Lord of the World, Starting as a Daoist Acolyte

The protagonist supports countless thousands of people in his small world, but as a result, he has to hire people through dental clinics for home life. Are all the people in my little world a master? Why do you work so hard to support tens of thousands or millions of people?

The subject matter is obviously very good, but I don't know why the results are so bad. Write less nonsense. It's boring to read too many words and inks. Even the free ones can't stand it anymore. The freshness of the subject matter is what keeps me reading.

I don't understand how such a good subject could be written like this

Since the growth of the set world has nothing to do with the level of the world owner, what is the purpose of opening up the world and spending endless resources to cultivate the world? All kinds of good luck rush to the protagonist and fill the small world, just to show off in front of others? Weaknesses and shortcomings are also a resource for showing off? Is it an unknown pleasure to keep suppressing the protagonist's level?

Either be stubborn to the end, or be reckless to the end. As a result, the protagonist is not rash when he should be rash, and not stoic when he should be. Since you are starting to take the path of the academy, you should be reckless to the end and be extremely talented. Some of them are here to invest. After all, how expensive can primary resources be? If you give it to an obvious talent, a little reward later can be higher than the initial investment. You already said that this academy is in the top three, and if you want to compete for the first place, it is normal for an obvious genius to take a gamble. Or just stay the course, be a lone wolf, and open other lines. The main character turned out to be the most unlikable approach. Don't show it when you should show it, and the waves will fly when you shouldn't show it

I have never seen a son question his father: "Actually, I am very surprised, how did you become my father?"

In the first chapter of the game, poison was released, what age is this? In the end, it was relying on goldfinger to make a comeback, which was nothing. Can't a new author wake up normally? He has to do it in a flashy way.

I don't know if the author has an outline. At present, the world level of the main world does not seem to be very high. In the cultivation system, the highest level should be around the golden elixir to Nascent Soul. In prehistoric times, it should not reach immortality. If the protagonist enters the cultivation of immortality in the middle of the world and walks on the line of prehistoric times, then he should be the boss of the main world. Should he step out of the main world next or how to write? Moreover, Honghuang's status is not low. Whether you want to write about self-detachment or control of rules, the protagonist cannot be inferior to the existence in his own world. Have the authors considered the original rules of the main world? I hope the author has his own thoughts and considerations now, otherwise he will become a eunuch if he finds that the writing is crooked and difficult to undo.

I can't understand, I don't practice, I don't farm, I don't manage, I don't know what I'm doing, I have a headache

A creative novel, but the author likes Che Zhuluan's talk too much and the word count seriously affects the rhythm and mood of reading 😒