character of the protagonist After more than two hundred chapters, the character of the protagonist has not changed much. Now he is still cautious, hesitant, obedient, and timid. How can the reader take it into his own hands? Just imagine, I have created dozens of elves, a bunch of fourth-level elves, one seventh-level, one eighth-level, and a brother who must be seventh-level. Can I feel a little more confident? There are only two or three seventh-level and one eighth-level elves in these big companies and big cities. If they all have nine levels, their combat power will have collapsed. 2. The issue of power development After writing for so long, the term "elf" is not popular in Binhai City. I don't know the population of Binhai City. Is the popularity of elves 1%? Why must a first-level god come to develop in a big way? Then other companies and cities are in trouble. Let alone first-level gods, they don't even have ninth-level gods. This kind of writing is very cautious, very reasonable, and very logical, but readers want to read it more comfortably. I have basically not seen the last hundred pictures. I have read a similar book before, called "The Elf I Created is Too Excellent". Don't worry about the problems such as his collapse in the later stage, and just look at the rhythm of the plot in the early stage and the refreshing setting. I think the author can learn from it. 3. Problems with plot content It can be seen that the author has a lot of heart. There are everything from spiritual recovery, human-animal war, beast god religion, and elves. But the key point is that if you look at most best-selling novels, there are very few that can stand out from the hodgepodge. Others don't know, but I came here to create elves in the city. It's okay for other elements to be used as auxiliary embellishments. If the author wants to expand and write in detail, then it will be difficult for me to persist in pursuing it. When I read the last 100 chapters, I just wanted to quickly get a guarantee for the protagonist. It would be no problem at level nine. This world is at the top. Who can forcefully destroy you with the protection of level nine? Then hurry up to create and promote the elf, and put it on all kinds of news, interviews, and live broadcasts. Don't just shock a few people every time. There are billions of people in the world, so why not have a big scene? Nowadays, people don't realize the uniqueness of elves. How long does it take for the author to solve this problem? 4. Rhythm problem It can be seen that the author is still very serious and rigorous, and wants to write a good book, but there is too much explanation, psychological description, and self-analysis in the book. For example, the principle of the Poke Ball is the characteristic of the Pokemon becoming smaller. I have seen this explanation not only ten but seven or eight times. There are too many similar explanations. What I want to read is the novel, not the instruction manual 🤭. This leads to the fact that sometimes a plot is followed by three or four paragraphs of explanation, and the rhythm is lost. There is no need for the protagonist to explain a lot to everyone he meets. The author may want to improve the rationality of the work, but readers will criticize it when they see it, because it makes no sense at all. Generally speaking, the novel is well written. I hope the author can support me by giving a reward. I wrote it on my mobile phone and it may be a bit messy. I'll just give it a try 😊

There is a painful point in reviving spiritual energy It is that we have forgotten that human beings are the highest level of life in nature. What the hell, the life levels of all animals and plants are far lower than humans.

I feel like the type of modern creative elves is not very suitable. It is really developing too fast. If you create them one after another, everyone will understand that there is definitely something wrong with you.

You readers must pay attention to the pictures borrowed from other big guys! Because I didn't understand the old book before, I didn't sign the contract until it had 120,000 words, and there was only one recommendation! Almost died tragically. I also ask all readers for your support!

The creativity is good, but the writing is average. The elves are released too quickly, there is no sense of generation, and there are no detailed descriptions. There are too many business wars and the like, and you can't experience the characteristics of each elves. The protagonist's personality is too weird. I gave up after reading Chapter 170.

Just one or two plots of pretending to be researching and then throwing out a few waste elves are enough. Now that everyone's spirit has revived, it's time for some combat adventure plots. But anyway, the author is done with it and just runs away.

The focus of the plot is on Pokémon. The Beast God Cult and the Beyonders are too dramatic, and the plot of resurrecting the deputy commander is too confusing. The focus of the writing is on humans fighting alien beasts or creating Pokémon!

I really like the world view and setting. . The direction of the plot gave me myocardial infarction

I want to say that I have read many articles popularizing elves, and they all rely on elves to make money. It has a popular brand, but it has been controlling the elf resources just to sell them at a high price. To popularize it, can't we first expand the number of elves? Each person has one elf, and they can form an elf alliance, elf hospital, elf breeding house, elf store, and sell elf balls, energy cubes, props, etc. In many novels, there are still the same dozens of elves seen in more than 200 pictures. Is this really universal?

The pace of the plot is very slow. I don't know what the point is of writing about those women all the time. And Hackron, as the first elf, has not evolved yet. The Ivy Snake is even more outrageous. As a protagonist who hatches its eggs, as a "father", what's the point of always writing about being jealous of Harker Dragon?

The scene of pretentiousness at the beginning. Many novels have been pretentious. I want to quit after reading it. To be honest, you can't hide the biological knowledge of the protagonist. Because I read it, the protagonist is trying to find ways to gain reputation. However, the most important thing to hide is to show off in front of others and pretend to be pretentious. It cannot be changed. The impression of the protagonist is that he is a scumbag. As long as he communicates with others, there must be many flaws.

The front looks like running water. . . No wonder there are so few people

With the protagonist's current situation, if someone else comes to communicate or seek guidance, what should the protagonist say if he can't answer? Wouldn't it be exposed? I think the protagonist should slow down and work hard to study the technology first. At the same time, let time ferment and let the masses gradually become familiar with the existence of elves. Moreover, if you take it out too quickly and too many elves come out, it is obviously abnormal. Others are not fools. If you look at your performance in school, you will obviously find abnormalities. Take it slow. No matter how you look at it, it will be beneficial. Don't just focus on Qiu Shuang. Only by thinking about logic can you go further. So far, the writing is okay, the plot, writing, and characters in the book are okay, but the characters are a bit flimsy, so you need to pay attention, come on!

I feel that the author can write more about other trainers and add some behind-the-scenes factors. This is a big company, and he still comes down to do things by himself every day. It is too slow. He can quickly advance the timeline to describe the development of elves in this world, and even list what elves have come out from time to time. It takes too long to forget. The other seven monthly passes are not too much to add

The first two to three hundred chapters were quite good, but I stayed up all night reading them, and they became more and more boring as we went to the end. There was nothing exciting about it, nothing exciting at all! This whole boring narration and long story, he even knew it was going too far, and he kept writing it so many times that it would be a whole chapter. Geneva! Get your money back! 😫😫

Magic Slate: Before the birth of the universe, it was the only one breathing alone. Jade Insect Slate: The birthplace of the universe is also its origin. Slates of the Earth: When the universe was born, its fragments turned into stone slabs. Azure Slate: The Pokémon born is given some of the power of the slate. Water Drop Slate: Those who master the slate can transform into various forms to exercise power. Fireball Slate: The power given to the slate is the power of the giant it defeated. Poison Slate: On the other side of the world, time and space have different laws. Thunder Slate: A violent clone that can rain down angry thunder. Blue Sky Slate: Fragments of its power were sealed into jade and buried underground. Icicle Slate: Time and space, two clones since their birth. Rock Slate: The flute sound played by those who gather the power of the stone slab is the music they listen to. Dragon Tablet: Three Pokémon are born from it, connecting time and space together. Steel Slate: What fills the back of the world is enough to make living beings change their appearance. Evil Face Slate: Two are matter, and the third is soul. Prayers are born from this, and the world is formed from this. Clearance Slate: The power of three Pokémon temporarily stops time and space. Fist Slate: When the back side of the world falls into chaos, cracks in time and space will appear. The Goblin Slate: It's everywhere. It is also nowhere to be found. The Monster Slate: Its violent clone was given to the other side of the world. Legendary Tablet: It watches Pokémon and people in all universes.

I was reading a post a few days ago and saw that the author said that he was inspired by a novel called "The Elves I Created Are Too Excellent". After reading it, I thought it was quite interesting. The rhythm and atmosphere of the plot were quite good, but some of the middle-of-the-road moments felt awkward but actually quite interesting. The same genetic creature, but the Pokémon came out a bit slowly. According to the original pace, the first generation would probably have a million words when it was released. However, the plot was set in the world invasion of the Pokémon Journey Generation, so it was a pity that it was unfinished because there was no time to elaborate on the plot. Generally speaking, this book is good. It is good that the author has his own ideas. There is nothing to say about the fact that many suggestions from readers are not accepted. It is just that many places are watery and not what readers want to see. However, the author feels that it must be written for the sake of logic. I also think there is nothing wrong with it. I just think it's okay to slow down, but you have to pile up the cool points and make a big one to make readers feel that it's worth the wait. This is what everyone has concluded over the years since online novels have been published. It's not that you shouldn't let you start slow, the rhythm is very important. You have been tepid all the time and occasionally only hit some small cool points to make readers feel boring to follow. The school beauty's personal expert is also very good, but why everyone can follow it is because he has a good grasp of the rhythm except for the lsp plot. Nowadays, there are many plots that everyone is eager to watch. Alas, in general, the author is a rat's tail juice!

The pace is so slow. I always feel like there is something wrong with it. The protagonist has too much inner drama.

It ended too hastily. I still prefer Pitch Black to the previous one, but both books have various problems. I hope the next one will be better.

What other novels are there about Pokémon cheating in another world? I've seen Elfland and the town.

The human race and the alien beasts were one on one, and the human race never lost.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

The first 200 chapters are okay, but the rest are watery and boring.